I don't really know about it. It was okay through the Silver Millenium part, but when it got to the Modern Day section in the third chapter, F-bombs dropping everywhere, Makoto is an ACTUAL delinquent instead of just being mistaken for one for getting in fights, Ami is going to Mugen Academy for some reason, despite very obviously being in Usagi's school at the beginning of the canon series. Not to mention the whole thing with Ami finding him half dead in the middle of the street and dragging him home. Senshi!Ami I could see doing it the way she did, but Pre Senshi!Ami? Very hard to suspend my disbelief.
So long story short, I thought the Silver Millenium part was good, but the third chapter I would recommend a full rewrite, one that doesn't have all the characters going OOC.
Not Sure if Want? 5/10
I don't really know about it. It was okay through the Silver Millenium part, but when it got to the Modern Day section in the third chapter, F-bombs dropping everywhere, Makoto is an ACTUAL delinquent instead of just being mistaken for one for getting in fights, Ami is going to Mugen Academy for some reason, despite very obviously being in Usagi's school at the beginning of the canon series. Not to mention the whole thing with Ami finding him half dead in the middle of the street and dragging him home. Senshi!Ami I could see doing it the way she did, but Pre Senshi!Ami? Very hard to suspend my disbelief.
So long story short, I thought the Silver Millenium part was good, but the third chapter I would recommend a full rewrite, one that doesn't have all the characters going OOC.