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Fails to distinguish itself in ideas, characterization, and prose from the run of the mill Touhou OC fic. From someone who is so eager to offer writing advice, this fic was stunningly mediocre.
Sorry about that, but I can still change it. Plus, the fic is unfinished: there's still time to improve upon it.
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