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!! ''Fondant'' provides examples of:
* ContinuityLockOut: ''Fondant'' often makes allusions to events that occurred in ''Spaghetti Ice''. This wouldn't be bad... except ''Spaghetti Ice'' is lost media. ''Shaved Ice'' was originally written as an attempt to summarize the gist of ''Spaghetti Ice'' before becoming its own AlternateUniverse, further complicating the 'verse's continuity.
* ContinuityLockOut: ''Fondant'' often makes allusions to events that occurred in ''Spaghetti Ice''. This wouldn't be bad... except ''Spaghetti Ice'' is lost media. ''Shaved Ice'' was originally written as an attempt to summarize the gist of ''Spaghetti Ice'' before becoming its own AlternateUniverse, further complicating the 'verse's continuity.
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!! ''Fondant'' ''Cherry Ice'' provides examples of:
* ContinuityLockOut:''Fondant'' ''Cherry Ice'' often makes allusions to events that occurred in ''Spaghetti Ice''. This wouldn't be bad... except ''Spaghetti Ice'' is lost media. ''Shaved Ice'' was originally written as an attempt to summarize the gist of ''Spaghetti Ice'' before becoming its own AlternateUniverse, further complicating the 'verse's continuity.
* ContinuityLockOut:
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* ContinuityLockOut: ''Fondant'' often makes allusions to events that occurred in ''Spaghetti Ice''. This wouldn't be bad... except ''Spaghetti Ice'' is lost media. ''Shaved Ice'' was originally written as an attempt to summarize the gist of ''Spaghetti Ice'' before becoming its own AlternateUniverse.
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* ContinuityLockOut: ''Fondant'' often makes allusions to events that occurred in ''Spaghetti Ice''. This wouldn't be bad... except ''Spaghetti Ice'' is lost media. ''Shaved Ice'' was originally written as an attempt to summarize the gist of ''Spaghetti Ice'' before becoming its own AlternateUniverse.AlternateUniverse, further complicating the 'verse's continuity.
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* ContinuityLockOut: ''Fondant'' often makes allusions to events that occurred in ''Spaghetti Ice''. This wouldn't be as bad except that ''Spaghetti Ice'' is lost media. ''Shaved Ice'' was originally written as an attempt to summarize the gist of ''Spaghetti Ice'' before becoming its own AlternateUniverse.
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* ContinuityLockOut: ''Fondant'' often makes allusions to events that occurred in ''Spaghetti Ice''. This wouldn't be as bad bad... except that ''Spaghetti Ice'' is lost media. ''Shaved Ice'' was originally written as an attempt to summarize the gist of ''Spaghetti Ice'' before becoming its own AlternateUniverse.
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* ViewerPronunciationConfusion: As revealed in the chapter "Oneiros", the name "Vicerre" is intended to be pronounced with the Italian 'C', rather than a hard or soft 'C'. Most readers ignore this, however.
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* ViewerPronunciationConfusion: As revealed in the chapter "Oneiros", the name "Vicerre" is intended to be pronounced with the Italian 'C', rather than a hard or soft 'C'. Most readers ignore this, however.however.
!! ''Fondant'' provides examples of:
* ContinuityLockOut: ''Fondant'' often makes allusions to events that occurred in ''Spaghetti Ice''. This wouldn't be as bad except that ''Spaghetti Ice'' is lost media. ''Shaved Ice'' was originally written as an attempt to summarize the gist of ''Spaghetti Ice'' before becoming its own AlternateUniverse.
!! ''Fondant'' provides examples of:
* ContinuityLockOut: ''Fondant'' often makes allusions to events that occurred in ''Spaghetti Ice''. This wouldn't be as bad except that ''Spaghetti Ice'' is lost media. ''Shaved Ice'' was originally written as an attempt to summarize the gist of ''Spaghetti Ice'' before becoming its own AlternateUniverse.
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* UnintentionalPeriodPiece: The story takes place in an UrbanFantasy setting TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture,yet it's clear what era the story was written:
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* UnintentionalPeriodPiece: The story takes place in an UrbanFantasy setting TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture,yet TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture, yet it's clear what era the story was written:
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!! ''Spaghetti Ice'' provides examples of:
* UnintentionalPeriodPiece: The story takes place in an UrbanFantasy setting TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture,yet it's clear what era the story was written:
** GeneticEngineeringIsTheNewNuke is the PhlebotinumDuJour, whereas [[TechnologyMarchesOn technology has since marched on]].
** The archetypal, if deconstructed depiction of the SplitPersonality trope. Since mental disorders have become less and less stigmatized, Vicerre’s character would require careful writing in modern times.
* UnintentionalPeriodPiece: The story takes place in an UrbanFantasy setting TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture,yet it's clear what era the story was written:
** GeneticEngineeringIsTheNewNuke is the PhlebotinumDuJour, whereas [[TechnologyMarchesOn technology has since marched on]].
** The archetypal, if deconstructed depiction of the SplitPersonality trope. Since mental disorders have become less and less stigmatized, Vicerre’s character would require careful writing in modern times.
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!! ''Shaved Ice'' provides examples of:
* ViewerPronunciationConfusion: As revealed in the chapter "Oneiros", the name "Vicerre" is intended to be pronounced with the Italian 'C', rather than a hard or soft 'C'. Most readers ignore this, however.
* ViewerPronunciationConfusion: As revealed in the chapter "Oneiros", the name "Vicerre" is intended to be pronounced with the Italian 'C', rather than a hard or soft 'C'. Most readers ignore this, however.
