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* GirlsLove: [[spoiler: Asuka and Rei]] in ''Hellstorm II[[strike: : [[OddlyNamedSequel2ElectricBoogaloo ElectricBoogaloo]]]]''. Later, it is revealed that [[spoiler: Jezebel and Death]] used to be lovers.
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%%** Also, JustForPun: "asuka's in a comma"
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%%** Also, JustForPun: "asuka's in a comma"
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ZCE comment-outs.
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* BackFromTheDead: Happens constantly.
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* ChickMagnet: Issei turns out to be one of these in ''Issei Meets The Sailir Scout Girls''.
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* EarthShatteringKaboom: At the end of the original.
* EyeBeams: Ramama.
* EyeBeams: Ramama.
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* FanService: Actually foreshadowed as such.
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* {{God}}: Shows up in ''Hellstorm II[[strike: : [[OddlyNamedSequel2ElectricBoogaloo ElectricBoogaloo]]]]''.
* {{Gorn}}
* GottaCatchEmAll: The plot of most of ''Hellstorm II[[strike: : [[OddlyNamedSequel2ElectricBoogaloo ElectricBoogaloo]]]]''.
* GratuitousJapanese
* {{Gorn}}
* GottaCatchEmAll: The plot of most of ''Hellstorm II[[strike: : [[OddlyNamedSequel2ElectricBoogaloo ElectricBoogaloo]]]]''.
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* HighPressureBlood
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* LargeHam: Everyone, but especially the Devil and his minions.
** ChewingTheScenery
** EvilLaugh
** ChewingTheScenery
** EvilLaugh
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* NoPunctuationPeriod: Frequently.
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* SelfInsertFic
* WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma: Many, many examples.
** Also, JustForPun: "asuka's in a comma"
* WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma: Many, many examples.
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* EverythingsBetterWithPenguins: "AND PENPEN of course!!!!!"
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* YaoiGuys: Issei and Shinji. Also [[spoiler: Issei and PJ, [[CrackPairing the Devil and Gendo]].]]
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Spawned a sequel, ''Hellstorm II[[strike: :[[OddlyNamedSequel2ElectricBoogaloo ElectricBoogaloo]]'' (and the beginnings of another, now seemingly lost forever) and several spinoffs including ''Issei Strikes Back'' and ''Issei [[JustForFun/XMeetsY Meets]] [[Anime/SailorMoon The Sailir Scout Girls]]'' (sic).
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Spawned a sequel, ''Hellstorm II[[strike: :[[OddlyNamedSequel2ElectricBoogaloo ElectricBoogaloo]]'' ElectricBoogaloo]]]]'' (and the beginnings of another, now seemingly lost forever) and several spinoffs including ''Issei Strikes Back'' and ''Issei [[JustForFun/XMeetsY Meets]] [[Anime/SailorMoon The Sailir Scout Girls]]'' (sic).
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Spawned a sequel, ''Hellstorm II[[strike: : :[[OddlyNamedSequel2ElectricBoogaloo ElectricBoogaloo]]'' (and the beginnings of another, now seemingly lost forever) and several spinoffs including ''Issei Strikes Back'' and ''Issei [[JustForFun/XMeetsY Meets]] [[Anime/SailorMoon The Sailir Scout Girls]]'' (sic).
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* BigBad: [[{{Satan}} The Devil]]. [[spoiler: Killed at the end of the original ''Hellstorm'', but comes back for more in ''Hellstorm II[[strike: : ElectricBoogaloo]]'']]
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* BigBad: [[{{Satan}} The Devil]]. [[spoiler: Killed at the end of the original ''Hellstorm'', but comes back for more in ''Hellstorm II[[strike: : ElectricBoogaloo]]'']][[OddlyNamedSequel2ElectricBoogaloo ElectricBoogaloo]]'']]]]
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* GirlsLove: [[spoiler: Asuka and Rei]] in ''Hellstorm II[[strike: : ElectricBoogaloo]]''. Later, it is revealed that [[spoiler: Jezebel and Death]] used to be lovers.
* {{God}}: Shows up in ''Hellstorm II[[strike: : ElectricBoogaloo]]''.
* {{God}}: Shows up in ''Hellstorm II[[strike: : ElectricBoogaloo]]''.
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* GirlsLove: [[spoiler: Asuka and Rei]] in ''Hellstorm II[[strike: : ElectricBoogaloo]]''.[[OddlyNamedSequel2ElectricBoogaloo ElectricBoogaloo]]]]''. Later, it is revealed that [[spoiler: Jezebel and Death]] used to be lovers.
* {{God}}: Shows up in ''Hellstorm II[[strike: :ElectricBoogaloo]]''.[[OddlyNamedSequel2ElectricBoogaloo ElectricBoogaloo]]]]''.
* {{God}}: Shows up in ''Hellstorm II[[strike: :
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* GottaCatchEmAll: The plot of most of ''Hellstorm II[[strike: : ElectricBoogaloo]]''.
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* GottaCatchEmAll: The plot of most of ''Hellstorm II[[strike: : ElectricBoogaloo]]''.[[OddlyNamedSequel2ElectricBoogaloo ElectricBoogaloo]]]]''.
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* TheMole: [[spoiler: Toshi]] in ''Hellstorm II[[strike: : ElectricBoogaloo]]''.
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* TheMole: [[spoiler: Toshi]] in ''Hellstorm II[[strike: : ElectricBoogaloo]]''.[[OddlyNamedSequel2ElectricBoogaloo ElectricBoogaloo]]]]''.
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* GirlOnGirlIsHot: Dan and Tsuneo sure think so when we get to [[spoiler: Asuka and Rei]]'s sex scene in ''Hellstorm II[[strike: : ElectricBoogaloo]]''.
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* GirlOnGirlIsHot: Dan and Tsuneo sure think so when we get to [[spoiler: Asuka and Rei]]'s sex scene in ''Hellstorm II[[strike: : ElectricBoogaloo]]''.:[[OddlyNamedSequel2ElectricBoogaloo ElectricBoogaloo]]]]''.
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* TheUnReveal: Not surprisingly, the audience figured out that [[spoiler: Toshi]] was TheMole fairly early on in ''Hellstorm II[[strike: : [[ElectricBoogaloo Electric]] [[OverlyLongGag Boogaloo]]]]''.
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* TheUnReveal: Not surprisingly, the audience figured out that [[spoiler: Toshi]] was TheMole fairly early on in ''Hellstorm II[[strike: : [[ElectricBoogaloo [[OddlyNamedSequel2ElectricBoogaloo Electric]] [[OverlyLongGag Boogaloo]]]]''.
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* EveryoneIsGay: Except Misato and Hyuuga. And maybe Toshi.
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* ButtMonkey: Woodie the demon.
* CaptainObvious: Misato.
* CaptainObvious: Misato.
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* KillItWithFire: The demon Gapos. Defeated by Issei by [[TechnoBabble setting the coordinates of his knife to]] [[YouFailPhysicsForever "-10000 degress"]].
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* KillItWithFire: The demon Gapos. Defeated by Issei by [[TechnoBabble setting the coordinates of his knife to]] [[YouFailPhysicsForever [[ArtisticLicensePhysics "-10000 degress"]].
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* HowDoIUsedTense: Constantly, just like every other bad spelling/grammar trope.
---> "Finally Shinji sayed "I've have enough of this!!!""
---> "Finally Shinji sayed "I've have enough of this!!!""
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Spawned a sequel, ''Hellstorm II[[strike: : ElectricBoogaloo]]'' (and the beginnings of another, now seemingly lost forever) and several spinoffs including ''Issei Strikes Back'' and ''Issei [[XMeetsY Meets]] [[Anime/SailorMoon The Sailir Scout Girls]]'' (sic).
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Spawned a sequel, ''Hellstorm II[[strike: : ElectricBoogaloo]]'' (and the beginnings of another, now seemingly lost forever) and several spinoffs including ''Issei Strikes Back'' and ''Issei [[XMeetsY [[JustForFun/XMeetsY Meets]] [[Anime/SailorMoon The Sailir Scout Girls]]'' (sic).
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It\'s a permanent red link.
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* NaughtyTentacles:
---> '''Rebecca''': "The vine is planning to appear in a special version of Overfiend...I can't believe I just said that."
---> '''Rebecca''': "The vine is planning to appear in a special version of Overfiend...I can't believe I just said that."
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Spawned a sequel, ''Hellstorm II[[strike: : ElectricBoogaloo]]'' (and the beginnings of another, now seemingly lost forever) and several spinoffs including ''Issei Strikes Back'' and ''Issei [[XMeetsY Meets]] [[SailorMoon [[Anime/SailorMoon The Sailir Scout Girls]]'' (sic).
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* {{Crossover}}: With SailorMoon, in ''Issei Meets The Sailir Scout Girls''.
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* {{Crossover}}: With SailorMoon, Anime/SailorMoon, in ''Issei Meets The Sailir Scout Girls''.
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* FandomSpecificPlot: The "new pilot who is amazing at everything and hooks up with one of the existing pilots" plot is very common in Eva fanfics (and can be seen in many of the other fics [[{{MSTing}} MSTed]] by Elmer Studios.
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* FandomSpecificPlot: The "new pilot who is amazing at everything and hooks up with one of the existing pilots" plot is very common in Eva fanfics (and can be seen in many of the other fics [[{{MSTing}} MSTed]] by Elmer Studios.Studios).
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''Hellstorm Evangelion'' is an (in)famous NeonGenesisEvangelion [[FanFics fanfic]] created by one Issei Mataloun.
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''Hellstorm Evangelion'' is an (in)famous NeonGenesisEvangelion Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion [[FanFics fanfic]] created by one Issei Mataloun.
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* MemeticOutfit: Issei's "rage against the machineshirt" (sic).
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* MemeticOutfit: IconicOutfit: Issei's "rage against the machineshirt" (sic).
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* ShoutOut: To ManosTheHandsOfFate with the demon [[strike: Torgo]] Atogro.
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* ShoutOut: To ManosTheHandsOfFate ''Film/ManosTheHandsOfFate'' with the demon [[strike: Torgo]] Atogro.
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* DidNotDoTheResearch: Tokyo-3 should be a hole in the ground, Misato and Hyuuga were not a couple and were nowhere near becoming one at the point where the fic takes place, the Angels were not literally sent by the Judeo-Christian {{God}}...
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Rei]] sacrifices [[spoiler: her]] life to save Issei at the end of the original fic. [[spoiler: She]] gets [[IGotBetter better]].
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Rei]] sacrifices [[spoiler: her]] life to save Issei at the end of the original fic. [[spoiler: She]] gets [[IGotBetter better]].better.
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Apparently [[spoiler: Gendo]] was a demon in disguise, in league with the Devil and masterminding the destruction of Earth. Who knew?
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* AuthorAppeal: As is par for the course in bad fanfic, Issei and Shinji listen to and watch what can be surmised to be the author's favourite music and anime series, despite the story taking place in 2014 when they would all be old hat and probably not on TV.
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* AuthorAppeal: As is par for the course in bad fanfic, Issei and Shinji listen to and watch what can be surmised to be the author's favourite favorite music and anime series, despite the story taking place in 2014 when they would all be old hat and probably not on TV.
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* CanonDefilement: Oh boy.
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* CrazyAwesome: It approaches this in its randomness in places, but the shoddy execution dooms it to unintentional SoBadItsGood status at best.
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Many, often involving unfortunate spelling mistakes. Some examples...
** From the original:
---> '''Issei''': "The devil has been our enenma for a long long time"
** And in the sequel:
---> '''{{God}}''': "My children, you have invited me to this concil which we shall talk of an issue of [[TheLoinsSleepTonight impotance]]."
** From the original:
---> '''Issei''': "The devil has been our enenma for a long long time"
** And in the sequel:
---> '''{{God}}''': "My children, you have invited me to this concil which we shall talk of an issue of [[TheLoinsSleepTonight impotance]]."
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* MartyStu
** AuthorAvatar
** GodModeSue
** RelationshipSue: For Shinji.
** AuthorAvatar
** GodModeSue
** RelationshipSue: For Shinji.
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* [[http://www.heavens-feel.com/blog/archives/232 Issei Strikes Back Audiobook]]
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* [[http://www.''[[http://www.heavens-feel.com/blog/archives/232 Issei Strikes Back Audiobook]]Audiobook]]''
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* "[[http://www.[[http://www.heavens-feel.com/blog/archives/232 Issei Strikes Back Audiobook]]"Audiobook]]
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* "[http://www."[[http://www.heavens-feel.com/blog/archives/232 Issei Strikes Back Audiobook]]"
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* ''[[http://pamachu-productions.blogspot.com/2011/05/episode-two-issei-meets-sailir-scout.html Issei Meets the Sailir Scout Girls Audiobook]]''
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Feed Me is now Chewing The Scenery.
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** FeedMe
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** FeedMeChewingTheScenery
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---> Then issei shot him in the stomach and his guts and intestnes flew up to the seeling and splatterecd all of the place. He had killed him!
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---> Then issei shot him in the stomach and his guts and intestnes flew up to the seeling and splatterecd all of the place. He had killed him!him!.
* CasanovaWannabe: Toshi's attempt to hit on Asuka and Rei.
* CasanovaWannabe: Toshi's attempt to hit on Asuka and Rei.
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* LeisureSuitLarry: Toshi's attempt to hit on Asuka and Rei.