SpectralTime
Since: Apr, 2009
Jul 4th 2022 at 2:48:32 PM
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I will once again request input before unilaterally rewriting or removing it, but rewrite or remove it I will if my concerns are not addressed here.
SpectralTime
Since: Apr, 2009
...Alright. Can we have the conversation here then?
Again, as written, the Broken Base entry clearly takes a side regarding a debatable topic. Within the context of the original Japanese script, Okino continues cross-dressing long after his identity has been exposed in situations where it doesn't offer utility to him and enters the simulation in a female body in the ending. The dub script isn't inventing the genderqueer stuff out of thin air, and saying it is borders on a disingenuous misreading of the evidence to push a narrative of politically-motivated mis-dubbing, and further as part of an ongoing, misguided push for literalist translation with ugly roots and a negative endgame.
It's also poorly-written, rambling, and repetitive.
If it must remain, I want to rewrite it entirely to address these two points.
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