A terrible power fantasy fic. Honestly, I wanted to like this, really I do. It does what a fixfic should be, or rather it attempts to, but the execution is all over the place and the power levels aren't adjusted to make it a readable story. I like FGO and all, but this fic pays absolutely no respect for Worm's themes and runs them roughshod.
The worst of it is that Taylor is an unrecognizable Mary Sue - I could accept it if she was just more confident in herself after the events of FGO part 1, but going as far as to be charged by multiple Grails? To be capable of fighting in the frontlines, even against Leviathan? Give her more flaws, have her demonstrate caution, and take the story more seriously damn it.
A terrible power fantasy fic. Honestly, I wanted to like this, really I do. It does what a fixfic should be, or rather it attempts to, but the execution is all over the place and the power levels aren't adjusted to make it a readable story. I like FGO and all, but this fic pays absolutely no respect for Worm's themes and runs them roughshod. The worst of it is that Taylor is an unrecognizable Mary Sue - I could accept it if she was just more confident in herself after the events of FGO part 1, but going as far as to be charged by multiple Grails? To be capable of fighting in the frontlines, even against Leviathan? Give her more flaws, have her demonstrate caution, and take the story more seriously damn it.