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** On the other hand, giving him concrete motivations and goals makes him a more relatable character, one who can actually be the focus on a story with satisfying highs and lows.
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* TheyChangedItNowItSucks: The ComicBook/{{New 52}} "Trinity of Sin" version gives off very strong impressions of this, having almost no mystery to him and a defined origin.
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* TheyChangedItNowItSucks: The ComicBook/{{New 52}} "Trinity of Sin" version gives off very strong impressions of this, having almost no mystery to him and a defined origin.origin of him being [[spoiler:a repentant Judas Iscariot]].
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* CompleteMonster: [[EvilSorceress Tala]], the Queen of Darkness, is a hellish being who acts as the Phantom Stranger's EvilCounterpart by [[TheCorrupter corrupting]] and ruining mortals, driving them to murder, mayhem and securing their deaths [[ForTheEvulz for her own amusement]]. Later trying to initiate nuclear war and seeing an underground civilization wiped out, Tala later uses the Dark Circle to attempt to conquer the world, summoning [[TheFourHorsemenOfTheApocalypse the Four Horsemen]] to completely exterminate it when that fails.
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* CompleteMonster: [[EvilSorceress Tala]], the Queen of Darkness, is a hellish being who acts as the Phantom Stranger's EvilCounterpart by [[TheCorrupter corrupting]] and ruining mortals, driving them to murder, mayhem and securing their deaths [[ForTheEvulz for her own amusement]]. Later trying to initiate nuclear war and seeing an underground civilization wiped out, Tala later uses the Dark Circle to attempt to conquer the world, summoning [[TheFourHorsemenOfTheApocalypse [[HorsemenOfTheApocalypse the Four Horsemen]] to completely exterminate it when that fails.
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*CompleteMonster: [[EvilSorceress Tala]], the Queen of Darkness, is a hellish being who acts as the Phantom Stranger's EvilCounterpart by [[TheCorrupter corrupting]] and ruining mortals, driving them to murder, mayhem and securing their deaths [[ForTheEvulz for her own amusement]]. Later trying to initiate nuclear war and seeing an underground civilization wiped out, Tala later uses the Dark Circle to attempt to conquer the world, summoning [[TheFourHorsemenOfTheApocalypse the Four Horsemen]] to completely exterminate it when that fails.
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** On the other hand, giving him concrete motivations and goals makes him a more relatable character, one who can actually be the focus on a story with satisfying highs and lows.
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* MartyStu: The character is starting to reach levels of this.
* TheyChangedItNowItSucks: The ComicBook/{{New 52}} "Trinity of Sin" version gives off very strong impressions of this, having almost no mystery to him and a defined origin. This also serves as a BaseBreaker.
* TheyChangedItNowItSucks: The ComicBook/{{New 52}} "Trinity of Sin" version gives off very strong impressions of this, having almost no mystery to him and a defined origin. This also serves as a BaseBreaker.
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* TheyChangedItNowItSucks: The ComicBook/{{New 52}} "Trinity of Sin" version gives off very strong impressions of this, having almost no mystery to him and a defined origin. This also serves as a BaseBreaker.
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* MartyStu: The character is starting to reach levels of this.
