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** Ray's inclusion into the Akaba family and the [[ForWantOfANail nails]] she causes, one of which being Reira having a much happier disposition as we see in ''Scale 12.''
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** Ray's inclusion into the Akaba family and the [[ForWantOfANail nails]] for-want-of-a-nails she causes, one of which being Reira having a much happier disposition as we see in ''Scale 12.''
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* CriticalResearchFailure: On two accounts.
** In ''Scale 02'', Yuya's Pendulum Call lets him add two "Magician" Pendulum Monsters. One of the monsters Yuya added was ''Odd-Eyes Unicorn''. The author has noticed the mistake and promises to correct it when he has the time.
** In ''Scale 08'', Yuzu's new ace monster is called "Requiem Diva of the Salieri Symphony." When Yuzu activates Sonata's effect, all Melodious monsters gain an additional 500 ATK and DEF. Requiem Diva isn't listed as being a Melodious Monster, nor does it have an effect that treats her as one, but it gains the 500 bonus.
*** The author later corrected the mistake by editing Requiem Diva's effects, stating that it is treated as a Melodious as long as Yuzu has a Melodious monster out on her field.
** In ''Scale 02'', Yuya's Pendulum Call lets him add two "Magician" Pendulum Monsters. One of the monsters Yuya added was ''Odd-Eyes Unicorn''. The author has noticed the mistake and promises to correct it when he has the time.
** In ''Scale 08'', Yuzu's new ace monster is called "Requiem Diva of the Salieri Symphony." When Yuzu activates Sonata's effect, all Melodious monsters gain an additional 500 ATK and DEF. Requiem Diva isn't listed as being a Melodious Monster, nor does it have an effect that treats her as one, but it gains the 500 bonus.
*** The author later corrected the mistake by editing Requiem Diva's effects, stating that it is treated as a Melodious as long as Yuzu has a Melodious monster out on her field.
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** In ''Scale 14'' and ''Scale 15'', the Rare Hunters don't justice threaten physical violence, they're wholly willing to do it over dueling. Case in point in ''Scale 15'' where [[spoiler:Yuzu is kidnapped, Gongenzaka fights a bunch of people wielding actual '''weapons''' and one of Houjou's lackeys attempts to knock Sawatari out with a taser]].
** ''Scale 16'' one-ups the previous chapters by showing the lengths the leader of the Rare Hunters is willing to go. To start, he kidnpas Shuzo and all but burns You Show Duel School to the ground while dueling Sora, leaving him hospitalized. And when Yuya and co. find him, they see Shuzo suspended over a shark tank. The platform the leader is standing on is also designed so that only two people can stand on it. If more than two people are on it, they'll be swimming with the sharks.
** ''Scale 16'' one-ups the previous chapters by showing the lengths the leader of the Rare Hunters is willing to go. To start, he kidnpas Shuzo and all but burns You Show Duel School to the ground while dueling Sora, leaving him hospitalized. And when Yuya and co. find him, they see Shuzo suspended over a shark tank. The platform the leader is standing on is also designed so that only two people can stand on it. If more than two people are on it, they'll be swimming with the sharks.
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** In ''Scale 14'' and ''Scale 15'', the Rare Hunters don't justice just threaten physical violence, they're wholly willing to do it over dueling. Case in point in ''Scale 15'' where [[spoiler:Yuzu is kidnapped, Gongenzaka fights a bunch of people wielding actual '''weapons''' and one of Houjou's lackeys attempts to knock Sawatari out with a taser]].
** ''Scale 16'' one-ups the previous chapters by showing the lengths the leader of the Rare Hunters is willing to go. To start, hekidnpas kidnaps Shuzo and all but burns You Show Duel School to the ground while dueling Sora, leaving him hospitalized. And when Yuya and co. find him, they see Shuzo suspended over a shark tank. The platform the leader is standing on is also designed so that only two people can stand on it. If more than two people are on it, they'll be swimming with the sharks.
** ''Scale 16'' one-ups the previous chapters by showing the lengths the leader of the Rare Hunters is willing to go. To start, he
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* HilariousInHindsight: During the rematch between Yuzu and Masumi in episode 29, Sora made a comment on how the outcome will be different since he was the one who taught Yuzu the mechanics of Fusion Summoning. When Masumi calls him out on this, he merely dismisses her and tells her that LDS and its Fusion course isn't as great as she thinks it is. Then, in anger by this, she immediately wants to duel HIM, which then causes Sora to lament what a waste of time it would be, ''since he'll end up hurting her confidence even more''. Cue their duel in ''Scale 7'', and you can [[BreakTheHaughty guess what happens for Masumi when she duels against him]].
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* HilariousInHindsight: HilariousInHindsight:
** During the rematch between Yuzu and Masumi in episode 29, Sora made a comment on how the outcome will be different since he was the one who taught Yuzu the mechanics of Fusion Summoning. When Masumi calls him out on this, he merely dismisses her and tells her that LDS and its Fusion course isn't as great as she thinks it is. Then, in anger by this, she immediately wants to duel HIM, which then causes Sora to lament what a waste of time it would be, ''since he'll end up hurting her confidence even more''. Cue their duel in ''Scale 7'', and you can [[BreakTheHaughty guess what happens for Masumi when she duels againsthim]].him]].
** ''Scale 10'' introduces [[spoiler:Entermate King Odd-Eyes Dragon]], a Ritual-Pendulum monster and the first of its kind. As fate would have it, however, Konami revealed Odd-Eyes Pendulumgraph Dragon, the first-ever Ritual-Pendulum monster in the ''OCG''.
** During the rematch between Yuzu and Masumi in episode 29, Sora made a comment on how the outcome will be different since he was the one who taught Yuzu the mechanics of Fusion Summoning. When Masumi calls him out on this, he merely dismisses her and tells her that LDS and its Fusion course isn't as great as she thinks it is. Then, in anger by this, she immediately wants to duel HIM, which then causes Sora to lament what a waste of time it would be, ''since he'll end up hurting her confidence even more''. Cue their duel in ''Scale 7'', and you can [[BreakTheHaughty guess what happens for Masumi when she duels against
** ''Scale 10'' introduces [[spoiler:Entermate King Odd-Eyes Dragon]], a Ritual-Pendulum monster and the first of its kind. As fate would have it, however, Konami revealed Odd-Eyes Pendulumgraph Dragon, the first-ever Ritual-Pendulum monster in the ''OCG''.
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* EpilepticTrees: Just as [[spoiler:Yami Marik]] is about to be defeated by a '''very pissed off''' Zarc, he sees an illusion of a dragon with yellow eyes covered in blue fire. With the inclusion of a character that's heavily implied to be Ren, a character from the ''Yu-Gi-Oh! ARC-V'' manga, many readers have begun to suspect that the dragon [[spoiler:Yami Marik]] saw was [[spoiler:Genesis Omega Dragon]].
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* NightmareFuel: Aside from the terrifying moments involving people being turned into cards and the ''very real'' threat of dying in a duel, the Rare Hunters mini-arc brings to mind the horror elements from the original YGO manga. In ''Scale 14'' and ''Scale 15'', the Rare Hunters don't justice threaten physical violence, they're wholly willing to do it over dueling. Case in point in ''Scale 15'' where [[spoiler:Yuzu is kidnapped, Gongenzaka fights a bunch of people wielding actual '''weapons''' and one of Houjou's lackeys attempts to knock Sawatari out with a taser]].
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* NightmareFuel: Aside from the terrifying moments involving people being turned into cards and the ''very real'' threat of dying in a duel, the Rare Hunters mini-arc brings to mind the horror elements from the original YGO manga.
** In ''Scale 14'' and ''Scale 15'', the Rare Hunters don't justice threaten physical violence, they're wholly willing to do it over dueling. Case in point in ''Scale 15'' where [[spoiler:Yuzu is kidnapped, Gongenzaka fights a bunch of people wielding actual '''weapons''' and one of Houjou's lackeys attempts to knock Sawatari out with ataser]].taser]].
** ''Scale 16'' one-ups the previous chapters by showing the lengths the leader of the Rare Hunters is willing to go. To start, he kidnpas Shuzo and all but burns You Show Duel School to the ground while dueling Sora, leaving him hospitalized. And when Yuya and co. find him, they see Shuzo suspended over a shark tank. The platform the leader is standing on is also designed so that only two people can stand on it. If more than two people are on it, they'll be swimming with the sharks.
*** Halfway through the duel in ''Scale 16'', it quickly becomes clear that, despite Solid Vision not being used, some monsters attacks actual deal damage to Zarc. [[spoiler:With the revelation that Zarc's dueling Yami Marik, and the final line in the first half of ''Scale 16'', it becomes clear that Zarc's not participating in a duel so much as he is a '''Shadow Game'''.]]
---->'''[[spoiler:Yami Marik]]''': [[spoiler:The Shadow Realm awaits you!]]
** Near the tail end of the duel in ''Scale 16'', readers are treated to Zarc's HeroicSecondWind...only it's not what they're hoping for. Why? [[spoiler:Because he's reverted to his Demon Duelist mindset. What makes this even worse is the effect it has on Zarc's fragment. The moment Zarc reverts to his former personality, he causes '''all four of them to enter an Awakened state and mutter "[[MadnessMantra We will become one]]."''' If ''that'' isn't bad enough, Zarc has his own {{Synchronization}} with the Dragon Boys in the form of Resonance Mode, which not only has him take their skills and abilities and make them his own, but [[FromBadToWorse it also has the potential of making the Supreme King Dragon himself revive in full]].]] Is it any wonder why Ray's having a FreakOut?
** In ''Scale 14'' and ''Scale 15'', the Rare Hunters don't justice threaten physical violence, they're wholly willing to do it over dueling. Case in point in ''Scale 15'' where [[spoiler:Yuzu is kidnapped, Gongenzaka fights a bunch of people wielding actual '''weapons''' and one of Houjou's lackeys attempts to knock Sawatari out with a
** ''Scale 16'' one-ups the previous chapters by showing the lengths the leader of the Rare Hunters is willing to go. To start, he kidnpas Shuzo and all but burns You Show Duel School to the ground while dueling Sora, leaving him hospitalized. And when Yuya and co. find him, they see Shuzo suspended over a shark tank. The platform the leader is standing on is also designed so that only two people can stand on it. If more than two people are on it, they'll be swimming with the sharks.
*** Halfway through the duel in ''Scale 16'', it quickly becomes clear that, despite Solid Vision not being used, some monsters attacks actual deal damage to Zarc. [[spoiler:With the revelation that Zarc's dueling Yami Marik, and the final line in the first half of ''Scale 16'', it becomes clear that Zarc's not participating in a duel so much as he is a '''Shadow Game'''.]]
---->'''[[spoiler:Yami Marik]]''': [[spoiler:The Shadow Realm awaits you!]]
** Near the tail end of the duel in ''Scale 16'', readers are treated to Zarc's HeroicSecondWind...only it's not what they're hoping for. Why? [[spoiler:Because he's reverted to his Demon Duelist mindset. What makes this even worse is the effect it has on Zarc's fragment. The moment Zarc reverts to his former personality, he causes '''all four of them to enter an Awakened state and mutter "[[MadnessMantra We will become one]]."''' If ''that'' isn't bad enough, Zarc has his own {{Synchronization}} with the Dragon Boys in the form of Resonance Mode, which not only has him take their skills and abilities and make them his own, but [[FromBadToWorse it also has the potential of making the Supreme King Dragon himself revive in full]].]] Is it any wonder why Ray's having a FreakOut?
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** ''Scale 15'' takes the surprising reveal at the end of ''Scale 13'' up a notch by introducing another character from [[spoiler:the original ''Yu-Gi-Oh!'' series: Marik Ishtar,]] who is the BigBad of the Rare Hunters mini-arc. Even moreso when it is heavily hinted to actually being [[spoiler: the original Yami Marik from Battle City somehow possessing the Standard Dimension version of Marik.]]
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** ''Scale 15'' takes the surprising reveal at the end of ''Scale 13'' up a notch by introducing another character from [[spoiler:the original ''Yu-Gi-Oh!'' series: Marik Ishtar,]] who is the BigBad of the Rare Hunters mini-arc. Even moreso when it is heavily hinted to actually being [[spoiler: the WordOfGod confirms in ''Scale 16'' it's [[spoiler:the original Yami Marik from Battle City Marik, who is somehow possessing BackFromTheDead and is inhabiting the Standard Dimension Dimension's version of Marik.]]
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** ''Scale 15'' takes the surprising reveal at the end of ''Scale 13'' up a notch by introducing another character from [[spoiler:the original ''Yu-Gi-Oh!'' series: Marik Ishtar,]] who is the BigBad of the Rare Hunters mini-arc. Even moreso when it is heavily hinted to actually being [[spoiler: the original Yami Marik from Battle City somehow possessing the Standard Dimension version of Marik.]]
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments:
** Zarc's portrayal in the fanfic in general. Thanks to his amnesia and Yuya's influence, he undergoes AdaptationalHeroism and is an overall pleasant person, even becoming a sort of teacher to Yuya while wanting to follow the ideology of You Show Duel School-making everyone smile, as he originally wanted to do before he went postal. Granted, some lingering parts of old "Demon Duelist" self still linger, but it's still nice to get to know the person Zarc could have been for ourselves.
** Ray's inclusion into the Akaba family and the [[ForWantOfANail nails]] she causes, one of which being Reira having a much happier disposition as we see in ''Scale 12.''
** Zarc's portrayal in the fanfic in general. Thanks to his amnesia and Yuya's influence, he undergoes AdaptationalHeroism and is an overall pleasant person, even becoming a sort of teacher to Yuya while wanting to follow the ideology of You Show Duel School-making everyone smile, as he originally wanted to do before he went postal. Granted, some lingering parts of old "Demon Duelist" self still linger, but it's still nice to get to know the person Zarc could have been for ourselves.
** Ray's inclusion into the Akaba family and the [[ForWantOfANail nails]] she causes, one of which being Reira having a much happier disposition as we see in ''Scale 12.''
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** During the rematch between Yuzu and Masumi in episode 29, Sora made a comment on how the outcome will be different since he was the one who taught Yuzu the mechanics of Fusion Summoning. When Masumi calls him out on this, he merely dismisses her and tells her that LDS and its Fusion course isn't as great as she thinks it is. Then, in anger by this, she immediately wants to duel HIM, which then causes Sora to lament what a waste of time it would be, ''since he'll end up hurting her confidence even more''. Cue their duel in ''Scale 7'', and you can [[BreakTheHaughty guess what happens for Masumi when she duels against him]].
** During the rematch between Yuzu and Masumi in episode 29, Sora made a comment on how the outcome will be different since he was the one who taught Yuzu the mechanics of Fusion Summoning. When Masumi calls him out on this, he merely dismisses her and tells her that LDS and its Fusion course isn't as great as she thinks it is. Then, in anger by this, she immediately wants to duel HIM, which then causes Sora to lament what a waste of time it would be, ''since he'll end up hurting her confidence even more''. Cue their duel in ''Scale 7'', and you can [[BreakTheHaughty guess what happens for Masumi when she duels against him]].
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* HilariousInHindsight:
**HilariousInHindsight: During the rematch between Yuzu and Masumi in episode 29, Sora made a comment on how the outcome will be different since he was the one who taught Yuzu the mechanics of Fusion Summoning. When Masumi calls him out on this, he merely dismisses her and tells her that LDS and its Fusion course isn't as great as she thinks it is. Then, in anger by this, she immediately wants to duel HIM, which then causes Sora to lament what a waste of time it would be, ''since he'll end up hurting her confidence even more''. Cue their duel in ''Scale 7'', and you can [[BreakTheHaughty guess what happens for Masumi when she duels against him]].
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* UnexpectedCharacter: Ray's inclusion in the story was shocking enough, but [[spoiler:Joey]] making an appearance as a new student of You Show? ''Nobody'' saw that coming, especially since they're from [[spoiler:the original ''Yu-Gi-Oh!'' series pre-GX.]]
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* UnexpectedCharacter: UnexpectedCharacter:
** Ray's inclusion in the story was shocking enough, but [[spoiler:Joey]] making an appearance as a new student of You Show? ''Nobody'' saw that coming, especially since they're from [[spoiler:the original ''Yu-Gi-Oh!'' series pre-GX.]]]]
** ''Scale 15'' takes the surprising reveal at the end of ''Scale 13'' up a notch by introducing another character from [[spoiler:the original ''Yu-Gi-Oh!'' series: Marik Ishtar,]] who is the BigBad of the Rare Hunters mini-arc.
** Ray's inclusion in the story was shocking enough, but [[spoiler:Joey]] making an appearance as a new student of You Show? ''Nobody'' saw that coming, especially since they're from [[spoiler:the original ''Yu-Gi-Oh!'' series pre-GX.
** ''Scale 15'' takes the surprising reveal at the end of ''Scale 13'' up a notch by introducing another character from [[spoiler:the original ''Yu-Gi-Oh!'' series: Marik Ishtar,]] who is the BigBad of the Rare Hunters mini-arc.
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** In ''Scale 02'', Yuya's Pendulum Call lets him add two "Magician" Pendulum monsters. One of the monsters Yuya added was ''Odd-Eyes Unicorn''. The author has noticed the mistake and promises to correct it when he has the time.
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** In ''Scale 02'', Yuya's Pendulum Call lets him add two "Magician" Pendulum monsters.Monsters. One of the monsters Yuya added was ''Odd-Eyes Unicorn''. The author has noticed the mistake and promises to correct it when he has the time.
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* EnsembleDarkHorse: In canon, Ray Akaba was seen as this by a few people. Fans of the story were absolutely shocked and thrilled to see her included in the story alongside Zarc.
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* EnsembleDarkHorse: In canon, Ray Akaba was seen as like this by a few people. Fans of the story were absolutely shocked and thrilled to see her included in the story alongside Zarc.Zarc.
* HilariousInHindsight:
** During the rematch between Yuzu and Masumi in episode 29, Sora made a comment on how the outcome will be different since he was the one who taught Yuzu the mechanics of Fusion Summoning. When Masumi calls him out on this, he merely dismisses her and tells her that LDS and its Fusion course isn't as great as she thinks it is. Then, in anger by this, she immediately wants to duel HIM, which then causes Sora to lament what a waste of time it would be, ''since he'll end up hurting her confidence even more''. Cue their duel in ''Scale 7'', and you can [[BreakTheHaughty guess what happens for Masumi when she duels against him]].
* HilariousInHindsight:
** During the rematch between Yuzu and Masumi in episode 29, Sora made a comment on how the outcome will be different since he was the one who taught Yuzu the mechanics of Fusion Summoning. When Masumi calls him out on this, he merely dismisses her and tells her that LDS and its Fusion course isn't as great as she thinks it is. Then, in anger by this, she immediately wants to duel HIM, which then causes Sora to lament what a waste of time it would be, ''since he'll end up hurting her confidence even more''. Cue their duel in ''Scale 7'', and you can [[BreakTheHaughty guess what happens for Masumi when she duels against him]].
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** ''Scale 10'''s climactic conclusion. Absolutely no one expected to see Yuya [[spoiler:summon the first ever Ritual-Pendulum, much less the GoodCounterpart to Odd-Eyes Raging Dragon -- Entermate King Odd-Eyes Dragon]].
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** ''Scale 10'''s climactic conclusion. Absolutely no one expected to see Yuya [[spoiler:summon [[spoiler: summons the first ever first-ever Ritual-Pendulum, much less the GoodCounterpart to Odd-Eyes Raging Dragon -- Entermate King Odd-Eyes Dragon]].
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** ''Scale 11''. Show of hands, who would have expected Shun, the man who despises Fusion with a passion, to [[spoiler:Fusion Summon]]?
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** ''Scale 11''. Show of hands, who would have expected Shun, the man who despises Fusion with a passion, to [[spoiler:Fusion Summon]]?Summon]]?
* UnexpectedCharacter: Ray's inclusion in the story was shocking enough, but [[spoiler:Joey]] making an appearance as a new student of You Show? ''Nobody'' saw that coming, especially since they're from [[spoiler:the original ''Yu-Gi-Oh!'' series pre-GX.]]
* UnexpectedCharacter: Ray's inclusion in the story was shocking enough, but [[spoiler:Joey]] making an appearance as a new student of You Show? ''Nobody'' saw that coming, especially since they're from [[spoiler:the original ''Yu-Gi-Oh!'' series pre-GX.]]
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* HolyShitQuotient: The duel with Yuzu and Yaiba. Yuzu showing off Ritual Summoning was one thing, but Yaiba demonstrating Xyz? No one saw ''that'' coming!
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* HolyShitQuotient: HolyShitQuotient:
** The duel with Yuzu and Yaiba. Yuzu showing off Ritual Summoning was one thing, but Yaiba demonstratingXyz? [[spoiler:Xyz Summoning]]? No one saw ''that'' coming!coming!
** ''Scale 10'''s climactic conclusion. Absolutely no one expected to see Yuya [[spoiler:summon the first ever Ritual-Pendulum, much less the GoodCounterpart to Odd-Eyes Raging Dragon -- Entermate King Odd-Eyes Dragon]].
** ''Scale 11''. Show of hands, who would have expected Shun, the man who despises Fusion with a passion, to [[spoiler:Fusion Summon]]?
** The duel with Yuzu and Yaiba. Yuzu showing off Ritual Summoning was one thing, but Yaiba demonstrating
** ''Scale 10'''s climactic conclusion. Absolutely no one expected to see Yuya [[spoiler:summon the first ever Ritual-Pendulum, much less the GoodCounterpart to Odd-Eyes Raging Dragon -- Entermate King Odd-Eyes Dragon]].
** ''Scale 11''. Show of hands, who would have expected Shun, the man who despises Fusion with a passion, to [[spoiler:Fusion Summon]]?
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Misuse of Trope. Zarc does suffer angst from his bloodlust which he connects to who he was, and desperately wants to avoid returning to that and instead embrace Yuya's Entertainment Dueling. YMMV tropes can't be subverted or played with.
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* AngstWhatAngst: For someone who's suffering from amnesia, Zarc doesn't seem too bothered by the fact that he has no memories, and his only apparent memory is a nightmare of a monster destroying a city. Ray is a subverted case, in that while she also doesn't have any memories, she's instead content with making new memories.
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* AngstWhatAngst: For someone who's suffering from amnesia, Zarc doesn't seem too bothered by the fact that he has no memories, and his only apparent memory is a nightmare of a monster destroying a city. Ray is a subverted case, in that while she also doesn't have any memories, she's instead content with making new memories.
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*** The author later corrected the mistake by editing Requiem Diva's effects, stating that it is treated as a Melodious as long as Yuzu has a Melodious monster out on her field.
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* HolyShitQuotent: The duel with Yuzu and Yaiba. Yuzu showing off Ritual Summoning was one thing, but Yaiba demonstrating Xyz? No one saw ''that'' coming!
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* HolyShitQuotent: HolyShitQuotient: The duel with Yuzu and Yaiba. Yuzu showing off Ritual Summoning was one thing, but Yaiba demonstrating Xyz? No one saw ''that'' coming!
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* EnsembleDarkHorse: In canon, Ray Akaba was seen as this by a few people. Fans of the story were absolutely shocked and thrilled to see her included in the story alongside Zarc.
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* EnsembleDarkHorse: In canon, Ray Akaba was seen as this by a few people. Fans of the story were absolutely shocked and thrilled to see her included in the story alongside Zarc.Zarc.
* HolyShitQuotent: The duel with Yuzu and Yaiba. Yuzu showing off Ritual Summoning was one thing, but Yaiba demonstrating Xyz? No one saw ''that'' coming!
* HolyShitQuotent: The duel with Yuzu and Yaiba. Yuzu showing off Ritual Summoning was one thing, but Yaiba demonstrating Xyz? No one saw ''that'' coming!
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Try to not have entries be opinionated and avoid using "I" or "My". Sora's expressions can't be seen in a Fanfic so either this is simply added from canon, or its In Universe since Zarc is specifically mentioned. If Zarc isn't Evil at the moment, then the trope doesn't apply.For a character to cross the MEH, they have to be Irredeemable. As we all know, Sawatari will be redeemed and join the Lancers, so he doesn't count. In Universe examples belong on the main page, not the YMMV page.
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* AccidentalInnuendo: Accidental ''my ass''. The author was fully aware of the innuendo behind Yaiba's new monster's name: "'''XXX'''-Saber Hannibal" and is fully expecting jokes to be made at Yaiba's expense.
* CreepyCute: Sora. He looks like a cute kid, but his expressions can become quite unsettling and don't even remotely belong on the face of a kid. Even Zarc notices how uneasy he feels whenever Sora develops such menacing expressions.
* CreepyCute: Sora. He looks like a cute kid, but his expressions can become quite unsettling and don't even remotely belong on the face of a kid. Even Zarc notices how uneasy he feels whenever Sora develops such menacing expressions.
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* EnsembleDarkHorse: In canon, Ray Akaba was seen as this by a few people. Fans of the story were absolutely shocked and thrilled to see her included in the story alongside Zarc.
* EvilIsCool: While Zarc isn't evil in this story thanks to his amnesia, his Supreme King Servant Dragons, particularly the ones bearing the names of the Dimensional Dragons, are [[EvilCounterpart darker versions]] of the Yu boys' monsters.
* GameBreaker: InUniverse and non-video game example. Zarc's deck is recognized as being unbelievably overpowered. [[FridgeLogic It makes sense his villain decks are typically made to be overpowered]]. Case in point, the Pendulum Effects of Zarc's Supreme King Gate Zero and Infinity: one negates any damage he would take if he has a Supreme King monster on the field, and the other gives him Life Points equal to the damage that was negated.
* MoralEventHorizon: Sawatari certainly crossed it when he purposely uses an Action Card to damage the tower that Yuzu, Ayu, Tatsuya and Futoshi are on and cause it to crumble into the ground, forcing Yuya to go over the alloted time he hass during his Turn to save them. If Yuya hadn't made it in time, Sawatari would have killed four kids just so he could delay his defeat. [[BewareTheNiceOnes He damn near finds himself staring death in the face as he accidentally wakes up the Demon Duelist inside Zarc]].
* EvilIsCool: While Zarc isn't evil in this story thanks to his amnesia, his Supreme King Servant Dragons, particularly the ones bearing the names of the Dimensional Dragons, are [[EvilCounterpart darker versions]] of the Yu boys' monsters.
* GameBreaker: InUniverse and non-video game example. Zarc's deck is recognized as being unbelievably overpowered. [[FridgeLogic It makes sense his villain decks are typically made to be overpowered]]. Case in point, the Pendulum Effects of Zarc's Supreme King Gate Zero and Infinity: one negates any damage he would take if he has a Supreme King monster on the field, and the other gives him Life Points equal to the damage that was negated.
* MoralEventHorizon: Sawatari certainly crossed it when he purposely uses an Action Card to damage the tower that Yuzu, Ayu, Tatsuya and Futoshi are on and cause it to crumble into the ground, forcing Yuya to go over the alloted time he hass during his Turn to save them. If Yuya hadn't made it in time, Sawatari would have killed four kids just so he could delay his defeat. [[BewareTheNiceOnes He damn near finds himself staring death in the face as he accidentally wakes up the Demon Duelist inside Zarc]].
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* EnsembleDarkHorse: In canon, Ray Akaba was seen as this by a few people. Fans of the story were absolutely shocked and thrilled to see her included in the story alongside Zarc.
* EvilIsCool: While Zarc isn't evil in this story thanks to his amnesia, his Supreme King Servant Dragons, particularly the ones bearing the names of the Dimensional Dragons, are [[EvilCounterpart darker versions]] of the Yu boys' monsters.
* GameBreaker: InUniverse and non-video game example. Zarc's deck is recognized as being unbelievably overpowered. [[FridgeLogic It makes sense his villain decks are typically made to be overpowered]]. Case in point, the Pendulum Effects of Zarc's Supreme King Gate Zero and Infinity: one negates any damage he would take if he has a Supreme King monster on the field, and the other gives him Life Points equal to the damage that was negated.
* MoralEventHorizon: Sawatari certainly crossed it when he purposely uses an Action Card to damage the tower that Yuzu, Ayu, Tatsuya and Futoshi are on and cause it to crumble into the ground, forcing Yuya to go over the alloted time he hass during his Turn to save them. If Yuya hadn't made it in time, Sawatari would have killed four kids just so he could delay his defeat. [[BewareTheNiceOnes He damn near finds himself staring death in the face as he accidentally wakes up the Demon Duelist inside Zarc]].Zarc.
* EvilIsCool: While Zarc isn't evil in this story thanks to his amnesia, his Supreme King Servant Dragons, particularly the ones bearing the names of the Dimensional Dragons, are [[EvilCounterpart darker versions]] of the Yu boys' monsters.
* GameBreaker: InUniverse and non-video game example. Zarc's deck is recognized as being unbelievably overpowered. [[FridgeLogic It makes sense his villain decks are typically made to be overpowered]]. Case in point, the Pendulum Effects of Zarc's Supreme King Gate Zero and Infinity: one negates any damage he would take if he has a Supreme King monster on the field, and the other gives him Life Points equal to the damage that was negated.
* MoralEventHorizon: Sawatari certainly crossed it when he purposely uses an Action Card to damage the tower that Yuzu, Ayu, Tatsuya and Futoshi are on and cause it to crumble into the ground, forcing Yuya to go over the alloted time he hass during his Turn to save them. If Yuya hadn't made it in time, Sawatari would have killed four kids just so he could delay his defeat. [[BewareTheNiceOnes He damn near finds himself staring death in the face as he accidentally wakes up the Demon Duelist inside Zarc]].
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* CreepCute: Sora. He looks like a cute kid, but his expressions can become quite unsettling and don't even remotely belong on the face of a kid. Even Zarc notices how uneasy he feels whenever Sora develops such menacing expressions.
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* CreepCute: CreepyCute: Sora. He looks like a cute kid, but his expressions can become quite unsettling and don't even remotely belong on the face of a kid. Even Zarc notices how uneasy he feels whenever Sora develops such menacing expressions.
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* CriticalResearchFailure
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* CriticalResearchFailureCreepCute: Sora. He looks like a cute kid, but his expressions can become quite unsettling and don't even remotely belong on the face of a kid. Even Zarc notices how uneasy he feels whenever Sora develops such menacing expressions.
* CriticalResearchFailure: On two accounts.
** In ''Scale 02'', Yuya's Pendulum Call lets him add two "Magician" Pendulum monsters. One of the monsters Yuya added was ''Odd-Eyes Unicorn''. The author has noticed the mistake and promises to correct it when he has the time.
** In ''Scale 08'', Yuzu's new ace monster is called "Requiem Diva of the Salieri Symphony." When Yuzu activates Sonata's effect, all Melodious monsters gain an additional 500 ATK and DEF. Requiem Diva isn't listed as being a Melodious Monster, nor does it have an effect that treats her as one, but it gains the 500 bonus.
* EnsembleDarkHorse: In canon, Ray Akaba was seen as this by a few people. Fans of the story were absolutely shocked and thrilled to see her included in the story alongside Zarc.
* EvilIsCool: While Zarc isn't evil in this story thanks to his amnesia, his Supreme King Servant Dragons, particularly the ones bearing the names of the Dimensional Dragons, are [[EvilCounterpart darker versions]] of the Yu boys' monsters.
* GameBreaker: InUniverse and non-video game example. Zarc's deck is recognized as being unbelievably overpowered. [[FridgeLogic It makes sense his villain decks are typically made to be overpowered]]. Case in point, the Pendulum Effects of Zarc's Supreme King Gate Zero and Infinity: one negates any damage he would take if he has a Supreme King monster on the field, and the other gives him Life Points equal to the damage that was negated.
* MoralEventHorizon: Sawatari certainly crossed it when he purposely uses an Action Card to damage the tower that Yuzu, Ayu, Tatsuya and Futoshi are on and cause it to crumble into the ground, forcing Yuya to go over the alloted time he hass during his Turn to save them. If Yuya hadn't made it in time, Sawatari would have killed four kids just so he could delay his defeat. [[BewareTheNiceOnes He damn near finds himself staring death in the face as he accidentally wakes up the Demon Duelist inside Zarc]].
* CriticalResearchFailure: On two accounts.
** In ''Scale 02'', Yuya's Pendulum Call lets him add two "Magician" Pendulum monsters. One of the monsters Yuya added was ''Odd-Eyes Unicorn''. The author has noticed the mistake and promises to correct it when he has the time.
** In ''Scale 08'', Yuzu's new ace monster is called "Requiem Diva of the Salieri Symphony." When Yuzu activates Sonata's effect, all Melodious monsters gain an additional 500 ATK and DEF. Requiem Diva isn't listed as being a Melodious Monster, nor does it have an effect that treats her as one, but it gains the 500 bonus.
* EnsembleDarkHorse: In canon, Ray Akaba was seen as this by a few people. Fans of the story were absolutely shocked and thrilled to see her included in the story alongside Zarc.
* EvilIsCool: While Zarc isn't evil in this story thanks to his amnesia, his Supreme King Servant Dragons, particularly the ones bearing the names of the Dimensional Dragons, are [[EvilCounterpart darker versions]] of the Yu boys' monsters.
* GameBreaker: InUniverse and non-video game example. Zarc's deck is recognized as being unbelievably overpowered. [[FridgeLogic It makes sense his villain decks are typically made to be overpowered]]. Case in point, the Pendulum Effects of Zarc's Supreme King Gate Zero and Infinity: one negates any damage he would take if he has a Supreme King monster on the field, and the other gives him Life Points equal to the damage that was negated.
* MoralEventHorizon: Sawatari certainly crossed it when he purposely uses an Action Card to damage the tower that Yuzu, Ayu, Tatsuya and Futoshi are on and cause it to crumble into the ground, forcing Yuya to go over the alloted time he hass during his Turn to save them. If Yuya hadn't made it in time, Sawatari would have killed four kids just so he could delay his defeat. [[BewareTheNiceOnes He damn near finds himself staring death in the face as he accidentally wakes up the Demon Duelist inside Zarc]].
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* AccidentalInnuendo: Accidental ''my ass''. The author was fully aware of the innuendo behind Yaiba's new monster's name: "'''XXX'''-Saber Hannibal" and is fully expecting jokes to be made at Yaiba's expense.
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