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* [[MagnificentBastard Magnificent Bitch]]: Alysanne
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* {{Die For Our Ship}}: Sansa gets a lot of hate, probably because [[spoiler: Gendry]] is her husband.
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* {{Die For Our Ship}}: Sansa gets a lot of hate, probably because she forced [[spoiler: Gendry]] is into marriage even though he told her husband.he didn't want to marry her.
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** Sansa. A lot of Arya's earlier troubles are caused by Sansa and yet, it is hard to blame her for being upset her husband loves her sister. Sansa also [[spoiler: loses several of her children and her husband's only living son was born to Arya]].
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** Sansa. A lot of Arya's earlier Arya and Gendy's troubles are caused by Sansa. She forces Gendry to marry her against his will, guilts Arya for the unhappiness in the marriage, manipulates the situation so Arya is sent away to a loveless marriage, and keeps Gendry from his son out of spite. Despite all this, the author tries to depict Sansa and yet, it is hard to blame her for being upset her husband loves her sister. Sansa as a victim. She also [[spoiler: loses several of her children and her husband's only living son was born to Arya]].
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** Rhaenys' words to Aegon [[spoiler: when she is bastardized: ]]
--->[[spoiler:''"I am Rhaenys Snow, and you made me that. If I do not deserve your name, you do not deserve my kisses."'' ]]
--->[[spoiler:''"I am Rhaenys Snow, and you made me that. If I do not deserve your name, you do not deserve my kisses."'' ]]
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* {{The Woobie}}: Poor Edric Dayne. [[spoiler: His marriage to Arya is a disaster, he never has the child he wants, and then he dies]].
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** Elia finally breaking down about the fire that [[spoiler: killed her family]].
** The deaths of [[spoiler: Rhaenys and Aemon. Especially Rhaenys because of how slow her death was.]]
* {{The Woobie}}: Poor Edric Dayne. [[spoiler: His marriage to Arya is a disaster, he never has the child he wants, and then hedies]].dies]].
** Elia who blames herself for the fire that [[spoiler: killed her father and her siblings and that disfigured her.]]
** The deaths of [[spoiler: Rhaenys and Aemon. Especially Rhaenys because of how slow her death was.]]
* {{The Woobie}}: Poor Edric Dayne. [[spoiler: His marriage to Arya is a disaster, he never has the child he wants, and then he
** Elia who blames herself for the fire that [[spoiler: killed her father and her siblings and that disfigured her.]]
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* {{Alternate Character Interpretation}}: Is Sansa justified in wanting Arya away from Gendry and the one who suffers the most from their actions or is she a BitchInSheepsClothing that only wants to keep them apart.
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* {{Alternate Character Interpretation}}: Is Sansa justified in wanting Arya away from Gendry and the one who suffers the most from their actions or is she a BitchInSheepsClothing that only wants to keep them apart.
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* {{Die For Our Ship}}: Sansa gets a lot of hate, probably because [[spoiler: Gendry]] is her husband.
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* [[MagnificentBastard Magnificent Bitch]]: Alysanne
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** Arya's wolf dreams reveal all she truly wants is to return to her family.
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** After Arya's marriage to [[spoiler: Renly]] Gendry, drunk and crying, tells Sansa that Arya is his only friend.
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* {{Jerkass Woobie}}: Arya. She thinks a great deal about her own happiness, even at the expense of others and many of her actions have dire consequences. However, she is aware of and feels guilt over a lot of these things, so it's hard not to feel sorry for her.
** Rhaenys. Despite every thing she does it is difficult not to feel sorry for her or the fact she loses everything she loves.
** Sansa. A lot of Arya's earlier troubles are caused by Sansa and yet, it is hard to blame her for being upset her husband loves her sister. Sansa also [[spoiler: loses several of her children and her husband's only living son was born to Arya]].
** Rhaenys. Despite every thing she does it is difficult not to feel sorry for her or the fact she loses everything she loves.
** Sansa. A lot of Arya's earlier troubles are caused by Sansa and yet, it is hard to blame her for being upset her husband loves her sister. Sansa also [[spoiler: loses several of her children and her husband's only living son was born to Arya]].
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* {{Tear Jerker}}: [[spoiler: The death of Edric Dayne]]. Arya feeling guilt about how she treated him doesn't help.
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* {{Squick}}: [[spoiler: Considering we watch them grow up, the relationships between [[BrotherSisterIncest Aemon, Rhaenys, Alysanne, and Brandon.]]]]
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* {{Squick}}: [[spoiler: Considering we watch them grow up, the relationships between [[BrotherSisterIncest Aemon, Rhaenys, Alysanne, and Brandon.]]]]]]]]
* {{The Woobie}}: Poor Edric Dayne. [[spoiler: His marriage to Arya is a disaster, he never has the child he wants, and then he dies]].
* {{The Woobie}}: Poor Edric Dayne. [[spoiler: His marriage to Arya is a disaster, he never has the child he wants, and then he dies]].
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* {{Harsher In Hindsight}}: A great deal of the first chapter, especially Arya's wish that Gendry marries Sansa. Her wondering if Gendry would ever dishonor Sansa by [[spoiler: fathering a bastard]].
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* {{Harsher In Hindsight}}: A great deal of the first chapter, especially Arya's wish that Gendry marries Sansa. Her wondering if Gendry would ever dishonor Sansa by [[spoiler: fathering a bastard]].
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* {{Harsher In Hindsight}}: A great deal of the first chapter, especially Arya's wish that Gendry marries Sansa.
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* {{Harsher In Hindsight}}: A great deal of the first chapter, especially Arya's wish that Gendry marries Sansa. Her wondering if Gendry would ever dishonor Sansa by [[spoiler: fathering a bastard]].
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* {{Harsher In Hindsight}} A great deal of the first chapter, especially Arya's wish that Gendry marries Sansa.
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* {{Harsher In Hindsight}} Hindsight}}: A great deal of the first chapter, especially Arya's wish that Gendry marries Sansa.
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* {{Harsher In Hindsight}} A great deal of the first chapter, especially Arya's wish that Gendry marries Sansa.
* {{Squick}}: [[spoiler: Considering we watch them grow up, the relationships between [[BrotherSisterIncest Aemon, Rhaenys, Alysanne, and Brandon.]]]]
* {{Squick}}: [[spoiler: Considering we watch them grow up, the relationships between [[BrotherSisterIncest Aemon, Rhaenys, Alysanne, and Brandon.]]]]
