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* UnintentionalPeriodPiece: While the fic is pretty up-front with a lot of its references and shoutouts, probably the two most notable examples are with reference to actual ''Kingdom Hearts'' canon. As the author herself puts it in the 10th Anniversary upload on AO3, the fic is "ten years and 87 Kingdom Hearts games out of date!"
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* UnintentionalPeriodPiece: While the fic is pretty up-front with a lot of its references and shoutouts, probably the two most notable examples are with reference to actual ''Kingdom Hearts'' canon. As the author herself puts it in the 10th Anniversary upload on AO3, [=AO3=], the fic is "ten years and 87 Kingdom Hearts games out of date!"
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* UnintentionalPeriodPiece: While the fic is pretty up-front with a lot of its references and shoutouts, probably the two most notable examples are with reference to actual ''Kingdom Hearts'' canon.
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* UnintentionalPeriodPiece: While the fic is pretty up-front with a lot of its references and shoutouts, probably the two most notable examples are with reference to actual ''Kingdom Hearts'' canon. As the author herself puts it in the 10th Anniversary upload on AO3, the fic is "ten years and 87 Kingdom Hearts games out of date!"
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** Considering a recent reveal from ''VideoGame/KingdomHeartsIII'' [[spoiler: it makes too much sense for the first Seme Gutless we see is technically named after the latin name of LUST.]]
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** Considering a recent reveal from ''VideoGame/KingdomHeartsIII'' [[spoiler: it makes too much sense for the first Seme Gutless we see is technically named after the latin name of LUST.Latin word for Lust.]]
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* UnintentionalPeriodPiece: While the fic is pretty up-front with a lot of its references and shoutouts, probably the two most notable examples are with reference to actual ''Kingdom Hearts'' canon. For starters, there isn't a single mention anywhere of Xion, as ''VideoGame/KingdomHearts358DaysOver2'' came out three years following the publishing of this fic. Second, Vexen's BerserkButton is when a writer tries to give a Nobody a heart despite clearly being established as creatures that lack hearts entirely. [[spoiler:Fast forward to ''VideoGame/KingdomHearts3DDreamDropDistance'', and it turns out that, yes, Nobodies ''do'' get hearts.]]
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* UnintentionalPeriodPiece: While the fic is pretty up-front with a lot of its references and shoutouts, probably the two most notable examples are with reference to actual ''Kingdom Hearts'' canon. canon.
** For starters, there isn't a single mention anywhere of Xion, as ''VideoGame/KingdomHearts358DaysOver2'' came out three years following the publishing of thisfic. fic.
** Second, Vexen's BerserkButton is when a writer tries to give a Nobody a heart despite clearly being established as creatures that lack hearts entirely. [[spoiler:Fast forward to ''VideoGame/KingdomHearts3DDreamDropDistance'', and it turns out that, yes, Nobodies ''do'' get hearts.]]
** For starters, there isn't a single mention anywhere of Xion, as ''VideoGame/KingdomHearts358DaysOver2'' came out three years following the publishing of this
** Second, Vexen's BerserkButton is when a writer tries to give a Nobody a heart despite clearly being established as creatures that lack hearts entirely. [[spoiler:Fast forward to ''VideoGame/KingdomHearts3DDreamDropDistance'', and it turns out that, yes, Nobodies ''do'' get hearts.]]
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* UnintentionalPeriodPiece: While the fic is pretty up-front with a lot of its references and shoutouts, probably the most notable example is with reference to actual ''Kingdom Hearts'' canon. Vexen's BerserkButton is when a writer tries to give a Nobody a heart despite clearly being established as creatures that lack hearts entirely. [[spoiler:Fast forward to ''VideoGame/KingdomHearts3DDreamDropDistance'', and it turns out that, yes, Nobodies ''do'' get hearts.]]
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* UnintentionalPeriodPiece: While the fic is pretty up-front with a lot of its references and shoutouts, probably the two most notable example is examples are with reference to actual ''Kingdom Hearts'' canon. For starters, there isn't a single mention anywhere of Xion, as ''VideoGame/KingdomHearts358DaysOver2'' came out three years following the publishing of this fic. Second, Vexen's BerserkButton is when a writer tries to give a Nobody a heart despite clearly being established as creatures that lack hearts entirely. [[spoiler:Fast forward to ''VideoGame/KingdomHearts3DDreamDropDistance'', and it turns out that, yes, Nobodies ''do'' get hearts.]]
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** The gag with the ridiculous number of OC Keyblade wielders would come across as a potshot against ''[[VideoGame/KingdomHeartsX Union χ]]'' if not for the fact that the fic clearly long predates it.
*** Similarly, the semes of the nobodies of two of the characters from those games [[spoiler:Marluxia and Larxene]] are {{Arc Villain}}s of that world too.
*** Similarly, the semes of the nobodies of two of the characters from those games [[spoiler:Marluxia and Larxene]] are {{Arc Villain}}s of that world too.
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** The gag with the ridiculous number of OC Keyblade wielders would come across as a potshot against ''[[VideoGame/KingdomHeartsX Union χ/Unchained χ/Union χ]]'' if not for the fact that the fic clearly long predates it.
*** Similarly, the semes of the nobodies of two of the characters fromthose games that game [[spoiler:Marluxia and Larxene]] are {{Arc Villain}}s of that world too.
*** Similarly, the semes of the nobodies of two of the characters from
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** The gag with the ridiculous number of OC Keyblade wielders would come across as a potshot against ''[[VideoGame/KingdomHeartsX χ]]'' and ''Unchained χ'', if not for the fact that the fic clearly long predates them.
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** The gag with the ridiculous number of OC Keyblade wielders would come across as a potshot against ''[[VideoGame/KingdomHeartsX Union χ]]'' and ''Unchained χ'', if not for the fact that the fic clearly long predates them.it.
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* UnintentionalPeriodPiece: While the fic is pretty up-front with a lot of its references and shoutouts, probably the most notable example is with reference to actual ''Kingdom Hearts'' canon. Vexen's BerserkButton is when a writer tries to give a Nobody a heart despite clearly being established as creatures that lack hearts entirely. Fast forward to ''VideoGame/KingdomHearts3DDreamDropDistance'', and it turns out that, yes, Nobodies ''do'' get hearts.
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* UnintentionalPeriodPiece: While the fic is pretty up-front with a lot of its references and shoutouts, probably the most notable example is with reference to actual ''Kingdom Hearts'' canon. Vexen's BerserkButton is when a writer tries to give a Nobody a heart despite clearly being established as creatures that lack hearts entirely. Fast [[spoiler:Fast forward to ''VideoGame/KingdomHearts3DDreamDropDistance'', and it turns out that, yes, Nobodies ''do'' get hearts.]]
