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* However, three years of FriendlessBackground nerd leaves her unprepared for the harshness of life and makes her naive and easily duped.
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* However, three years of FriendlessBackground nerd leaves her unprepared for the harshness of life and makes her naive and easily duped. Still, this is not her fault.
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Another aesop I might think about is something along the line of \'Popular things and \'cool/hip\' things isn\'t as glamorous as you think\', since Saki didn\'t realize that what she think would be cool and adult redirects her life to hell. But I heard somewhere that this may not be accidental at all, it\'s on purpose because [=ShindoL=] wants to highlight the harsh reality of Japanese lifestyle that can be brutal. So... yeah. (But if this helps you form up a way to frame the BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor for aesop, please do)
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Another aesop I might think about is something along the line of \\\'Popular things and \\\'cool/hip\\\' things aren\\\'t as glamorous as you think\\\', since Saki didn\\\'t realize that what she think would be cool and adult redirects her life to hell. But I heard somewhere that this may not be accidental at all, it\\\'s on purpose because [=ShindoL=] wants to highlight the harsh reality of Japanese lifestyle that can be brutal. So... yeah. (But if this helps you form up a way to frame the BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor for aesop, please do)
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Another aesop I might think about is something along the line of \'Popular things and \'cool/hip\' things isn\'t as glamorous as you think\', since Saki didn\'t realize that what she think would be cool and adult redirects her life to hell. But I heard somewhere that this may not be accidental at all, it\'s on purpose because [=ShindoL=] wants to highlight the harsh reality of Japanese lifestyle that can be brutal. So... yeah. (But if this helps you form up a way to frame the BeCarefulWhatYouWish for aesop, please do)
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Another aesop I might think about is something along the line of \\\'Popular things and \\\'cool/hip\\\' things isn\\\'t as glamorous as you think\\\', since Saki didn\\\'t realize that what she think would be cool and adult redirects her life to hell. But I heard somewhere that this may not be accidental at all, it\\\'s on purpose because [=ShindoL=] wants to highlight the harsh reality of Japanese lifestyle that can be brutal. So... yeah. (But if this helps you form up a way to frame the BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor for aesop, please do)
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Another aesop I might think about is something along the line of \'Popular things and \'cool/hip\' things isn\'t as glamorous as you think\', since Saki didn\'t realize that what she think would be cool and adult redirects her life to hell. But I heard somewhere that this may not be accidental at all, it\'s on purpose because [=ShindoL=] wants to highlight the harsh reality of Japanese lifestyle that can be brutal. So... yeah.
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Another aesop I might think about is something along the line of \\\'Popular things and \\\'cool/hip\\\' things isn\\\'t as glamorous as you think\\\', since Saki didn\\\'t realize that what she think would be cool and adult redirects her life to hell. But I heard somewhere that this may not be accidental at all, it\\\'s on purpose because [=ShindoL=] wants to highlight the harsh reality of Japanese lifestyle that can be brutal. So... yeah. (But if this helps you form up a way to frame the BeCarefulWhatYouWish for aesop, please do)
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Another aesop I might think about is something along the line of \\\'Popular things and \\\'cool/hip\\\' things isn\\\'t as glamorous as you think\\\', since Saki didn\\\'t realize that what she think would be cool and adult redirects her life to hell. But I heard somewhere that this may not be accidental at all, it\\\'s on purpose because [=ShindoL=] wants to highlight the harsh reality of Japanese lifestyle that can be brutal. So... yeah.
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* However, three years of FriendlessBackground nerd leaves her unprepared for the harshness of life and makes her naive.
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* However, three years of FriendlessBackground nerd leaves her unprepared for the harshness of life and makes her naive and easily duped.
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* It\'s also stated that she was a bit distant with even her parents, mom only started being supportive when she said she wanted to learn about make up.
* All these factor to how she\'s easily roped into the dangerous situations, and her desire to make friends and fit in bit her in the back. (I would\'ve added \'due to her lack of preparation\' but... no. That falls into blaming her for not being prepared enough)
* All these factor to how she\'s easily roped into the dangerous situations, and her desire to make friends and fit in bit her in the back. (I would\'ve added \'due to her lack of preparation\' but... no. That falls into blaming her for not being prepared enough)
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* It\\\'s also stated that she was a bit distant with even her parents, mom only started being supportive when she said she wanted to learn about make up. Therefore, she didn\\\'t really have a good support foundation from family.
* All these factor to how she\\\'s easily roped into the dangerous situations, and her desire to make friends and fit in bit her in the back. (I would\\\'ve added \\\'due to lack of preparation\\\' but... no. That falls into blaming her for not being prepared enough)
* All these factor to how she\\\'s easily roped into the dangerous situations, and her desire to make friends and fit in bit her in the back. (I would\\\'ve added \\\'due to lack of preparation\\\' but... no. That falls into blaming her for not being prepared enough)
