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SpeakertoYoukai Since: Aug, 2013
01/14/2020 10:04:48 •••

Average...only average

Fails to distinguish itself in ideas, characterization, and prose from the run of the mill Touhou OC fic. From someone who is so eager to offer writing advice, this fic was stunningly mediocre.

SpazMobile Since: Sep, 2012
07/30/2014 00:00:00

Sorry about that, but I can still change it. Plus, the fic is unfinished: there's still time to improve upon it.


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