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Lilly's father isn't qualified for Moral Event Horizon, because he isn't heinously evil in spite of his action being uncalled for.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Mr. Satou comes fairly close to this when he deliberately insults Hanako's burn scars and the cause of it (which is even worse than it sounds, considering that [[spoiler:her parents died in the same fire, with her mother protecting her]]), despite having been warned about them in advance, and causes her to have an emotional breakdown.
-->'''Mr. Satou''': "You're [[HeyYou that girl with the burns all over her]], right? What's your story anyway? You catch the oven on fire or something? And why are you [[ShrinkingViolet so timid]]? You need to be more upfront. You're never going to meet a good man if you’re acting like a scared rabbit all the time."
-->'''Mr. Satou''': "You're [[HeyYou that girl with the burns all over her]], right? What's your story anyway? You catch the oven on fire or something? And why are you [[ShrinkingViolet so timid]]? You need to be more upfront. You're never going to meet a good man if you’re acting like a scared rabbit all the time."
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* FridgeBrilliance: Mr. Satou's attitude at first comes off as an arbitrary grasping of the ConflictBall. But right at the end, we're given a reminder that he's related to Jigoro, who acts much the same way in canon. Being judgmental must run in the family.
** Technically, they're brothers in law, rather than blood relatives. However, given that it's pointed out in canon and in the fic that they hate each other, this turns into a fairly amusing case of the two being similar.
** Technically, they're brothers in law, rather than blood relatives. However, given that it's pointed out in canon and in the fic that they hate each other, this turns into a fairly amusing case of the two being similar.
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* FridgeBrilliance: Mr. Satou's attitude at first comes off as an arbitrary grasping of the ConflictBall. But right at the end, we're given a reminder that he's related to Jigoro, who acts much the same way in canon. Being judgmental must run in the family.\n** Technically, they're brothers in law, rather than blood relatives. However, given that it's pointed out in canon and in the fic that they hate each other, this turns into a fairly amusing case of the two being similar.
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-->'''Mr. Satou''': "You’re [[HeyYou that girl with the burns all over her]], right? What’s your story anyway? You catch the oven on fire or something? And why are you [[ShrinkingViolet so timid]]? You need to be more upfront. You’re never going to meet a good man if you’re acting like a scared rabbit all the time."
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-->'''Mr. Satou''': "You’re "You're [[HeyYou that girl with the burns all over her]], right? What’s What's your story anyway? You catch the oven on fire or something? And why are you [[ShrinkingViolet so timid]]? You need to be more upfront. You’re You're never going to meet a good man if you’re acting like a scared rabbit all the time."
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** Technically, they're brothers in law, rather than blood relatives. However, given that it's pointed out in canon and in the fic that they hate each other, this turns into a fairly amusing case of the two being NotSoDifferent.
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** Technically, they're brothers in law, rather than blood relatives. However, given that it's pointed out in canon and in the fic that they hate each other, this turns into a fairly amusing case of the two being NotSoDifferent.similar.
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: Lilly telling Hisao that she would have regretted leaving for Scotland and that her feelings for him would not have subsided with time, followed by [[spoiler:Hisao proposing and Lilly accepting]].* MoralEventHorizon: Mr. Satou comes fairly close to this when he deliberately insults Hanako's burn scars and the cause of it (which is even worse than it sounds, considering that [[spoiler:her parents died in the same fire, with her mother protecting her]]), despite having been warned about them in advance, and causes her to have an emotional breakdown.
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: Lilly telling Hisao that she would have regretted leaving for Scotland and that her feelings for him would not have subsided with time, followed by [[spoiler:Hisao proposing and Lilly accepting]].accepting]].
* MoralEventHorizon: Mr. Satou comes fairly close to this when he deliberately insults Hanako's burn scars and the cause of it (which is even worse than it sounds, considering that [[spoiler:her parents died in the same fire, with her mother protecting her]]), despite having been warned about them in advance, and causes her to have an emotional breakdown.
* MoralEventHorizon: Mr. Satou comes fairly close to this when he deliberately insults Hanako's burn scars and the cause of it (which is even worse than it sounds, considering that [[spoiler:her parents died in the same fire, with her mother protecting her]]), despite having been warned about them in advance, and causes her to have an emotional breakdown.
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: Lilly telling Hisao that she would have regretted leaving for Scotland and that her feelings for him would not have subsided with time, followed by [[spoiler:Hisao proposing and Lilly accepting]].
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* MoralEventHorizon: Mr. Satou comes fairly close to this when he deliberately insults Hanako's burn scars and the cause of it (which is even worse than it sounds, considering that [[spoiler:her parents died in the same fire, with her mother protecting her]]), despite having been warned about them in advance, and causes her to have an emotional breakdown.
-->'''Mr. Satou''': "You’re [[HeyYou that girl with the burns all over her]], right? What’s your story anyway? You catch the oven on fire or something? And why are you [[ShrinkingViolet so timid]]? You need to be more upfront. You’re never going to meet a good man if you’re acting like a scared rabbit all the time."
-->'''Mr. Satou''': "You’re [[HeyYou that girl with the burns all over her]], right? What’s your story anyway? You catch the oven on fire or something? And why are you [[ShrinkingViolet so timid]]? You need to be more upfront. You’re never going to meet a good man if you’re acting like a scared rabbit all the time."
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: Lilly telling Hisao that she would have regretted leaving for Scotland and that her feelings for him would not have subsided with time, followed by [[spoiler:Hisao proposing and Lilly accepting]].* MoralEventHorizon: Mr. Satou comes fairly close to this when he deliberately insults Hanako's burn scars and the cause of it (which is even worse than it sounds, considering that [[spoiler:her parents died in the same fire, with her mother protecting her]]), despite having been warned about them in advance, and causes her to have an emotional breakdown.
-->'''Mr. Satou''': "You’re [[HeyYou that girl with the burns all over her]], right? What’s your story anyway? You catch the oven on fire or something? And why are you [[ShrinkingViolet so timid]]? You need to be more upfront. You’re never going to meet a good man if you’re acting like a scared rabbit all the time.""
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-->'''Mr. Satou''': "You’re [[HeyYou that girl with the burns all over her]], right? What’s your story anyway? You catch the oven on fire or something? And why are you [[ShrinkingViolet so timid]]? You need to be more upfront. You’re never going to meet a good man if you’re acting like a scared rabbit all the time.
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** Technically, they're brothers in law, rather than blood relatives. However, given that it's pointed out in canon and in the fic that they hate each other, this turns into a fairly amusing case of the two being NotSoDifferent.
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* FridgeBrilliance: Mr. Satou's attitude at first comes off as an arbitrary grasping of the ConflictBall. But right at the end, we're given a reminder that he's related to Jigoro, who acts much the same way in canon. Being judgmental must run in the family.
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*CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: Lilly telling Hisao that she would have regretted leaving for Scotland and that her feelings for him would not have subsided with time, followed by [[spoiler:Hisao proposing and Lilly accepting]].
*FridgeLogic: Mr. Satou calls Hisao a "middle class bumpkin" at one point despite having married a journalist, who, while better off financially than a college student, is not in a well-paying career. [[spoiler:Then again, it should be noted that he ''wanted to believe'' that Hisao was unworthy of Lilly and his remarks can be seen as an extension of that]].
*MoralEventHorizon: Mr. Satou comes fairly close to this when he deliberately insults Hanako's burn scars and the cause of it (which is even worse than it sounds, considering that [[spoiler:her parents died in the same fire, with her mother protecting her]]), despite having been warned about them in advance, and causes her to have an emotional breakdown.
-->'''Mr. Satou''': "You’re [[HeyYou that girl with the burns all over her]], right? What’s your story anyway? You catch the oven on fire or something? And why are you [[ShrinkingViolet so timid]]? You need to be more upfront. You’re never going to meet a good man if you’re acting like a scared rabbit all the time."
