compass96
Since: Jun, 2013
01/20/2014 00:00:00
Well, it changes. She gives reasons why Bunny doesn't like Jack and they are plot relevant. (hope replying isn't out of protocol, kinda new here) Also, i don't think that Bunny is put down for not liking Jack but rather for not apologizing.
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I liked this fic, I really did. In the beginning it was well-written, not out of character, and provided reasonable explanations for a lot of things in the movie. However, as I got further and further into the story, I felt as if many of the other characters were being overshadowed by Jack. Bunnymund, especially, is pretty constantly put down for not liking Jack and vice-versa (with what I felt were insufficient in-story reasons). It got kind of annoying after awhile. I wouldn't call it character-bashing, however, because it never gets to that level.
Likewise, I wouldn't call Jack a mary sue either. Despite the fact that a lot of characters seem to like him or want to help him at first glance, he does have his flaws and issues. All I'm going to say is that the author is skirting the line.
As per the title of my review, your mileage may vary on this fic based on how well you personally tolerate the flaws I mentioned. If you do read it, you are in for a fairly well-written, fun romp with a few issues in character development.