The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
OK, I really think it was a bad move to spoiler-tag everything about Motoko's fifth Split Personality, Zero, since she already debuts by the end of Volume 1, and we're already on Volume 12's first chapter. However, due to inexperience, I'm not quite sure which should be safe to take out of the spoiler tags. Any help?
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Ah, right. My mistake. It's been a while since I checked the older volumes. And seeing that it seems the manga actually finishes in its 12th volume, we could say that Zero debuts about 1/4 into the story...
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Perhaps the three fathers should have their own section as well?
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Good suggestion, but that would first require that we gather at least three tropes per father that are fairly specific to them. They're aren't carbon copies of each other, after all.
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The character sheet looks good so far, but there are a few tropes in the "other characters" section that should probably be moved back to the main page since they apply to multiple characters. I've shuffled a few tropes that apply more to the HiFuMi to their own section, and I'll do a little work with the bottom section after I post this.
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Well, just make sure you keep them here too. Not every "multiple characters"-applying trope needs to be in the main article, however.
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One, Cute Shotaro Boy has been renamed to Adorably Precocious Child. Two, this trope is highly misused and this example does not apply.
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