FanficRecs Not Sure if Want? 5/10
I don't really know about it. It was okay through the Silver Millenium part, but when it got to the Modern Day section in the third chapter, F-bombs dropping everywhere, Makoto is an ACTUAL delinquent instead of just being mistaken for one for getting in fights, Ami is going to Mugen Academy for some reason, despite very obviously being in Usagi's school at the beginning of the canon series. Not to mention the whole thing with Ami finding him half dead in the middle of the street and dragging him home. Senshi!Ami I could see doing it the way she did, but Pre Senshi!Ami? Very hard to suspend my disbelief.
So long story short, I thought the Silver Millenium part was good, but the third chapter I would recommend a full rewrite, one that doesn't have all the characters going OOC.
FanficRecs Comment by Darth Lord
A concept you would have to read to believe. This story manages to do everything right, and then some. A must read for Sailor Moon and Naruto fans alike.
FanficRecs A swing and a miss
The concept is certainly interesting; Sailor Moon being fathered by Naruto as a result of Naruto being flung into the Silver Millennium, but the execution was just bad to me. The characterization of some of the characters rubs me the wrong way; turning Queen Serenity—-canonically a kind, loving mother and a benevolent queen—-into a cold, uncaring person who was basically a tyrant and Princess Serenity isn't much better or maybe worse. The portrayal of the Moon Kingdom also rubbed me the wrong way for the same reasons as he basically portrays the Kingdom as a world-conquering empire that treats humans as inferior beings. I feel like the author went out of his way to portray the characters of Sailor Moon in a worse way possible so that Naruto could come off as more badass and as a better character. Not to mention how Naruto basically steals the Scouts' thunder by pre-emptively taking out the Dark Kingdom. Yes, I know he does this to protect his little girl, but it still basically taking away what is canonically their victory to give to Naruto. I also find it ironic that Naruto bitches about the Moon Kingdom being a matriarchal society when one of the most common complaints about his manga is how the female characters, especially the most important ones, are nerfed in their development. With all the things the author got wrong with the SM canon, one has ton wonder if he's even a fan of it or not. Another review recommends this for both SM and Naruto fans, but speaking as a fan of both, I wouldn't recommend it at all; even a Naruto fan who'd never seen Sailor Moon would probably be disappointed by how OOC Naruto acts at times.