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* OneSceneWonder: John Lormer's Old Man, whose sole scene consists of a kindly, sweet attendance on the main trio, attempts to help them with information and gets killed for his troubles, He delivers an episode TitleDrop. It is short, but surprisingly moving.
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* OneSceneWonder: John Lormer's Old Man, whose sole scene consists of a kindly, sweet attendance on the main trio, attempts to help them with information and gets killed for his troubles, He troubles; he also delivers an episode TitleDrop. It is short, but surprisingly moving.
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* OneSceneWonder: John Lormer's Old Man, whose sole scene consists of a kindly, sweet attendance on the main trio, an attempt to help give them information that gets him killed for his troubles, and the episode TitleDrop. Short, but surpisingly moving.
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* OneSceneWonder: John Lormer's Old Man, whose sole scene consists of a kindly, sweet attendance on the main trio, an attempt attempts to help give them with information that and gets him killed for his troubles, and the He delivers an episode TitleDrop. Short, It is short, but surpisingly surprisingly moving.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [=McCoy's=] illness. Just imagine what a modern day show could do with a character having a fatal disease and racing against time to find a cure, rather than knowing it'll be fixed somehow by the end of the episode. Especially as said character could be shown getting sicker and sicker over the course of several episodes for increased drama.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [=McCoy's=] illness. Just imagine what a modern day show could do with a character having a fatal disease and racing against time to find a cure, rather than knowing it'll be fixed somehow by the end of the episode. Especially as said character could be shown getting sicker and sicker over the course of several episodes for increased drama. For an extra kicker, the era of rigid StatusQuoIsGod ended a while ago, meaning the ailing character might ''not'' survive.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [=McCoy's=] illness. Just imagine what a modern day show could do with a character having a fatal disease and racing against time to find a cure, rather than knowing it'll be fixed somehow by the end of the episode.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [=McCoy's=] illness. Just imagine what a modern day show could do with a character having a fatal disease and racing against time to find a cure, rather than knowing it'll be fixed somehow by the end of the episode. Especially as said character could be shown getting sicker and sicker over the course of several episodes for increased drama.
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* TheissTitillationTheory: Natira wears a backless cut-out toga made of a green-gold satiny material. This contrasts with the psychedelic muumuus the other Fabrini wear. Whatever takes our attention away from those Highlanders meets Hell's Angels outfits the soldiers wear!
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* TheissTitillationTheory: Natira wears a backless cut-out toga made of a green-gold satiny material. This contrasts with the psychedelic muumuus worn by the other Fabrini wear.Fabrini. Whatever takes our attention away from those Highlanders meets Hell's Angels outfits the soldiers wear!
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* {{Narm}}: The good people of Yonada worshipping a doorbell.
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** The good people of Yonada worshipping adoorbell.doorbell.
** When he first catches sight of Natira, Bones looks like he's been frozen in place with some kind of MindControl power instead of having fallen in LoveAtFirstSight.
** The good people of Yonada worshipping a
** When he first catches sight of Natira, Bones looks like he's been frozen in place with some kind of MindControl power instead of having fallen in LoveAtFirstSight.
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* OneSceneWonder: John Lormer's Old Man, whose sole scene consists of a kindly, sweet attendance on the main trio, an attempt to help give them information that gets him killed for his troubles, and the episode TitleDrop. Short, but surpisingly moving.
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* {{Narm}}: The good people of Yonada worshipping a doorbell.
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* AssPull: McCoy's disease is an insoluble problem for most of the show, until Spock discovers that the Fabrini have extensive medical knowledge in their archives including, rather handily, a cure for the incurable (and one that works on humans, no less). At that point it takes about one minute of screen time to fix the good Doctor.
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* AssPull: McCoy's [=McCoy=]'s disease is an insoluble problem for most of the show, until Spock discovers that the Fabrini have extensive medical knowledge in their archives including, rather handily, a cure for the incurable (and one that works on humans, no less). At that point it takes about one minute of screen time to fix the good Doctor.
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* AssPull: McCoy's disease is an insoluble problem for most of the show, until Spock discovers that the Fabrini have extensive medical knowledge in their archives including, rather handily, a cure for the incurable (and one that works on humans, no less). At that point it takes about one minute of screen time to fix the good Doctor.
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* TheissTitillationTheory: Natira wears a backless cut-out toga made of a green-gold satiny material. This contrasts with the psychedelic muumuus the other Fabrini wear. Whatever takes our attention away from those Highlanders meets Hell's Angels outfits the soldiers wear!
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* TheissTitillationTheory: Natira wears a backless cut-out toga made of a green-gold satiny material. This contrasts with the psychedelic muumuus the other Fabrini wear. Whatever takes our attention away from those Highlanders meets Hell's Angels outfits the soldiers wear!wear!
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [=McCoy's=] illness. Just imagine what a modern day show could do with a character having a fatal disease and racing against time to find a cure, rather than knowing it'll be fixed somehow by the end of the episode.
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [=McCoy's=] illness. Just imagine what a modern day show could do with a character having a fatal disease and racing against time to find a cure, rather than knowing it'll be fixed somehow by the end of the episode.
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* TheissTitillationTheory: Natira wears a backless cut-out toga made of a green-gold satiny material. This contrasts with the psychedelic muumuus the other Fabrini wear. Whatever takes our attention away from those Highlanders meets Hell's Angels outfits the soldiers wear!
