1 | [[quoteright:250:https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/glbg5xp6ra.jpg]] |
2 | [[caption-width-right:250:The totally-not-taken-from-Google-Images cover.]] |
3 | ''Mi Tru Lov'' is a ''Webcomic/HetaliaAxisPowers'' fanfic. |
4 | The fanfic follows a 14-year-old Japanese girl named Kawaiilyn Sugoi. After her sister Bajin tells her that she is not kawaii, she jumps into a mysterious portal. From thereon, we see Kawaiilyn arrive and take to life in the Hetalia world, which includes but by no means is limited to: fangirling over the main characters before falling in love with Japan; befriending the canon characters; becoming involved in efforts to stop her cousins Vommy and Snoteleks teaming up with Russia to kill the other nations and gaining elemental powers. |
5 | The spelling of the fanfic is notoriously poor, despite the alleged help of the author's "fren bey". It has progressively worsened as the fic has continued, with only a few unintelligible words in the first chapter compared to a large part of the 13th chapter becoming unreadable. Perhaps the only existing critique of this fic, updated with every new chapter, can be found [[https://www.quotev.com/story/7857155/The-Big-Book-of-Mary-Sues-II here]]. It is confirmed by the author to be a [[TrollFic "satirical fiction"]]. |
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8 | !! ''Mi tru lov'' contains examples of: |
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10 | * AccidentalMisnaming: America is constantly referred to as Murcia, a region in Spain. |
11 | * AChildShallLeadThem: Kawaiilyn is 14, only just arrived in the Hetalia world, and she's already implied to be the leader of the fight against Vommy and Snoteleks. |
12 | * ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Chapter 14. |
13 | --> '''Kawaiilyn''': he sint moss cow to kil mwh, hurt meh frinds n maryied neh coousin. |
14 | * BigNo: Occurs in chapter four, only it's misspelt as [[RougeAnglesOfSatin ''"moooooo!"'']] |
15 | ** Also, when Kawaiilyn finds out that Russia is going to [[spoiler:marry one of her cousins]]: |
16 | ---> '''Kawaiilyn''': SNERTLEKTES NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!! |
17 | * BrotherSisterIncest: Moscow reveals that Russia promised to marry her if she ambushed and killed Japan and Kawaiilyn. Luckily, it never goes further than this, as Moscow [[spoiler:"''woz si shicked she dyed!!!!''" when Kawaiilyn is revealed to be the [[RougeAnglesOfSatin "''asmter ojf all tche velemetns''"]].]] Whatever that is. |
18 | %%* CrackFic |
19 | * DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: ''"Eye woke upp on the flor. as ii woke up, I was on da flor."'' |
20 | ** "''it was in Japanese but i know japanoise as I am japoniose and my parents taught me japapnois so i speak jaipennese."'' |
21 | ** "''as i read the let, it red"'' |
22 | ** "''thro da foret to da hose to you left. the hose on you left is were we r. "'' |
23 | ** Kawaillyn reiterates three times in chapter two that she cried because she was shocked. |
24 | ** This occurs several times in chapter 7, in instances such as this: |
25 | ---> "YELLL!" we ol yelled |
26 | * ElementalHairColors: Bajin is a redhead with fire powers. |
27 | * ElementalPowers: Vommy, Snoteleks, Russia, Kawaiilyn, Bajin and Moscow. |
28 | * GratuitousFrench: ''"je work"'' , or "je worke", assuming that "worker" is even a verb. |
29 | ** "I" is often misspelt as ''"je"''. |
30 | ** ''"repomdre me"''. Even the GratuitousFrench is riddled with {{Rouge Angles of Satin}}. |
31 | * GratuitousForeignLanguage: A rare Proto-Indo-European example. "Sister" is misspelt as ''"swésor"'', which is the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Indo-European_vocabulary#Kinship Proto-Indo-European]] term for a female sibling. |
32 | * GratuitousGerman: |
33 | ** At the end of chapter 10. |
34 | ---> den she waved her hund, and I eas frei! |
35 | ** ''"sie"'' is used instead of "she" in chapter 11. |
36 | * GratuitousJapanese: Random lines of dialogue are in Japanese, some rendered in the Latin alphabet and others not. |
37 | ** There is one instance of Japan's Japanese switching alphabets halfway through: |
38 | --->'''Japan''': Damare, イングランド、親愛なるばか! |
39 | ** Utsukushiniji and Kawaiilyn have a conversation that's almost entirely in what's supposed to be Japanese. |
40 | * InfoDump: Kawaiilyn explaining her backstory to the canon characters. |
41 | ** The clothing description at the end of chapter 12 comes out of seemingly nowhere. Japan and Kawaiilyn have just seen a [[PerfectlyCromulentWord tolfig]] jump out of the bushes, and then we're treated to a description of what they're wearing. |
42 | ---> I woz wareing a a blvack srhiot whchi said "girls qare gru8" fon fit, a zhet bliwcj skirt, a brwno scarf, lbue ohess, tights withh a corsett fron tand ya bracylxet. he [Japan] woz in his militittie uniform. |
43 | * InsaneTrollLogic: Whilst Japan is performing a TakeThatCritics by saying that Kawaiilyn is a proper character, he says that anyone who disagrees with him is a ''"racerist"'' as he is Japanese. |
44 | * LongLostRelative: Vommy and Snoteleks. Kawaiilyn doesn't seem to know a lot about them, other than the fact that they're her cousins who somehow manifested in the Hetalia world before her. |
45 | * LoveDodecahedron: Between Kawaiilyn and pretty much every canon character mentioned. |
46 | * MeetTheInLaws: When Kawaiilyn finds out that Russia is planning to marry Snoteleks, or Vommy, if she ''"profess 2 be betah in da night"''. She doesn't take too well to the idea of Russia being her ''"coosin in lah"''. |
47 | * MostFanficWritersAreGirls |
48 | * NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: Kawaiilyn discovers that she can control [[spoiler:air, earth, fire, water and lightning]] in chapter 13, just so she can break herself free from the earth Moscow has used to pin her to a tree. There is absolutely no {{foreshadowing}} whatsoever. |
49 | * OutOfCharacterMoment: Pretty much every canon character with a line of dialogue. |
50 | %%* ParentalAbandonment: Kawaiilyn and Bajin's dad. |
51 | * PerfectlyCromulentWord: ''"[[MemeticMutation covfefe]]"'' is used as a misspelling of coffee many times in chapter 7. |
52 | ** ''"somebloke"'' |
53 | ** ''"smileyly"'' |
54 | ** ''"tolfig"'' |
55 | * RightForTheWrongReasons: Kawaiilyn uses what could be counted as InsaneTrollLogic to deduce that the portal is to the Hetalia world: she's arguing with her sister, and a random portal appears because RealityIsOutToLunch, so it must be to the Hetalia world. She is somehow right. |
56 | ** She also implies that Bajin is dead with almost no evidence to support her theory. England confirms that it's likely that she will die, but they don't have to worry, [[spoiler:as Bajin goes to join Vommy and Snoteleks after waking up.]] |
57 | * RougeAnglesOfSatin: Pretty much the entire fic. |
58 | ** England is the worst example of this when it comes to names, having his name misspelt as ''"pengland"'' , ''"etnalgand"'', ''"englnad"'', ''"Englejn"'', ''"ngla"'', ''"nglen"'', and ''"ngland"''. There is only one instance of it being spelled correctly. |
59 | ** Japan is referred to as ''"jpan"'', ''"jaan"'', ''"jpn"'', ''"jpane"'', ''"jpern"'' and ''"jpen"'' with two instances of correct spellings. |
60 | ** Many characters have one or no correct spellings to their names at all. |
61 | ** Snoteleks' name is misspelt as ''"seokenjtls"'' the second time it's mentioned. |
62 | ** "Konnichiwa" is misspelt as ''"knihcia"'', ironically when Japan says it. |
63 | ** Several words and phrases in the fic are completely unintelligible, such as ''"ja d gke."'' ''[[AccidentalInnuendo "prostitute e gud ladder"]]'' "(her sister could assist)she would represent(be/act as)a good leader" and ''"ranke"'' "France". |
64 | ** ''"rememememememememememebered"'' |
65 | ** Many examples of this also fall under AccidentalInnuendo. For instance, we have such gems as "militittie", "dong nut" and "cum on". |
66 | * SdrawkcabName: "Snoteleks" is obviously "skeletons" backwards. |
67 | * ShapedLikeItself: Kawaiilyn describes Tokyo as wearing ''"a dress tht woz the came color as tje dres she wore"''. |
68 | * TakeThatCritics: Chapter 13. |
69 | --> '''Kawaiilyn''': den I kant b a su BIG BOOK FO MARIY SOOS YOR STOOOID REVIYU WOZ WRON¬¬¬¬!!!!!!!1! |
70 | * TechnicolorEyes: Kawaiilyn has hetereochromia: one eye is black and the other is red. |
71 | %%* TrollFic |
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