Line #32 FanFic/HellstormEvangelion


1	''Hellstorm Evangelion'' is an (in)famous Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion [[FanFics fanfic]] created by one Issei Mataloun.
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3	Spawned a sequel, ''Hellstorm II[[strike: :[[OddlyNamedSequel2ElectricBoogaloo ElectricBoogaloo]]]]'' (and the beginnings of another, now seemingly lost forever) and several spinoffs including ''Issei Strikes Back'' and ''Issei [[JustForFun/XMeetsY Meets]] [[Anime/SailorMoon The Sailir Scout Girls]]'' (sic).
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5	All of the above except the noted second sequel can be read in [[{{MSTing}} MSTed]] form at [[http://www.heavens-feel.com/elmer/elmer.htm Elmer Studios]] (link goes to a mirror, the old site was on the now-defunct Geocities), along with many other Eva fanfics. Links to the individual {{MSTing}}s (in order of posting):
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7	* [[http://www.heavens-feel.com/elmer/hell1.txt Original fic, chapters 1-3]]
8	* [[http://www.heavens-feel.com/elmer/hell2.txt Original fic, chapters 4-6 and epilogue]]
9	* ''[[http://www.heavens-feel.com/elmer/evafic.txt Issei Strikes Back]]''
10	* ''[[http://www.heavens-feel.com/elmer/hellstorm2.txt Hellstorm II]]''
11	* ''[[http://www.heavens-feel.com/elmer/sissei.txt Issei Meets The Sailir Scout Girls]]''
12	* ''[[http://www.heavens-feel.com/blog/archives/1 Hellstorm Evangelion Audiobook]]''
13	* ''[[http://www.heavens-feel.com/blog/archives/207 Hellstorm Evangelion II Audiobook]]''
14	* ''[[http://www.heavens-feel.com/blog/archives/232 Issei Strikes Back Audiobook]]''
15	* ''[[http://pamachu-productions.blogspot.com/2011/05/episode-two-issei-meets-sailir-scout.html Issei Meets the Sailir Scout Girls Audiobook]]''
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17	'''This fanfic series provides examples of:'''
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19	* AsHimself: In addition to [[AuthorAvatar Issei]], PJ, Toshi, Kimmy and Evan are all acquaintances of Issei-the-author, allegedly. Given what happens to the first two, one wonders if RealLifeWritesThePlot.
20	* AuthorAppeal: As is par for the course in bad fanfic, Issei and Shinji listen to and watch what can be surmised to be the author's favorite music and anime series, despite the story taking place in 2014 when they would all be old hat and probably not on TV.
21	%%* BackFromTheDead: Happens constantly.
22	* BigBad: [[{{Satan}} The Devil]]. [[spoiler: Killed at the end of the original ''Hellstorm'', but comes back for more in ''Hellstorm II[[strike: : [[OddlyNamedSequel2ElectricBoogaloo ElectricBoogaloo]]'']]]]
23	---> "Wow look that thing! IT'S HUGE! AND UGLY!"
24	** Also the narration at times:
25	---> Then issei shot him in the stomach and his guts and intestnes flew up to the seeling and splatterecd all of the place. He had killed him!.
26	* CasanovaWannabe: Toshi's attempt to hit on Asuka and Rei.
27	%%* ChickMagnet: Issei turns out to be one of these in ''Issei Meets The Sailir Scout Girls''.
28	* {{Crossover}}: With Anime/SailorMoon, in ''Issei Meets The Sailir Scout Girls''.
29	* DemonicPossession: [[spoiler: Asuka, Gendo and Kaji.]]
30	* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: "Shinji didn't look at nhis dad....he HATED his dad! He didn'y want to look at him so he didn't."
31	%%* EarthShatteringKaboom: At the end of the original.
32	%%* EyeBeams: Ramama.
33	* FandomSpecificPlot: The "new pilot who is amazing at everything and hooks up with one of the existing pilots" plot is very common in Eva fanfics (and can be seen in many of the other fics [[{{MSTing}} MSTed]] by Elmer Studios).
34	%%* FanService: Actually foreshadowed as such.
35	%%* {{God}}: Shows up in ''Hellstorm II[[strike: : [[OddlyNamedSequel2ElectricBoogaloo ElectricBoogaloo]]]]''.
36	%%* {{Gorn}}
37	%%* GottaCatchEmAll: The plot of most of ''Hellstorm II[[strike: : [[OddlyNamedSequel2ElectricBoogaloo ElectricBoogaloo]]]]''.
38	%%* GratuitousJapanese
39	* GrimReaper: Death, complete with SinisterScythe. Slightly subverted when Death turns out to be [[spoiler: female]].
40	* HarmfulToMinors: Issei - both the character and the author - is/was allegedly 12 years old. The character lost his virginity (to [[spoiler: PJ]]) when they were both 10, has sex with Shinji, cheerfully engages in blood-spraying violence, etc.
41	* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Rei]] sacrifices [[spoiler: her]] life to save Issei at the end of the original fic. [[spoiler: She]] gets better.
42	%%* HighPressureBlood
43	* ImprobableAge: See HarmfulToMinors above (though arguably justified as [[spoiler: Issei is an angel]]).
44	* InfinityPlusOneSword: The Sword of Power [[MemeticMutation (TM)]] and Sword of Evil.
45	* InformedAttribute:
46	---> "he threw a dart at him but Fiore dodgetd it and sayed “You are a mighty warrair!”"
47	* KillItWithFire: The demon Gapos. Defeated by Issei by [[TechnoBabble setting the coordinates of his knife to]] [[ArtisticLicensePhysics "-10000 degress"]].
48	%%* LargeHam: Everyone, but especially the Devil and his minions.
49	%%** ChewingTheScenery
50	%%** EvilLaugh
51	* MadeOfExplodium: Everything and everyone. See also HighPressureBlood.
52	---> Isse got out the gun he shot [[spoiler: asuka]] with and sdayed "Up yours" and shot him. [[spoiler: Gendo's]] head exploded and blood went everywhere.
53	* MarsNeedsWomen: "I Love women and this one will be my bride and you cannoty have her!!!!!!!!! I AM MOXART!!!!!"
54	* TheMole: [[spoiler: Toshi]] in ''Hellstorm II[[strike: : [[OddlyNamedSequel2ElectricBoogaloo ElectricBoogaloo]]]]''.
55	%%* NoPunctuationPeriod: Frequently.
56	* OverNineThousand: "He was so mad that it made Shinji 1000000000 times stronger..."
57	* PoliceAreUseless: Against the Devil, yes, they certainly are.
58	---> "The police tryed to stop him, but [[RedshirtArmy they all died]]!!!!!!"
59	* PsychoExGirlfriend: [[spoiler: PJ]] in ''Issei Strikes Back'' is a male example.
60	* RougeAnglesOfSatin: Averted - Issei doesn't appear to have used a spellchecker at all, resulting in the fic being filled with completely non-existent words like "sayed" and "scareder".
61	%%* SelfInsertFic
62	%%* WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma: Many, many examples.
63	%%** "asuka's in a comma"
64	* WhyDontYaJustShootHim:
65	---> "Fiore and Issei struck they mighty karatae poses and tghen they jumped in the air and Issei took out his gun and BLEW Fiore’s head off!"
66	* [[spoiler: WingedHumanoid: Issei after TheReveal that he is an angel]].
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68	'''The Elmer Studios {{MSTing}}s provide examples of:'''
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70	* AndThereWasMuchRejoicing: When the audience see the title of chapter 6, [[TonightSomeoneDies Death of Issei]].
71	* BerserkButton: People not understanding Evangelion gets Tsuneo mad.
72	* GirlOnGirlIsHot: Dan and Tsuneo sure think so when we get to [[spoiler: Asuka and Rei]]'s sex scene in ''Hellstorm II[[strike: :[[OddlyNamedSequel2ElectricBoogaloo ElectricBoogaloo]]]]''.
73	---> '''Dan''': "Details! We want details!"
74	* IconicOutfit: Issei's "rage against the machineshirt" (sic).
75	* RunningGag:
76	** The Sword of Power (TM) and Sword of Evil (TM), to the point of MemeticMutation in later {{MSTing}}s.
77	** Continual [[LampshadeHanging lampshading]] of the unintentional DoubleEntendre inherent in things/people "coming out" in a fic with so much HoYay.
78	* ShoutOut: To ''Film/ManosTheHandsOfFate'' with the demon [[strike: Torgo]] Atogro.

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