Writing us as a mermaid and a shipwrecked sailor isn't going to make me enjoy this, author...
...fine, maybe I enjoy it a little bit
...I'm not sure I can even begin to describe this fic, but it's certainly good. It's like... Y'know Metropolis, by Thea Harbou? Pretty much that.
“Not a promise, not an oath, or a malediction or a curse. Inevitable." - Taylor Hebertoh dear god no
keep it away from me.. keep everything away from me
"There's not a girl alive who wouldn't be happy being called cute." ~Tamamo-no-Maejohn madden john madden john madden john madden
The fact that only 140 characters are allowed here is honestly so disappointing to me.Football!
The concept of us playing Moonbase Alpha I can get behind, but the sex is shoehorned
I now go by Graf von Tirol.How many fics of us are there going to be?
You know, I have to wonder why Pit is obsessed with this site. It’s gonna ruin his life!again!? THIS SOON!? WHY
"There's not a girl alive who wouldn't be happy being called cute." ~Tamamo-no-Mae...I liked the part where we watched MLP, but this fic is overwise bad.
You know, I have to wonder why Pit is obsessed with this site. It’s gonna ruin his life!... Now this is weird - especially the stuff with the shampoo bottle.
"Did you expect somebody else?"I'm not going into detail about this.
It features futa.
The fact that only 140 characters are allowed here is honestly so disappointing to me.A surprisingly gentle setpiece fic in 19th century Austria. The author really did do the research, but the fic is merely 'okay'.
The Ninja Sex Party pun is rather painful...
edited 18th May '15 10:00:28 PM by EarlOfSandvich
I now go by Graf von Tirol.Can we agree to murder the author? How do you want to?
...No. Don't even try to justify that fic.
The fact that only 140 characters are allowed here is honestly so disappointing to me....Fuck my life already.
Creator of the Avatar Arena and its Discord server.Uhh... that's not something I'd do... >_>
I now go by Graf von Tirol.Whats with all the sound effects?
Goddamn it I'm a cat person again.
The fact that only 140 characters are allowed here is honestly so disappointing to me.ANOTHER SEQUEL TO THIS?!?!?
You know, I have to wonder why Pit is obsessed with this site. It’s gonna ruin his life!I liked the part where we played Smash Bros, but that's about it. Then it just got disturbing.
"Thanks for the lesson. But I don't need you to tell me who I am."This is entirely inappropriate! The author best hope that they never come within stabbing distance of me.
Come, elf man, we must find a writer to stab.
The fact that only 140 characters are allowed here is honestly so disappointing to me.The author is really torturing the English language in this fic to try to recreate Lai's style, (not to mention mine when I get going in proper English) and can't seem to move beyond that to get any kind of believable spark going between the characters. I couldn't be bothered to finish it after a couple of pages of that.
... well, there were some good scenes of bonding over role playing, but aside from that, it was very meh.
edited 19th May '15 2:34:03 PM by TheWanderer
| Wandering, but not lost. | If people bring so much courage to this world...◊ |Ugh
I just wish it wasn't so bbooooooorrrrriiiinnnggg
"There's not a girl alive who wouldn't be happy being called cute." ~Tamamo-no-Mae
Errrrgh... just why?
I now go by Graf von Tirol.