YMMV / Trilessa

• Canon Defilement: A much, much smaller example of this, as many of the characters are more or less intact despite being an AU. Though, the fic still doesn't relate to anything within Homestuck aside from the characters themselves.
• Big-Lipped Alligator Moment: Ultimately, Mituna's appearance and mentions of him being whipped are ultimately this, as he doesn't really contribute anything meaningful to the plot and is not mentioned again after his scene with Eridan.
• Narm: Many of the typos and descriptions within the story often clash with the more dramatic tones the story is trying to go for.
• So Bad, It's Good: While definitely not as hilariously bad as Learning and Sburbing, the fic still has its own brand of weirdness that, while not as notable as La S, still provides a good laugh.