SpectralTime
Since: Apr, 2009
03/04/2020 00:00:00
...Your language improves as it goes on, but holy crap, fix that opening sentence.
SpectralTime
Since: Apr, 2009
03/04/2020 00:00:00
...Your language improves as it goes on, but holy crap, fix that opening sentence.
Cornholio4
Since: Feb, 2016
03/08/2020 00:00:00
Sorry not good with grammar
VoidWhisperers
Since: Nov, 2019
03/17/2020 00:00:00
I\'m in agreement that it\'s an enjoyable series. It\'s not how I would treat Tony personally, but when I want to see him get a taste of the medicine that his horny teenage fangirls are all too eager to dish out on Team Cap and their supporters, it\'s an immediate go-to story.
If there's anything more important than my ego around, I want it caught and shot right now. - Zaphod Beeblebox
LordYAM
Since: Jan, 2015
05/24/2021 00:00:00
The story is awful. It falls into the exact same trap as Team Iron Man fanfics and that just makes things worse.
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I personally love this series
It’s an answer to the many Team Cap bashing stories with arguments I don’t get. I know it’s very one sided but so do most team iron man fics. While I prefer Steve, I do like Tony but he does have his problems and trauma but I think he was very flawed and his mistakes don’t get brought up much as often as Team Cap’s supposed mistakes. It’s a matter of preference and opinions. Steve didn’t know for sure Bucky killed the Starks and only suspected without proof to give to Tony and he had other pressing matters. Tony was also a horribly relaxed mentor to Peter and only directly get involved when Peter made mistakes that were caused by Tony making it seem like he was outright dismissing him.
I will fully admit this series is not for everyone but it’s some fun if you don’t think it goes too far in the other direction.