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* {{Narm}}: (In the fake version) "Oh my goodness! That door is made of pine!"
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* {{Narm}}: (In the fake version) "Oh my goodness! That door is made of pine!"
* ShockingSwerve: [[spoiler:Wait... Isaac Daniels had a Mew? SINCE WHEN?!]]pine!"
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** Mia, Socially Awkward girl trying to fit into a society that's shunned her kind, or a sadistic psychopath who delights in seeing people suffer, and who's death in the main fic was better for everyone in general than her continued existence. Chapter 13 doesn't seem to help the former...
** Issac Daniels, It is actually debatable exactly how evil he is. He doesn't seem to delight in his brutal methods, or overtly derive gratification from them in any way. Considering he's the head of the church, it could simply be his duty to manage the more brutal, underhanded and unscrupulous operations; in this case, he might be simply unwaveringly dutiful instead of sickeningly sadistic.
** Heywood Laboratories, A scientific enterprise who thinks that their advances in bio-engineering can benefit all of mankind, or a corrupt corporation whose unethical experiments on Human and Pokemon alike are just for their own sick gain.
** Issac Daniels, It is actually debatable exactly how evil he is. He doesn't seem to delight in his brutal methods, or overtly derive gratification from them in any way. Considering he's the head of the church, it could simply be his duty to manage the more brutal, underhanded and unscrupulous operations; in this case, he might be simply unwaveringly dutiful instead of sickeningly sadistic.
** Heywood Laboratories, A scientific enterprise who thinks that their advances in bio-engineering can benefit all of mankind, or a corrupt corporation whose unethical experiments on Human and Pokemon alike are just for their own sick gain.
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** Mia, Mia: Socially Awkward girl trying to fit into a society that's shunned her kind, or a sadistic psychopath who delights in seeing people suffer, and who's whose death in the main fic was better for everyone in general than her continued existence. existence? Chapter 13 doesn't seem to help the former...
** IssacDaniels, Daniels: It is actually debatable exactly how evil he is. He doesn't seem to delight in his brutal methods, or overtly derive gratification from them in any way. Considering he's the head of the church, it could simply be his duty to manage the more brutal, underhanded and unscrupulous operations; in this case, he might be simply unwaveringly dutiful instead of sickeningly sadistic.
** HeywoodLaboratories, Laboratories: A scientific enterprise who thinks that their advances in bio-engineering can benefit all of mankind, or a corrupt corporation whose unethical experiments on Human and Pokemon alike are just for their own sick gain.gain?
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* EpilepticTrees: The villains of Morphic are The Church of Holy Truth, who believe that they must stop the merging of Pokémon and humans. [[VideoGame/PokemonBlackAndWhite Pokémon Black and White's]] new villains are [[http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/4/44/ Team Plasma]], a group with vaguely religious trappings that wants to completely separate Pokémon and Humans.''COINCIDENCE?!'' [[spoiler: Yeah, probably, especially considering that Chapter 13 was out before Team Plasma was even named.]]
* ShipTease: Dave and Mia get one [[spoiler:in the AU]]
* ShipTease: Dave and Mia get one [[spoiler:in the AU]]
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* EpilepticTrees: The villains of Morphic are The Church of Holy Truth, who believe that they must stop the merging of Pokémon and humans. [[VideoGame/PokemonBlackAndWhite Pokémon Black and White's]] new villains are [[http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/4/44/ Team Plasma]], a group with vaguely religious trappings that wants to completely separate Pokémon and Humans. ''COINCIDENCE?!'' [[spoiler: Yeah, probably, especially considering that Chapter 13 was out before Team Plasma was even named.]]
* ShipTease: Dave and Mia get one [[spoiler:in theAU]]AU]].
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** Heywood Laboratories, A scientific enterprise who thinks that their advances in bio-engineering can change the course of history, or a corrupt corporation whose unethical experiments on Human and Pokemon alike are just for their own sick gain.
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** Heywood Laboratories, A scientific enterprise who thinks that their advances in bio-engineering can change the course benefit all of history, mankind, or a corrupt corporation whose unethical experiments on Human and Pokemon alike are just for their own sick gain.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Depending on your political ideology and ethical outlook, you can view all the characters in positive or negative light.
** Mia, Socially Awkward girl trying to fit into a society that's shunned her kind, or a sadistic psychopath just channeling her thirst for blood in a more benevolent direction.
** Issac Daniels, It is actually debatable exactly how evil he is. He doesn't seem to delight in his brutal methods, or overtly derive gratification from them in any way. Considering he's the head of the church, it could simply be his duty to manage the more brutal, underhanded and unscrupulous operations; in this case, he might be simply unwaveringly dutiful instead of sickeningly sadistic.
** Heywood Laboratories, A scientific enterprise who thinks that their advances in bio-engineering can change the course of history, or a corrupt corporation whose unethical experiments on Human and Pokemon alike are just for their own sick gain.
** Mia, Socially Awkward girl trying to fit into a society that's shunned her kind, or a sadistic psychopath just channeling her thirst for blood in a more benevolent direction.
** Issac Daniels, It is actually debatable exactly how evil he is. He doesn't seem to delight in his brutal methods, or overtly derive gratification from them in any way. Considering he's the head of the church, it could simply be his duty to manage the more brutal, underhanded and unscrupulous operations; in this case, he might be simply unwaveringly dutiful instead of sickeningly sadistic.
** Heywood Laboratories, A scientific enterprise who thinks that their advances in bio-engineering can change the course of history, or a corrupt corporation whose unethical experiments on Human and Pokemon alike are just for their own sick gain.
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* ShipTease: Dave and Mia get one [[spoiler:in the AU]]
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* TheWoobie: ''Gabriel'', and maybe Will to a lesser extent.
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* EpilepticTrees: The villains of Morphic are The Church of Holy Truth, who believe that they must stop the merging of Pokémon and humans. [[PokemonBlackAndWhite Pokémon Black and White's]] new villains are [[http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/4/44/ Team Plasma]], a group with vaguely religious trappings that wants to completely separate Pokémon and Humans.''COINCIDENCE?!'' [[spoiler: Yeah, probably, especially considering that Chapter 13 was out before Team Plasma was even named.]]
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* EpilepticTrees: The villains of Morphic are The Church of Holy Truth, who believe that they must stop the merging of Pokémon and humans. [[PokemonBlackAndWhite [[VideoGame/PokemonBlackAndWhite Pokémon Black and White's]] new villains are [[http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/4/44/ Team Plasma]], a group with vaguely religious trappings that wants to completely separate Pokémon and Humans.''COINCIDENCE?!'' [[spoiler: Yeah, probably, especially considering that Chapter 13 was out before Team Plasma was even named.]]
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* {{Narm}}: (In the fake version) "Oh my goodness! That door is made of pine!"
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** [[spoiler: Your Mileage May Vary, but at Mia's funeral, the preacher actually couldn't think of anything good to say about her. Dave even notes this seems unfair.]]
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* UncannyValley: Mostly averted, actually -- the Pokémorphs tend to be on either the right or left side of the valley. However, [[spoiler:Jean]]'s evolution throws [[spoiler:her]] right into the bottom of the valley. One of the characters actually mentions the Uncanny Valley by name when looking at [[spoiler:her]].
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!!Tropes from Morphic:
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* TearJerker: [[spoiler:The ending. Full stop.]]]]
* UncannyValley: Mostly averted, actually -- the Pokémorphs tend to be on either the right or left side of the valley. However, [[spoiler:Jean]]'s evolution throws [[spoiler:her]] right into the bottom of the valley. One of the characters actually mentions the Uncanny Valley by name when looking at [[spoiler:her]].
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* ShockingSwerve: [[spoiler:wait... Isaac Daniels had a Mew? SINCE WHEN?!]]
* UncannyValley: Mostly averted, actually -- the Pokémorphs tend to be on either the right or left side of the valley. However, [[spoiler:Jean]]'s evolution throws [[spoiler:her]] right into the bottom of the valley. One of the characters actually mentions the Uncanny Valley by name when looking at [[spoiler:her]].
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* ShockingSwerve: [[spoiler:wait... Isaac Daniels had a Mew? SINCE WHEN?!]]
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Mia, arguably. She certainly did well enough to [[BreakoutCharacter get her own spinoff series]].
