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* SalvagedStory: A lot of readers' viewed the Equestrian villains getting the short end of the stick, the Zelda villains being the major threat with [[spoiler:Ganondorf overpowering the Elements and Daring Do getting her flank kicked by the Church of Majora]], and Vaati single-handedly dealing with all the major villains while the Mane Six barely did anything. Come Season 2, and not only do the Mane Six hold their weight, they're the ones to finish off nearly every boss monster [[spoiler: including Demise himself]]. Lampshaded during that last example, when Twilight points out that they've been relying on him the whole time, but now that he's too exhausted to continue, they'll have to finish it themselves.
** The same could be said for how he brought back Diamond Tiara. Originally, she came up with the plan to burn down the Cutie Mark Crusaders' clubhouse with them inside it herself without Dethl there to possess her, was [[IHaveNoSon disowned by her father]], and was supposed to die when the Krylock bit her. However, following the backlash from many fans who felt he was too hard on her, he wrote the chapter that revealed that Diamond Tiara was turned into a Krylock by the venom, was released by Dethl, sicked on Ponyville, turned back to normal, and was revealed to have been possessed by Dethl when she committed her deed, rewriting the original chapter to include that.
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: A lot of readers' viewed the Equestrian villains getting the short end of the stick, the Zelda villains being the major threat with [[spoiler:Ganondorf overpowering the Elements and Daring Do getting her flank kicked by the Church of Majora]], and Vaati single-handedly dealing with all the major villains while the Mane Six barely did anything. Come Season 2, and not only do the Mane Six hold their weight, they're the ones to finish off nearly every boss monster [[spoiler: including Demise himself]]. Lampshaded during that last example, when Twilight points out that they've been relying on him the whole time, but now that he's too exhausted to continue, they'll have to finish it themselves.
** The same could be said for how he brought back Diamond Tiara. Originally, she came up with the plan to burn down the Cutie Mark Crusaders' clubhouse with them inside it herself without Dethl there to possess her, was [[IHaveNoSon disowned by her father]], and was supposed to die when the Krylock bit her. However, following the backlash from many fans who felt he was too hard on her, he wrote the chapter that revealed that Diamond Tiara was turned into a Krylock by the venom, was released by Dethl, sicked on Ponyville, turned back to normal, and was revealed to have been possessed by Dethl when she committed her deed, rewriting the original chapter to include that. However, it seems apparent that the author doesn't like Diamond Tiara very much, and despite bringing her back, [[AnArmAndALeg didn't go easy on her]].
** Admittedly, when she comes back the SECOND time, it's somewhat of a SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome, as she arrives to tell Zelda to head for the [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaSkywardSword Silent Realm]] in order to awaken the Guardians, having been given a steampunk makeover.
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** To some the fact Majora is the BigBad [[spoiler:and supposedly above a resurrected Demise]]. Some like it and find the character frightening and imposing, others feel there are other villains in the story (such as [[spoiler:Demise]] and even Dethl (particularly due to [[spoiler:he and Vaati being implied to be RelatedInTheAdaptation)]]) that'd fit better or would prefer the original video game's ChaoticEvil PsychopathicManchild over the long term thinking GodOfEvil with a massive VillainTeamUp it's presented as due to part of the character's fright factor coming from how unpredictable and insane it was.

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** To some the fact Majora is the BigBad [[spoiler:and supposedly above a resurrected Demise]]. Some like it and find the character frightening and imposing, others feel there are other villains in the story (such as [[spoiler:Demise]] and even Dethl (particularly due to [[spoiler:he and Vaati being implied to be RelatedInTheAdaptation)]]) that'd fit better or would prefer the original video game's ChaoticEvil PsychopathicManchild over the long term thinking GodOfEvil with a massive VillainTeamUp it's presented as due to part of the character's fright factor coming from how unpredictable and insane it was.

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* TearJerker: Vaati's flashbacks to the many times he was bullied as a child are just heartbreaking.
** Vaati completely breaks down as he realizes he's afraid of his own power, due to almost attacking Twilight when she tried to stop him from killing Discord as well as becoming sorely tempted to kill Celestia after she pressed him for information about his past.

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* TearJerker: Vaati's flashbacks to the many times he was bullied as a child are just heartbreaking.
** Vaati completely breaks down as he realizes he's afraid of his own power, due to almost attacking Twilight when she tried to stop him from killing Discord as well as becoming sorely tempted to kill Celestia after she pressed him for information about his past.
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** Admittedly, when she comes back the SECOND time, it's somewhat of a MomentOfAwesome, as she arrives to tell Zelda to head for the [[TheLegendOfZeldaSkywardSword Silent Realm]] in order to awaken the Guardians, having been given a steampunk makeover.

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** Admittedly, when she comes back the SECOND time, it's somewhat of a MomentOfAwesome, SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome, as she arrives to tell Zelda to head for the [[TheLegendOfZeldaSkywardSword [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaSkywardSword Silent Realm]] in order to awaken the Guardians, having been given a steampunk makeover.



* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: [[spoiler:The Ponyvillians and Vaati's forces managing to win a battle against Ganondorf's troops, especially for those who felt like the Zelda villains were overshadowing the Equestria side too much. Stand out moments include Derpy and the Doctor bringing down ''Phantom Ganon'' with a ballista while Maulgrim has him distracted and letting the knight finish him off.]]
--> [[spoiler:'''Phantom Ganon''']]: This...impossible.
--> '''Maulgrim''': This is Equestria. And here...''anything'' is possible.

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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: [[spoiler:The Ponyvillians and Vaati's forces managing to win a battle against Ganondorf's troops, especially for those who felt like the Zelda villains were overshadowing the Equestria side too much. Stand out moments include Derpy and the Doctor bringing down ''Phantom Ganon'' with a ballista while Maulgrim has him distracted and letting the knight finish him off.]]
--> [[spoiler:'''Phantom Ganon''']]: This...impossible.
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'''Maulgrim''': This is Equestria. And here...''anything'' is possible.



* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [[spoiler:Demise is resurrected...but Ghirahim is never shown reacting to this, or to Demise being killed DeaderThanDead. Given Ghirahim's defining trait in canon is UndyingLoyalty to Demise, this feels like wasted potential.]]

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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [[spoiler:Demise is resurrected...but Ghirahim is never shown reacting to this, or to Demise being killed DeaderThanDead. Given Ghirahim's defining trait in canon is UndyingLoyalty to Demise, this feels like wasted potential.]]]]
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: A lot of readers' viewed for viewing the ''Legend of Zelda'' characters as {{Possession Sue}}s, with the Equestrian villains getting the short end of the stick, the Zelda villains being the major threat with [[spoiler:Ganondorf overpowering the Elements and Daring Do getting her flank kicked by the Church of Majora]], and Vaati single-handedly dealing with all the major villains while the Mane Six barely did anything. Come Season 2, and not only do the Mane Six hold their weight, they're the ones to finish off nearly every boss monster [[spoiler: including Demise himself]]. Lampshaded during that last example, when Twilight points out that they've been relying on him the whole time, but now that he's too exhausted to continue, they'll have to finish it themselves.

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* AuthorsSavingThrow: A lot of readers' viewed for viewing the ''Legend of Zelda'' characters as {{Possession Sue}}s, with the Equestrian villains getting the short end of the stick, the Zelda villains being the major threat with [[spoiler:Ganondorf overpowering the Elements and Daring Do getting her flank kicked by the Church of Majora]], and Vaati single-handedly dealing with all the major villains while the Mane Six barely did anything. Come Season 2, and not only do the Mane Six hold their weight, they're the ones to finish off nearly every boss monster [[spoiler: including Demise himself]]. Lampshaded during that last example, when Twilight points out that they've been relying on him the whole time, but now that he's too exhausted to continue, they'll have to finish it themselves.
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* FridgeBrilliance: It seems the ponies accept Vaati because they know jackshit about his past... except they ''do''. Vaati actually mentioned he used to ''kidnap maidens to keep him company''. As ponies are very big about friendship and believing the best about everyone, they concluded Vaati merely wanted friends but was completely clueless about the ''proper'' manner to do so. Give him ''willing'' company and voilà, problem is solved.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [[spoiler:Demise is resurrected...but Ghirahim is never shown reacting to this, or to Demise being killed DeaderThanDead. Given Ghirahim's defining trait in canon is UndyingLoyalty to Demise, this feels like wasted potential.]]
** [[spoiler:It could be that Ghirahim ''doesn't know'', which means that [[FridgeHorror if he ever finds out, heads are going to roll...]]]]

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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [[spoiler:Demise is resurrected...but Ghirahim is never shown reacting to this, or to Demise being killed DeaderThanDead. Given Ghirahim's defining trait in canon is UndyingLoyalty to Demise, this feels like wasted potential.]]
** [[spoiler:It could be that Ghirahim ''doesn't know'', which means that [[FridgeHorror if he ever finds out, heads are going to roll...]]]]
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [[spoiler:Demise is resurrected...but Ghirahim is never shown reacting to this, or to Demise being killed DeaderThanDead. Given Ghirahim's defining trait in canon is UndyingLoyalty to Demise, this feels like wasted potential.]]

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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [[spoiler:Demise is resurrected...but Ghirahim is never shown reacting to this, or to Demise being killed DeaderThanDead. Given Ghirahim's defining trait in canon is UndyingLoyalty to Demise, this feels like wasted potential.]]]]
** [[spoiler:It could be that Ghirahim ''doesn't know'', which means that [[FridgeHorror if he ever finds out, heads are going to roll...]]]]
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I'll give this story credit when it deserves it, but I'm ALSO going to harshly critique the things it does very wrong. Reading that part the names were honestly the only way I even realized that was Starlight AT ALL.


** The VillainTeamUp. Some feel it makes the Church of Majora feel imposing and builds up the ultimate confrontation with it, other feel like it's completely forced and a large number of them are out of character just for considering teaming with Majora or each other.

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** The VillainTeamUp. Some feel it makes the Church of Majora feel imposing and builds up the ultimate confrontation with it, other feel like it's completely forced and a large number of them are out of character just for considering teaming with Majora or each other. Of particular note is Starlight Glimmer's involvement, as either her motives to spread her doctrine make sense or it's complete out of character for her to team up with the likes of Sombra and Tirek [[spoiler:particularly when she finally shows up and is team mates with Sunset Shimmer, who has the ''complete'' opposite worldview and goals than her]] to the point some feel like she's not even the same character.
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Again, I STILL hate this fanfic, but I give it credit where it's due.

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** Chrysalis [[spoiler:killing the Gohma's god, which simultaneously kills ALL of the Gohma, taking out a gigantic portion of Majora's army, and then holding off Majora's Avatar long enough for the Mane Six to destroy it with the Elements.]]
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** Admittedly, when she comes back the SECOND time, it's somewhat of a CROWNINGMOMENTOFAWESOME, as she arrives to tell Zelda to head for the [[TheLegendOfZeldaSkywardSword Silent Realm]] in order to awaken the Guardians, having been given a steampunk makeover.

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** Admittedly, when she comes back the SECOND time, it's somewhat of a CROWNINGMOMENTOFAWESOME, MomentOfAwesome, as she arrives to tell Zelda to head for the [[TheLegendOfZeldaSkywardSword Silent Realm]] in order to awaken the Guardians, having been given a steampunk makeover.
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** Admittedly, when she comes back the SECOND time, it's somewhat of a CrowingMomentofAwesome, as she arrives to tell Zelda to head for the [[LegendOfZeldaSkywardSword Silent Realm]] in order to awaken the Guardians, having been given a steampunk makeover.

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** Admittedly, when she comes back the SECOND time, it's somewhat of a CrowingMomentofAwesome, CROWNINGMOMENTOFAWESOME, as she arrives to tell Zelda to head for the [[LegendOfZeldaSkywardSword [[TheLegendOfZeldaSkywardSword Silent Realm]] in order to awaken the Guardians, having been given a steampunk makeover.
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** Admittedly, when she comes back the SECOND time, it's somewhat of a CrowingMomentOfAwesome, as she arrives to tell Zelda to head for the [[SkywardSword Silent Realm]] in order to awaken the Guardians, having been given a steampunk makeover.

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** Admittedly, when she comes back the SECOND time, it's somewhat of a CrowingMomentOfAwesome, CrowingMomentofAwesome, as she arrives to tell Zelda to head for the [[SkywardSword [[LegendOfZeldaSkywardSword Silent Realm]] in order to awaken the Guardians, having been given a steampunk makeover.
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** Admittedly, when she comes back the SECOND time, it's somewhat of a CrowingMomentOfAwesome, as she arrives to tell Zelda to head for the [[SkywardSword Silent Realm]] in order to awaken the Guardians, having been given a steampunk makeover.


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** Everything's going wrong due to Majora disabling Vaati, and summoning it's new allies to deal with the Princesses... only for [[UnexpectedCharacter DIAMOND TIARA]] to arrive to inform Zelda of their second wind.
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* FridgeLogic: Diamond Tiara's BittersweetEnding via AnArmAndALeg status. Surely, Vaati could just give her some healing Potions, Discord could just {{Reality Warp}} her some new limbs, etc.
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* FridgeLogic: Diamond Tiara's BittersweetEnding via AnArmAndALeg status. Surely, Vaati could just give her some healing Potions, Discord could just {{Reality Warp}} her some new limbs, etc.
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** To some the fact Majora is the BigBad [[spoiler:and supposedly above a resurrected Demise]]. Some like it and find the character frightening and imposing, others feel there are other villains in the story (such as [[spoiler:Demise]] and even Dethl (particularly due to [[spoiler:he and Vaati being implied to be RelatedInAdaptation)]) that'd fit better or would prefer the original video game's ChaoticEvil PsychopathicManchild over the long term thinking GodOfEvil with a massive VillainTeamUp it's presented as due to part of the character's fright factor coming from how unpredictable and insane it was.

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** To some the fact Majora is the BigBad [[spoiler:and supposedly above a resurrected Demise]]. Some like it and find the character frightening and imposing, others feel there are other villains in the story (such as [[spoiler:Demise]] and even Dethl (particularly due to [[spoiler:he and Vaati being implied to be RelatedInAdaptation)]) RelatedInTheAdaptation)]]) that'd fit better or would prefer the original video game's ChaoticEvil PsychopathicManchild over the long term thinking GodOfEvil with a massive VillainTeamUp it's presented as due to part of the character's fright factor coming from how unpredictable and insane it was.

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Less face it, the fact the Equestrian villains got curbstomped is one of a LOT of people's complaints about this story. And I know a number of people who find this fic's version of Majora LESS frightening and more generic than his canon incarnation for those reasons.


* AntiClimaxBoss: Volvagia, due to [[spoiler: Fluttershy using the Stare to free her from Ganondorf's control, and her giving up the Element of Kindness in exchange]].

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** Discord and Chrysalis, both of whom are just curbstomped by Vaati and his minions.
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Volvagia, due to [[spoiler: Fluttershy using the Stare to free her from Ganondorf's control, and her giving up the Element of Kindness in exchange]].


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** To some the fact Majora is the BigBad [[spoiler:and supposedly above a resurrected Demise]]. Some like it and find the character frightening and imposing, others feel there are other villains in the story (such as [[spoiler:Demise]] and even Dethl (particularly due to [[spoiler:he and Vaati being implied to be RelatedInAdaptation)]) that'd fit better or would prefer the original video game's ChaoticEvil PsychopathicManchild over the long term thinking GodOfEvil with a massive VillainTeamUp it's presented as due to part of the character's fright factor coming from how unpredictable and insane it was.

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