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The explosive looked be have been put behind Garret's apartment door, not the kid's chair.
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* CompleteMonster: Ronny "Del" Delaney, the [[DirtyCop corrupt partner]] of [[TheProtagonist Cliff Garret]], guns Garret down on a drug bust to cover his own dirty dealings, and then guns down the surviving criminals to keep his cover. When Garret, believed dead, infiltrates the mob as a supposed hitman, Del plays two mob outfits against each other before slaughtering any survivors to gain control himself. When he discovers Garret is alive, Del takes a little boy that Garret had befriended and ties him up with an explosive under his chair before attempting to detonate it to [[WouldHurtAChild kill the boy]] and Garret together.
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* CompleteMonster: Ronny "Del" Delaney, the [[DirtyCop corrupt partner]] of [[TheProtagonist Cliff Garret]], guns Garret down on a drug bust to cover his own dirty dealings, and then guns down the surviving criminals to keep his cover. When Garret, believed dead, infiltrates the mob as a supposed hitman, Del plays two mob outfits against each other before slaughtering any survivors to gain control himself. When he discovers Garret is alive, Del takes a little boy that Garret had befriended and ties him up with an explosive under his chair behind Garret's apartment door before attempting to detonate it to [[WouldHurtAChild kill the boy]] and Garret together.
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* CompleteMonster: Ronny "Del" Delaney, the [[DirtyCop corrupt partner]] of [[TheProtagonist Cliff Garret]], guns Garret down on a drug bust to cover his own dirty dealings, and then guns down the surviving criminals to keep his cover. When Garret, believed dead, infiltrates the mob as a supposed hitman, Del plays two mob outfits against each other before slaughtering any survivors to gain control himself. When he discovers Garret is alive, Del takes a little boy that Garret had befriended and ties him up with an explosive under his chair before attempting to detonate it to [[WouldHurtAChild kill the boy]] and Garret together.
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* CompleteMonster: Ronny "Del" Delaney, the [[DirtyCop corrupt partner]] of [[TheProtagonist Cliff Garret]], guns Garret down on a drug bust to cover his own dirty dealings, and then guns down the surviving criminals to keep his cover. When Garret, believed dead, infiltrates the mob as a supposed hitman, Del plays two mob outfits against each other before slaughtering any survivors to gain control himself. When he discovers Garret is alive, Del takes a little boy that Garret had befriended and ties him up with an explosive under his chair before attempting to detonate it to [[WouldHurtAChild kill the boy]] and Garret together.together.
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* CompleteMonster: Ronny "Del" Delaney is the [[DirtyCop corrupt partner]] of the hero Cliff Garret who guns Garret down on a drug bust to cover his own dirty dealings, and then guns down the surviving criminals to keep his cover. When Garret, believed dead, infiltrates the mob as a supposed hitman, Del plays two mob outfits against each other before slaughtering any survivors to gain control himself. When he discovers Garret is alive, Del takes a little boy that Garret had befriended and ties him up with an explosive under his chair before attempting to detonate it to [[WouldHurtAChild kill the boy]] and Garret together.
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* CompleteMonster: Ronny "Del" Delaney is Delaney, the [[DirtyCop corrupt partner]] of the hero [[TheProtagonist Cliff Garret who Garret]], guns Garret down on a drug bust to cover his own dirty dealings, and then guns down the surviving criminals to keep his cover. When Garret, believed dead, infiltrates the mob as a supposed hitman, Del plays two mob outfits against each other before slaughtering any survivors to gain control himself. When he discovers Garret is alive, Del takes a little boy that Garret had befriended and ties him up with an explosive under his chair before attempting to detonate it to [[WouldHurtAChild kill the boy]] and Garret together.
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* CompleteMonster: Ronny "Del" Delaney is the [[DirtyCop corrupt partner]] of the hero Cliff Garret who guns Garret down on a drug bust to cover his own dirty dealings, and then guns down the surviving criminals to keep his cover. When Garret, believed dead, infiltrates the mob as a supposed hitman, Del plays two mob outfits against each other before slaughtering any survivors to gain control himself. When he discovers Garret is alive, Del takes a little boy that Garret had befriended and ties him up with an explosive under his chair before attempting to detonate it to [[WouldHurtAChild kill the boy]] and Garret together.
