I liked it up until about halfway through chapter 5, when there is randomly an angel attack, which seemed out of place. Then Asuka is nearly killed, and ends up loosing an eye, along with gaining other scarring to Wangt about. That kind of thing is done better in other fanfics, like many post-impact fics, and seemed tacked on in this case. I would have rather seen their relationship progress from sleeping together, instead of timeskipping 4 years and never really closing off. Chapter 7 was meta and rather funny, though. And probably not meant to be canon to the rest of the story.
FanficRecs Out of Place Ending
I liked it up until about halfway through chapter 5, when there is randomly an angel attack, which seemed out of place. Then Asuka is nearly killed, and ends up loosing an eye, along with gaining other scarring to Wangt about. That kind of thing is done better in other fanfics, like many post-impact fics, and seemed tacked on in this case. I would have rather seen their relationship progress from sleeping together, instead of timeskipping 4 years and never really closing off. Chapter 7 was meta and rather funny, though. And probably not meant to be canon to the rest of the story.