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Apologies for the delay in response. It could probably do with an example to show how he\'s trying to be it, rather than just saying he is (the big one is probably the argument between himself and the rest of Ozpin\'s group about bringing his army to Vale -- he wants people to feel safe and really thought that\'s what he was doing until Ozpin points out that people tend to regard armies as a symbol of conflict and that then makes them wonder what on earth they\'re planning to fight). However, I\'m fine with the gist.
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Apologies for the delay in response. It could probably do with an example to show how he\\\'s trying to be it, rather than just saying he is (the big one is probably the argument between himself and the rest of Ozpin\\\'s group about bringing his army to Vale -- he wants people to feel safe and really thought that\\\'s what he was doing until Ozpin points out that people tend to regard armies as a symbol of conflict and that then makes them wonder what on earth their leaders are planning to fight). However, I\\\'m fine with the gist.
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Apologies for the delay in response. It could probably do with an example to show how he\'s trying to be it, rather than just saying he is (the big one is probably the argument between himself and the rest of Ozpin\'s group about bringing his army to Vale -- he wants people to feel safe and really thought that\'s what he was doing until Ozpin points out that people tend to regard armies as a symbol of conflict and that then makes them wonder what on earth the enemy is going to be). However, I\'m fine with the gist.
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Apologies for the delay in response. It could probably do with an example to show how he\\\'s trying to be it, rather than just saying he is (the big one is probably the argument between himself and the rest of Ozpin\\\'s group about bringing his army to Vale -- he wants people to feel safe and really thought that\\\'s what he was doing until Ozpin points out that people tend to regard armies as a symbol of conflict and that then makes them wonder what on earth they\\\'re planning to fight). However, I\\\'m fine with the gist.
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Apologies for the delay in response. I\'m fine with that. It could probably do with an example to show how he\'s trying to be it, rather than just saying he is (the big one is probably the argument between himself and the rest of Ozpin\'s group about bringing his army to Vale -- he wants people to feel safe and really thought that\'s what he was doing until Ozpin points out that people tend to regard armies as a symbol of conflict and that then makes them wonder what on earth the enemy is going to be).
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Apologies for the delay in response. It could probably do with an example to show how he\\\'s trying to be it, rather than just saying he is (the big one is probably the argument between himself and the rest of Ozpin\\\'s group about bringing his army to Vale -- he wants people to feel safe and really thought that\\\'s what he was doing until Ozpin points out that people tend to regard armies as a symbol of conflict and that then makes them wonder what on earth the enemy is going to be). However, I\\\'m fine with the gist.
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Apologies for the delay in response. I\'m fine with that. It could probably do with an example to show how he\'s trying to be it (the big one is probably the argument between himself and the rest of Ozpin\'s group about bringing his army to Vale because he wants people to feel safe until Ozpin points out that people tend to regard armies as a symbol of conflict and then start to wonder what they\'re preparing to fight).
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Apologies for the delay in response. I\\\'m fine with that. It could probably do with an example to show how he\\\'s trying to be it, rather than just saying he is (the big one is probably the argument between himself and the rest of Ozpin\\\'s group about bringing his army to Vale -- he wants people to feel safe and really thought that\\\'s what he was doing until Ozpin points out that people tend to regard armies as a symbol of conflict and that then makes them wonder what on earth the enemy is going to be).
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Apologies for the delay in response. I\'m fine with that. It could be problem do with an example to show how he\'s trying to be it (the big one is probably the argument between himself and the rest of Ozpin\'s group about bringing his army to Vale because he wants people to feel safe until Ozpin points out that people tend to regard armies as a symbol of conflict and then start to wonder what they\'re preparing to fight).
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Apologies for the delay in response. I\\\'m fine with that. It could probably do with an example to show how he\\\'s trying to be it (the big one is probably the argument between himself and the rest of Ozpin\\\'s group about bringing his army to Vale because he wants people to feel safe until Ozpin points out that people tend to regard armies as a symbol of conflict and then start to wonder what they\\\'re preparing to fight).
