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The Chopper entry was deleted outright, while the Rebecca entry had everything from \
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The Chopper entry was deleted outright, while the Rebecca entry had everything from \\\"The problem stems\\\" deleted. I\\\'m in agreement with the Chopper removal, as it seems to be complaining the issue was lack of proper foreshadowing, where TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot is about a plotline starting and THEN not going where you want it to.
The Rebecca change I\\\'m less sure about, as it seems a valid example in itself but I\\\'m inclined to think the deleted portion was valid.
The Rebecca change I\\\'m less sure about, as it seems a valid example in itself but I\\\'m inclined to think the deleted portion was valid.