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The OC doesn't immediately get eaten by a youkai upon setting foot in Gensokyo. 0 out of 10, unrealistic.
(That was a joke.)
But overall, this fanfic is nice, if a bit plain and generic, especially since it came from a harsh literary connoisseur who once created a four-hour-long Walfas video about the 'evils' of terrible self-insert wish fulfillment fanfiction.
Fails to distinguish itself in ideas, characterization, and prose from the run of the mill Touhou OC fic. From someone who is so eager to offer writing advice, this fic was stunningly mediocre.
This story, sadly discontinued, is actually crossover with Labyrinth, or a mirror of the film. Yukari takes on role of the Goblin King, the premise - Sarah saving her sibling who doesn't even want saving - is the same. It would be great to see where the story would go ...
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