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Deboss I see the Awesomeness. from Awesomeville Texas Since: Aug, 2009
I see the Awesomeness.
#1: Jan 12th 2011 at 10:40:59 AM

That descriptions seems really long and rambly, is all of it necessary?

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SomeSortOfTroper Since: Jan, 2001
#2: Jan 12th 2011 at 10:46:49 AM

It's a big genre forming trope with a lot of examples and quite a few things that get misclassified for it.

Besides, it's telling me about a trope. Am I not here to read about tropes?

CrypticMirror Cryptic Mirror from Scotland Since: Jan, 2001
INUH Since: Jul, 2009
#4: Jan 12th 2011 at 10:48:52 AM

Basically, this page gets so many incorrect examples (because, like subversions, it's something people like to call stuff) that it's necessary to specify a lot of things that don't count.

Infinite Tree: an experimental story
TonyMuhplaah Brother of Favio from Tony, Wisconsin Since: Oct, 2010
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#5: Jan 12th 2011 at 11:08:53 AM

I just looked at it, and holy cow, that is long. Isn't there some stuff which can get eliminated or shortened?

INUH Since: Jul, 2009
#6: Jan 12th 2011 at 11:13:50 AM

Maybe it needs a folder in the description: "Stuff that this is not. Read before adding examples."

Infinite Tree: an experimental story
shimaspawn from Here and Now Since: May, 2010 Relationship Status: In your bunk
#7: Jan 12th 2011 at 11:16:12 AM

It's a huge block of text, but I'm not finding anything that we can cut. It's surprisingly low on wordcruft which mostly just makes it very dense.

Reality is that, which when you stop believing in it, doesn't go away. -Philip K. Dick
SomeSortOfTroper Since: Jan, 2001
#8: Jan 12th 2011 at 12:02:03 PM

Indeed. I like to use the fourth paragraph as an example. It has four pertinent points to make, it uses four sentences.

Deboss I see the Awesomeness. from Awesomeville Texas Since: Aug, 2009
I see the Awesomeness.
#9: Jan 12th 2011 at 12:16:27 PM

Hm. Normally when I have to scroll down, there's a lot of cruft attached to the description. If it's all really necessary, I guess it's okay.

Fight smart, not fair.
SomeSortOfTroper Since: Jan, 2001
#10: Jan 12th 2011 at 12:36:49 PM

So, we happy? We can call in the Mods to lie this one down  *

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Deboss I see the Awesomeness. from Awesomeville Texas Since: Aug, 2009
I see the Awesomeness.
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