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** The sign at Tianmen Square: "On this site, in 1989, [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial nothing happened]]."
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** The sign at Tianmen Tiananmen Square: "On this site, in 1989, [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial nothing happened]]."
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** After crashing his car, Mr Burns seems to have landed on airbags. But then it turns out that he's technically not wrong, since the airbags are his ''lungs''. Which have come out through his mouth. He then slurps them back into his body like spaghetti, much to Smithers' (and the audience's) revulsion.
** In China, Homer pisses off some monks, who proceed to beat him up, and then messily ''tear out his heart''. Mitigated by them putting it straight back, followed by Homer hoping the monk washed his hands with [[MajorInjuryUnderreaction mild irritation]].
** In China, Homer pisses off some monks, who proceed to beat him up, and then messily ''tear out his heart''. Mitigated by them putting it straight back, followed by Homer hoping the monk washed his hands with [[MajorInjuryUnderreaction mild irritation]].
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** After crashing his car, Mr Mr. Burns seems to have landed on airbags. But airbags, but then it turns out that he's technically not wrong, since the airbags are his ''lungs''. Which ''lungs'', which have come out through his mouth. He mouth; he then slurps them back into his body like spaghetti, much to Smithers' (and the audience's) revulsion.
** In China, Homer pisses off some monks, who proceed to beat him up, and then messily ''tear out hisheart''. Mitigated heart'', mitigated by them putting it straight back, followed by Homer hoping the monk washed his hands with [[MajorInjuryUnderreaction mild irritation]].
** In China, Homer pisses off some monks, who proceed to beat him up, and then messily ''tear out his
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-->'''Homer:''' Awww... he's like a little angel who killed 50 million people.
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-->"Awww... he's like a little angel who killed 50 million people."
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* CrossesTheLineTwice:
** The sign at Tianmen Square: "On this site, in 1989, [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial nothing happened]]."
** Homer at Mao Zedong's tomb.
-->"Awww... he's like a little angel who killed 50 million people."
** The sign at Tianmen Square: "On this site, in 1989, [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial nothing happened]]."
** Homer at Mao Zedong's tomb.
-->"Awww... he's like a little angel who killed 50 million people."
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Changed line(s) 2 (click to see context) from:
** After crashing his car, Mr Burns seems to have landed on airbags. But then it turns out that he's technically not wrong, since this airbags are his ''lungs''. Which have come out through his mouth. He then slurps them back into his body like spaghetti, much to Smithers' (and the audience's) revulsion.
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** After crashing his car, Mr Burns seems to have landed on airbags. But then it turns out that he's technically not wrong, since this the airbags are his ''lungs''. Which have come out through his mouth. He then slurps them back into his body like spaghetti, much to Smithers' (and the audience's) revulsion.
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* {{Squick}}:
** After crashing his car, Mr Burns seems to have landed on airbags. But then it turns out that he's technically not wrong, since this airbags are his ''lungs''. Which have come out through his mouth. He then slurps them back into his body like spaghetti, much to Smithers' (and the audience's) revulsion.
** In China, Homer pisses off some monks, who proceed to beat him up, and then messily ''tear out his heart''. Mitigated by them putting it straight back, followed by Homer hoping the monk washed his hands with [[MajorInjuryUnderreaction mild irritation]].
** After crashing his car, Mr Burns seems to have landed on airbags. But then it turns out that he's technically not wrong, since this airbags are his ''lungs''. Which have come out through his mouth. He then slurps them back into his body like spaghetti, much to Smithers' (and the audience's) revulsion.
** In China, Homer pisses off some monks, who proceed to beat him up, and then messily ''tear out his heart''. Mitigated by them putting it straight back, followed by Homer hoping the monk washed his hands with [[MajorInjuryUnderreaction mild irritation]].
