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catmuto Since: Nov, 2012
02/01/2016 06:15:37 •••

Not Even So Bad, It's Good

I'm not a shipper of Zutara, nor am I a huge fan of the series to begin with. But this is so blatantly going against canon - which is already a pet-peeve of mine. If you don't like canon pairings, fine (I tend to not like them, either), but you could at least try to maintain a certain amount of dignity during.

The characters are all bland, have no personality and are, frankly, idiots. This whole thing is based off of an Idiot Plot.

The art is horrible. While using real photographs of places for background can work alongside drawn character, it doesn't here. The repeated tracing of stills from the show is horrible. It barely allows for movement in the characters, slightly altered facial expressions look like they always convey the wrong emotion and the few times when Diaz actually draws something herself and doesn't trace, it stands out like a sore thumb and looks bad.

Why didn't she just write fanfiction instead of forcing this badly done comic onto the world? Oh, right. Because her lines suck and she doesn't know how to properly spell or seems all that familiar with proper English grammar.

Also, reading the text is difficult. Not just because of the bad grammar, but also because it tends to result in Wall of Text Exposition and no way to make it stand out from the backgrounds properly. I don't know what program was used for this, but it obviously didn't have a 'Stroke' option or something to make the text stand out.

This isn't even a Guilty Pleasure or something to look at, so you can laugh at it and have a good time. It's boring, when it isn't tediously stupid because of stupidity.


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