Whoah, i'm not sadistic like that. Usually
And I am not sadistic like that, ever.
Except only, and only if I really hate the person involved.
That's not the case here.
"Please crush me with your heels Esdeath-sama!Well, the BDSM angle is new, I guess, but... No.
“Not a promise, not an oath, or a malediction or a curse. Inevitable." - Taylor HebertWhy am I pegging Tojin while he begs me to stop?
Author, you're sick.
"Did you expect somebody else?"(aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa)
Yeah, seconded. That's some disturbing shit, especially given the age difference.
“Not a promise, not an oath, or a malediction or a curse. Inevitable." - Taylor HebertThis is so crackish, since I barely even know this guy.
So I'm hugging Ichigo Pocky, and we're watching a film together. This one's... pretty good, and I know it's not the same author as before since we mention Ichigo Montoya and I mention how I had a date with him in Cannes, and how that one was relatively innocent and how this one doesn't seem to want to go too far.
... The author seems to have taken their time to make us all relatively in character, so I can't complain, especially for how clean it is in comparison to others with this pairing.
"Did you expect somebody else?"Us, in an orgy with Tegan & Sara. Well thats... something.
...why do you keep insisting on pairing me with her when we barely know each other?
"Please crush me with your heels Esdeath-sama!Uh-huh
well you see
just.. no.
"There's not a girl alive who wouldn't be happy being called cute." ~Tamamo-no-MaeThat was... Surprisingly fun. Makes me wonder why there was even sex in it to begin with the adventure comedy could have held it up on its own, and the sex just seemed out of place.
D'awwwwww. I don't usually read hurt/comfort, but that was adorable.
“Not a promise, not an oath, or a malediction or a curse. Inevitable." - Taylor HebertIt's more of a pre-slash, but it's surprisingly okay.
Creator of the Avatar Arena and its Discord server.Well, time to hit the Brain Bleach.
... No, this is not legal
Eeeer, excuse me?
"Please crush me with your heels Esdeath-sama!... well, that was unexpected. And while the writing was nothing special, I was pleasantly surprised that the (American) author knew that Portuguese and not Spanish is the language of Brazil, so a minor point there. And the communication troubles the characters had reminds me that someday I need have to learn more Portuguese than just the fun swear words I picked up from Dan.
| Wandering, but not lost. | If people bring so much courage to this world...◊ |where did the ink come from
why was there a book burning
who was the man in the suit
"There's not a girl alive who wouldn't be happy being called cute." ~Tamamo-no-MaeWell, time to take a bath in Brain Bleach.
That was... oddly sweet. And here I thought all fics for this pairing were shite.
Incest? Hopey would sadly approve.
edited 5th Mar '15 9:12:47 PM by IchigoPockyChama
Ah nice, a friendship fic for a change, and it doesn't antagonize Tortle for once.
I now go by Graf von Tirol.That was wrong on too many levels to count. The issues with age, Character Derailment, and people's issues and lives being spontaneously cured by sex, (and their entire personalities being changed afterwards into happy WASPs with conventional US values) was just scratching the surface of what's wrong.
Not only was it a bad story, it makes me hope the writer wises up before having sex or relationships, (right now it's pretty obvious that they're completely ignorant of both) because otherwise they might be in for a rude awakening if they're still this naive when that time comes.
... the story almost had me enjoying it and the character interactions until the first sex scene. Then it did the literary equivalent of a car going right off a bridge and into a river.
Still, the author has some talent and probably needs to write more to improve the final product.
edited 5th Mar '15 9:33:52 PM by TheWanderer
| Wandering, but not lost. | If people bring so much courage to this world...◊ |WHY WAS G-MAN THERE
WHY WERE THERE PONIES
WHYYYYYY
“Not a promise, not an oath, or a malediction or a curse. Inevitable." - Taylor Hebert
Perhaps you actually target Anything That Moves and you're not just bi...
The author seems to know you well.
Creator of the Avatar Arena and its Discord server.