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Writer On Board isnt ymmv
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** Naomi's father is explicitly libertarian, and is shown to be a ReasonableAuthorityFigure.
** One of the few stories we are given about Naomi's mother to show what she was like centers entirely around biting comments she made to her dean because he was "pro-Marxist".
** Of the Cabal's human minions, only the ex-military religious fanatic is shown to be remotely sympathetic and able to be redeemed. The "Gaia-hugging hippy" and the gun hater are just as vile as the racist rapist, and Naomi's attempt to talk Patrick down has no effect at all, unlike with Owens.
** Naomi's father is explicitly libertarian, and is shown to be a ReasonableAuthorityFigure.
** One of the few stories we are given about Naomi's mother to show what she was like centers entirely around biting comments she made to her dean because he was "pro-Marxist".
** Of the Cabal's human minions, only the ex-military religious fanatic is shown to be remotely sympathetic and able to be redeemed. The "Gaia-hugging hippy" and the gun hater are just as vile as the racist rapist, and Naomi's attempt to talk Patrick down has no effect at all, unlike with Owens.
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* CompleteMonster: [[MadScientist Mr. Saxby]] is the worst of the nightmarish [[EmotionEater Asuras]], with his evil exceeding even his cabal leader, Ghorm. A [[TheyLookJustLikeEveryoneElse seemingly mild-mannered, average little man]] in his human guise, Saxby assists in sowing chaos and evil, having people killed and arranging other atrocities and even terrorist activities. A particular fan of experimenting on human beings, Saxby takes others and subjects them to ghastly procedures to slake his curiosity, even [[BodyHorror stitching numerous human beings together into a horrific, agonized creature]] to go after the heroine Ryn with only vague promises he may spare it of its suffering. Having homeless people and drifters abducted to kill or to serve as food for dogs, Saxby later tries to target Ryn's lover Naomi before trying to kill Ryn herself.
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* CompleteMonster: [[MadScientist Mr. Saxby]] is the worst of the nightmarish [[EmotionEater Asuras]], with his evil exceeding even his cabal leader, Ghorm. A [[TheyLookJustLikeEveryoneElse seemingly mild-mannered, average little man]] in his human guise, Saxby assists in sowing chaos and evil, having people killed and arranging other atrocities and even terrorist activities. A particular fan of experimenting on human beings, Saxby takes others and subjects them to ghastly procedures to slake his curiosity, even [[BodyHorror stitching numerous human beings together into a horrific, agonized creature]] to go after the heroine Ryn with only vague promises he may spare it of its suffering. Having homeless people and drifters abducted to kill or to serve as food for dogs, Saxby later tries to target Ryn's lover Naomi before trying to kill Ryn herself.herself.
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** Naomi's father is explicitly libertarian, and is shown to be a [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure]].
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** Naomi's father is explicitly libertarian, and is shown to be a [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure]].ReasonableAuthorityFigure.
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* AuthorOnBoard: It isn't hard to guess the author's political leanings.
** Of the Cabal's human minions, only the ex-military religious fanatic is shown to be remotely sympathetic, rational, and able to be redeemed. The "Gaia-hugging hippy" and the gun hater are just as vile as the racist rapist, and Naomi's attempt to talk Patrick down has no effect at all, unlike with Owens.
** Of the Cabal's human minions, only the ex-military religious fanatic is shown to be remotely sympathetic, rational, and able to be redeemed. The "Gaia-hugging hippy" and the gun hater are just as vile as the racist rapist, and Naomi's attempt to talk Patrick down has no effect at all, unlike with Owens.
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* AuthorOnBoard: It isn't hard AuthorOnBoard
** Naomi's father is explicitly libertarian, and is shown toguess be a [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure]].
** One of theauthor's political leanings.
few stories we are given about Naomi's mother to show what she was like centers entirely around biting comments she made to her dean because he was "pro-Marxist".
** Of the Cabal's human minions, only the ex-military religious fanatic is shown to be remotelysympathetic, rational, sympathetic and able to be redeemed. The "Gaia-hugging hippy" and the gun hater are just as vile as the racist rapist, and Naomi's attempt to talk Patrick down has no effect at all, unlike with Owens.
** Naomi's father is explicitly libertarian, and is shown to
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** Of the Cabal's human minions, only the ex-military religious fanatic is shown to be remotely
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* AuthorOnBoard: It isn't hard to guess the author's political leanings.
** Of the Cabal's human minions, only the ex-military religious fanatic is shown to be remotely sympathetic, rational, and able to be redeemed. The "Gaia-hugging hippy" and the gun hater are just as vile as the racist rapist, and Naomi's attempt to talk Patrick down has no effect at all, unlike with Owens.
** Of the Cabal's human minions, only the ex-military religious fanatic is shown to be remotely sympathetic, rational, and able to be redeemed. The "Gaia-hugging hippy" and the gun hater are just as vile as the racist rapist, and Naomi's attempt to talk Patrick down has no effect at all, unlike with Owens.
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* CatharsisFactor: Ryn basically spends a large portion of her time vivisecting rapists and other human detritus, which can be quite enjoyable to read.
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* CompleteMonster: [[MadScientist Mr. Saxby]] is the worst of the nightmarish Asuras, even worse than their leader Ghorm. A [[TheyLookJustLikeEveryoneElse seemingly mild-mannered, average little man]] in his human guise, Saxby assists in sowing chaos and evil, having people killed and arranging other atrocities and even terrorist activities. A particular fan of experimenting on human beings, Saxby takes others and subjects them to ghastly procedures to slake his curiosity, even [[BodyHorror stitching numerous human beings together into a horrific, agonized creature]] to go after the heroine Ryn with only vague promises he may spare it of its suffering. Having homeless people and drifters abducted to kill or to serve as food for dogs, Saxby later tries to target Ryn's lover Naomi before trying to kill Ryn herself.
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* CompleteMonster: [[MadScientist Mr. Saxby]] is the worst of the nightmarish Asuras, [[EmotionEater Asuras]], with his evil exceeding even worse than their leader his cabal leader, Ghorm. A [[TheyLookJustLikeEveryoneElse seemingly mild-mannered, average little man]] in his human guise, Saxby assists in sowing chaos and evil, having people killed and arranging other atrocities and even terrorist activities. A particular fan of experimenting on human beings, Saxby takes others and subjects them to ghastly procedures to slake his curiosity, even [[BodyHorror stitching numerous human beings together into a horrific, agonized creature]] to go after the heroine Ryn with only vague promises he may spare it of its suffering. Having homeless people and drifters abducted to kill or to serve as food for dogs, Saxby later tries to target Ryn's lover Naomi before trying to kill Ryn herself.
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* CompleteMonster: [[MadScientist Mr. Saxby]] is the worst of the nightmarish Asuras, even worse than their leader Ghorm. A [[TheyLookJustLikeEveryoneElse seemingly mild-mannered, average little man]] in his human guise, Saxby assists in sowing chaos and evil, having people killed and arranging other atrocities and even terrorist activities. A particular fan of experimenting on human beings, Saxby takes others and subjects them to ghastly procedures to slake his curiosity, even [[BodyHorror stitching numerous human beings together into a horrific, agonized creature]] to go after the heroine Ryn with only vague promises he may spare it of its suffering. Having homeless people and drifters abducted to kill or to serve as food for dogs, Saxby later tries to target Ryn's lover Naomi before trying to kill Ryn herself.
