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** NarmCharm: The line has led to that story being easily the most popular among casual readers.
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* NightmareFuel: In between tits, author rants and more tits, [[ShockingSwerve the creators sometimes find room to be terrifying]].
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* NightmareFuel: In between tits, author rants and more tits, [[ShockingSwerve the creators sometimes find room to be terrifying]].terrifying.
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** Non-witches have criticized Tarot for her lack of modesty, with the typical retort being that she's "proud of her body"; this applies to other characters on occasion. However, Tarot seems to ignore the fact that ''strippers'' wear more then she does, and don't parade around outside. Not to mention that it's considerably easier to be proud of your body when that body is one that Playboy Bunnies would be jealous of.
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** Non-witches have criticized Tarot for her lack of modesty, with the typical retort being that she's "proud of her body"; this applies to other characters on occasion. However, Tarot seems to ignore the fact that ''strippers'' wear more then than she does, and don't parade around outside. Not to mention that it's considerably easier to be proud of your body when that body is one that Playboy Bunnies would be jealous of.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Crossed both in-universe and IRL by Boo Cat's vampire girlfriend Licorice Dust when she mind controls and rapes Tarot.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Crossed both in-universe and IRL out by Boo Cat's vampire girlfriend Licorice Dust when she mind controls and rapes Tarot.
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** The [[spoiler:deaths of Tarot, Raven, and Tarot's mom in the Norse Gods arc. Tarot is quartered, spit over a fire, and ''eaten by giants''.]] Seriously, what the f***?
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** The [[spoiler:deaths of Tarot, Raven, and Tarot's mom in the Norse Gods arc. Tarot is quartered, spit over a fire, and ''eaten by giants''.]] Seriously, what the f***?fuck?
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* StrawmanHasAPoint: Non-witches have criticized Tarot for her lack of modesty, with the typical retort being that she's "proud of her body"; this applies to other characters on occasion. However, Tarot seems to ignore the fact that ''strippers'' wear more then she does, and don't parade around outside. Not to mention that it's considerably easier to be proud of your body when that body is one that Playboy Bunnies would be jealous of.
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* StrawmanHasAPoint: StrawmanHasAPoint:
** Non-witches have criticized Tarot for her lack of modesty, with the typical retort being that she's "proud of her body"; this applies to other characters on occasion. However, Tarot seems to ignore the fact that ''strippers'' wear more then she does, and don't parade around outside. Not to mention that it's considerably easier to be proud of your body when that body is one that Playboy Bunnies would be jealous of.
** The in-universe prejudice against witches seems entirely understandable in a universe where Raven Hex has repeatedly used her magic to harm non-witches. And it's hard to take Tarot seriously as any sort of protector of muggles when she consistently shields her sister from any lasting consequences for her actions.
** Non-witches have criticized Tarot for her lack of modesty, with the typical retort being that she's "proud of her body"; this applies to other characters on occasion. However, Tarot seems to ignore the fact that ''strippers'' wear more then she does, and don't parade around outside. Not to mention that it's considerably easier to be proud of your body when that body is one that Playboy Bunnies would be jealous of.
** The in-universe prejudice against witches seems entirely understandable in a universe where Raven Hex has repeatedly used her magic to harm non-witches. And it's hard to take Tarot seriously as any sort of protector of muggles when she consistently shields her sister from any lasting consequences for her actions.
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* SoBadItsGood: As the above "haunted vagina" quote demonstrates. Not helped by the loads of {{Fanservice}} and {{Author Filibuster}}s. In fact, [[WebVideo/AtopTheFourthWall Linkara]] basically calls the comic porn.
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* SoBadItsGood: As the above "haunted vagina" quote demonstrates. Not helped by the loads of {{Fanservice}} and {{Author Filibuster}}s. In fact, [[WebVideo/AtopTheFourthWall Linkara]] basically calls the comic porn.
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* StrawmanHasAPoint: Non-witches have criticized Tarot for her lack of modesty, with the typical retort being that she's "proud of her body"; this applies to other characters on occasion. However, Tarot seems to ignore the fact that ''strippers'' wear more then she does, and don't parade around outside.
** Not to mention that it's considerably easier to be proud of your body when that body is one that Playboy Bunnies would be jealous of.
** Not to mention that it's considerably easier to be proud of your body when that body is one that Playboy Bunnies would be jealous of.
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* StrawmanHasAPoint: Non-witches have criticized Tarot for her lack of modesty, with the typical retort being that she's "proud of her body"; this applies to other characters on occasion. However, Tarot seems to ignore the fact that ''strippers'' wear more then she does, and don't parade around outside.
**outside. Not to mention that it's considerably easier to be proud of your body when that body is one that Playboy Bunnies would be jealous of.
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