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* FridgeBrilliance: The Mariner speaks in such an archaic dialect because he never kept up with English. Keep in mind he's immortal, and wanders the earth.
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* FridgeBrilliance: The Mariner speaks in such an archaic dialect because he never kept up with English. Keep in mind he's immortal, immortal and wanders the earth.
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* VindicatedByHistory: ''The Rime of the Ancient Mariner'' is one of the most referenced [[{{Romanticism}} Romantic]] poetry ever, to the point [[SmallReferencePools few people will known any others]] and a line from it is popularly ([[BeamMeUpScotty mis]])quoted. When it was first released, Coleridge's publisher told him most of its sales were from sailors that mistook it for a naval songbook and many critics found its archaic dialect impenetrable to read (which led to Coleridge toning it down for a second edition).
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* VindicatedByHistory: ''The Rime of the Ancient Mariner'' is one of the most referenced [[{{Romanticism}} Romantic]] poetry poems ever, to the point [[SmallReferencePools few people will known know any others]] and a line from it is popularly ([[BeamMeUpScotty mis]])quoted. When it was first released, Coleridge's publisher told him most of its sales were from sailors that mistook it for a naval songbook and many critics found its archaic dialect impenetrable to read (which led to Coleridge toning it down for a second edition).
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* VindicatedByHistory: ''Literature/TheRimeOfTheAncientMariner'' is one of the most referenced [[{{Romanticism}} Romantic]] poetry ever, to the point [[SmallReferencePools few people will known any others]] and a line from it is popularly ([[BeamMeUpScotty mis]])quoted. When it was first released, Coleridge's publisher told him most of its sales were from sailors that mistook it for a naval songbook and many critics found its archaic dialect impenetrable to read (which led to Coleridge toning it down for a second edition).
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* VindicatedByHistory: ''Literature/TheRimeOfTheAncientMariner'' ''The Rime of the Ancient Mariner'' is one of the most referenced [[{{Romanticism}} Romantic]] poetry ever, to the point [[SmallReferencePools few people will known any others]] and a line from it is popularly ([[BeamMeUpScotty mis]])quoted. When it was first released, Coleridge's publisher told him most of its sales were from sailors that mistook it for a naval songbook and many critics found its archaic dialect impenetrable to read (which led to Coleridge toning it down for a second edition).
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* VindicatedByHistory: ''Literature/TheRimeOfTheAncientMariner'' is one of the most referenced [[{{Romanticism}} Romantic]] poetry ever, to the point [[SmallReferencePools few people will known any others]] and a line from it is popularly ([[BeamMeUpScotty mis]])quoted. When it was first released, Coleridge's publisher told him most of its sales were from sailors that mistook it for a naval songbook and many critics found its archaic dialect impenetrable to read (which led to Coleridge toning it down for a second edition).
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** Except the Wedding Guest uses just as many 'thee's and 'thou's at the few points where he says anything.
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* NightmareFuel: [[http://www.mervynpeake.org/gallery/0235.jpg This]] illustration of Life-in-Death by Merwyn Peake (yes, the guy who wrote ''Literature/{{Gormenghast}}'') is not something you should look at right before you go to sleep. [[SchmuckBait You have been warned]].
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* NightmareFuel: [[http://www.mervynpeake.org/gallery/0235.jpg This]] illustration of Life-in-Death by Merwyn Mervyn Peake (yes, the guy who wrote ''Literature/{{Gormenghast}}'') is not something you should look at right before you go to sleep. [[SchmuckBait You have been warned]].
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* NightmareFuel: [[http://www.mervynpeake.org/gallery/0235.jpg This]] illustration of Life-in-Death by Merwyn Peake (yes, the guy who wrote ''Literature/{{Gormenghast}}'') is not something you should look at right before you go to sleep. [[SchmuckBait You have been warned]].
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** Except the Wedding Guest uses just as many 'thee's and 'thou's at the few points where he says anything.
** Let's not forget that this poem was written way back in the 1700s, so that may just have been normal speech of the day.
** Let's not forget that this poem was written way back in the 1700s, so that may just have been normal speech of the day.
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** Except the Wedding Guest uses just as many 'thee's and 'thou's at the few points where he says anything. \n** Let's not forget that this poem was written way back in the 1700s, so that may just have been normal speech of the day.
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotSymbolic: The Pilot's boat is steered by His Son at one point. As in, the boat that frees us from our sins is piloted by the Son.
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotSymbolic: The Pilot's boat is steered by His Son at one point. As in, the boat that frees us from our sins is piloted by the Son.Son.
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Pointing out an era-based iddue. Also, why do we always say the Mariner is immortal? That seems like a stretch to me.
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**Let's not forget that this poem was written way back in the 1700s, so that may just have been normal speech of the day.
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* FridgeBrilliance: The Mariner speaks in such an archaic dialect because he never kept up with English. Keep in mind he's immortal, and wanders the earth.
** Except the Wedding Guest uses just as many 'thee's and 'thou's at the few points where he says anything.
* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotSymbolic: The Pilot's boat is steered by His Son at one point. As in, the boat that frees us from our sins is piloted by the Son.
** Except the Wedding Guest uses just as many 'thee's and 'thou's at the few points where he says anything.
* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotSymbolic: The Pilot's boat is steered by His Son at one point. As in, the boat that frees us from our sins is piloted by the Son.