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* CompleteMonster: [[MadDoctor J.S. Steinman]] is a plastic surgeon who, like his canon self, becomes a SerialKiller obsessed with [[MadArtist his own twisted idea of beauty and perfection]]. Arriving in Rapture, Steinman would begin to brutally mutilate and murder stray Splicers before he decides to kidnap innocent civilians to perform his surgeries on. During these processes he would use ADAM keep his victims [[AndIMustScream alive and in pain]] for long periods of time, after [[TearOffYourFace slicing their faces off]] to keep as trophies. The numerous bodies of Steinman's victims can be found at his Medical Pavilion by the time teenagers Cody, [[Characters/TotalDramaCourtney Courtney]], Gwen, and Noah arrive there with one corpse on his operating table severely mutilated. Steinman also nearly kills the four teens several times and straps Gwen to his operating table where attempts to slice her face off before killing her.
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* CompleteMonster: [[MadDoctor J.S. Steinman]] is a plastic surgeon who, like his canon self, becomes a SerialKiller obsessed with [[MadArtist his own twisted idea of beauty and perfection]]. Arriving in Rapture, Steinman would begin to brutally mutilate and murder stray Splicers before he decides to kidnap innocent civilians to perform his surgeries on. During these processes he would use ADAM keep his victims [[AndIMustScream alive and in pain]] for long periods of time, after [[TearOffYourFace slicing their faces off]] to keep as trophies. The numerous bodies of Steinman's victims can be found at his Medical Pavilion by the time teenagers Cody, Courtney, Gwen, and Noah arrive there with one corpse on his operating table severely mutilated. Steinman also nearly kills the four teens several times and straps Gwen to his operating table where attempts to slice her face off before killing her.
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* CompleteMonster: [[MadDoctor J.S. Steinman]] is a plastic surgeon who, like his canon self, becomes a SerialKiller obsessed with [[MadArtist his own twisted idea of beauty and perfection]]. Arriving in Rapture, Steinman would begin to brutally mutilate and murder stray Splicers before he decides to kidnap innocent civilians to perform his surgeries on. During these processes he would use ADAM keep his victims [[AndIMustScream alive and in pain]] for long periods of time, after [[TearOffYourFace slicing their faces off]] to keep as trophies. The numerous bodies of Steinman's victims can be found at his Medical Pavilion by the time teenagers Cody, Courtney, [[Characters/TotalDramaCourtney Courtney]], Gwen, and Noah arrive there with one corpse on his operating table severely mutilated. Steinman also nearly kills the four teens several times and straps Gwen to his operating table where attempts to slice her face off before killing her.
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NightmareFuel: Honestly, given that this story ups the already considerable darkness of Bioshock, it should be a no brainer that it has lots of nightmare fuel. Outside of elements from the game being expanded on, the greatest example of this is who most of the Total Drama characters have been shown to be slowly giving into the madness of Rapture in different ways.
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* NightmareFuel: Honestly, given that this story ups the already considerable darkness of Bioshock, it should be a no brainer that it has lots of nightmare fuel. Outside of elements from the game being expanded on, the greatest example of this is who most of the Total Drama characters have been shown to be slowly giving into the madness of Rapture in different ways.
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NightmareFuel: Honestly, given that this story ups the already considerable darkness of Bioshock, it should be a no brainer that it has lots of nightmare fuel. Outside of elements from the game being expanded on, the greatest example of this is who most of the Total Drama characters have been shown to be slowly giving into the madness of Rapture in different ways.
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** Also, Courtney and Gwen, at least on Courtney's side. In the most recent chapters, Noah's joke about Courtney having a crush on Gwen might not be a joke after all.
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** Also, Courtney and Gwen, at least on Courtney's side. In the most recent chapters, Noah's joke about Courtney having a crush on Gwen might not be a joke after all.all.
* TearJerker: [[spoiler: Cody's death]] in chapter 30.
* TearJerker: [[spoiler: Cody's death]] in chapter 30.
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* NightmareFuel: Well this Bioshock Fanfic Crossover, And will contain some Bioshock's Nightmare Fuel with some from Total Drama's Nightmare Fuel.
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* NightmareFuel: Well Honestly, given that this Bioshock Fanfic Crossover, And will contain some Bioshock's Nightmare Fuel with some story ups the already considerable darkness of Bioshock, it should be a no brainer that it has lots of nightmare fuel. Outside of elements from the game being expanded on, the greatest example of this is who most of the Total Drama's Nightmare Fuel.Drama characters have been shown to be slowly giving into the madness of Rapture in different ways.
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* ShipTease: Gwen and Cody, and to a much lesser extent, Courtney and Noah.
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* ShipTease: Gwen and Cody, and to a much lesser extent, Courtney and Noah.Noah.
** Also, Courtney and Gwen, at least on Courtney's side. In the most recent chapters, Noah's joke about Courtney having a crush on Gwen might not be a joke after all.
** Also, Courtney and Gwen, at least on Courtney's side. In the most recent chapters, Noah's joke about Courtney having a crush on Gwen might not be a joke after all.
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* NightmareFuelNightmareFuel: Well this Bioshock Fanfic Crossover, And will contain some Bioshock's Nightmare Fuel with some from Total Drama's Nightmare Fuel.
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* ShipTease: Gwen and Cody, and to a much lesser extent, Courtney and Noah.