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* FridgeHorror: The revelation that Tommy didn't even get a trial to be put into prison. Even in canon, despite Dream ''technically'' not getting a trial either, half the server showed up to his treasure vault to see his attempt to blackmail the people of the SMP, which is as close to a trial as you can get on a server where the last valid political entity that ''could'' hold a trial got recently nuked into a hole to bedrock. In ''this'' AU, ''no one'' knew what actually happened to Tommy or Tubbo, and would have to rely on [[UnreliableExpositor Dream's account of the event]] to know what happened.
-->'''doingmothing (formerly Ochokinode):''' The part where he's like "I did not get a trial. that is [=WeirdChamp=]" implies that either a) the entire server thinks that Tommy killed Tubbo because Dream said so OR b) The entire server (minus Sam and Dream ofc) think that [[MurderSuicide Tommy killed Tubbo and then himself]] OR c) The entire server thinks that both Tommy and Tubbo are missing and/or dead.
-->'''doingmothing (formerly Ochokinode):''' The part where he's like "I did not get a trial. that is [=WeirdChamp=]" implies that either a) the entire server thinks that Tommy killed Tubbo because Dream said so OR b) The entire server (minus Sam and Dream ofc) think that [[MurderSuicide Tommy killed Tubbo and then himself]] OR c) The entire server thinks that both Tommy and Tubbo are missing and/or dead.
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** The revelation that Tommy didn't even get a trial to be put into prison. Even in canon, despite Dream ''technically'' not getting a trial either, half the server showed up to his treasure vault to see his attempt to blackmail the people of the SMP, which is pretty much as close to a trial as you can get on a server where the last valid political entity that ''could'' hold a trial got recently nuked into a hole to bedrock. In ''this'' AU, via implicit FridgeHorror, ''no one'' knew what actually happened to Tommy or Tubbo, and would have to rely on [[UnreliableExpositor Dream's account of the event]] to know what happened.
--->'''doingmothing (formerly Ochokinode):''' The part where he's like "I did not get a trial. that is [=WeirdChamp=]" implies that either a) the entire server thinks that Tommy killed Tubbo because Dream said so OR b) The entire server (minus Sam and Dream ofc) think that [[MurderSuicide Tommy killed Tubbo and then himself]] OR c) The entire server thinks that both Tommy and Tubbo are missing and/or dead.
--->'''doingmothing (formerly Ochokinode):''' The part where he's like "I did not get a trial. that is [=WeirdChamp=]" implies that either a) the entire server thinks that Tommy killed Tubbo because Dream said so OR b) The entire server (minus Sam and Dream ofc) think that [[MurderSuicide Tommy killed Tubbo and then himself]] OR c) The entire server thinks that both Tommy and Tubbo are missing and/or dead.
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-->'''Goldenrayofsunshine (the author):''' ''(replying to a comment)'' i just watched that stream [of Tommy being trapped in prison with Dream] and i literally feel like I'm going to throw up. Dream told Tommy to write How To Sex 9 and I yelled at my screen. How do I tag this to get secondhand clout when everyone starts writing prisoninnit fics?
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--->[[MadnessMantra Tubbo. Tubbox. Tubbox. Tubbox. Tubbo. Your Tubbo.]] He is not mine he is gone.
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--->[[MadnessMantra Tubbo. Tubbox. Tubbox. Tubbox. Tubbo. Your Tubbo.]] Tubbo]]. He is not mine he is gone.
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** The revelation that Tommy didn't even get a trial to be put into prison. Even in canon, despite Dream ''technically'' not getting a trial either, half the server showed up to his treasure vault to see his attempt to blackmail the people of the SMP, which is pretty much as close to a trial as you can get on a server where the last valid political entity that ''could'' hold a trial got recently nuked into a hole to bedrock. In ''this'' AU, ''no one'' knew what actually happened to Tommy or Tubbo, and would have to rely on [[UnreliableExpositor Dream's account of the event]] to know what happened.
--->'''Ochokinode:''' The part where he's like "I did not get a trial. that is [=WeirdChamp=]" implies that either a) the entire server thinks that Tommy killed Tubbo because Dream said so OR b) The entire server (minus Sam and Dream ofc) think that [[MurderSuicide Tommy killed Tubbo and then himself]] OR c) The entire server thinks that both Tommy and Tubbo are missing and/or dead.''
--->'''Ochokinode:''' The part where he's like "I did not get a trial. that is [=WeirdChamp=]" implies that either a) the entire server thinks that Tommy killed Tubbo because Dream said so OR b) The entire server (minus Sam and Dream ofc) think that [[MurderSuicide Tommy killed Tubbo and then himself]] OR c) The entire server thinks that both Tommy and Tubbo are missing and/or dead.''
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** The revelation that Tommy didn't even get a trial to be put into prison. Even in canon, despite Dream ''technically'' not getting a trial either, half the server showed up to his treasure vault to see his attempt to blackmail the people of the SMP, which is pretty much as close to a trial as you can get on a server where the last valid political entity that ''could'' hold a trial got recently nuked into a hole to bedrock. In ''this'' AU, via implicit FridgeHorror, ''no one'' knew what actually happened to Tommy or Tubbo, and would have to rely on [[UnreliableExpositor Dream's account of the event]] to know what happened.
--->'''Ochokinode:''' --->'''doingmothing (formerly Ochokinode):''' The part where he's like "I did not get a trial. that is [=WeirdChamp=]" implies that either a) the entire server thinks that Tommy killed Tubbo because Dream said so OR b) The entire server (minus Sam and Dream ofc) think that [[MurderSuicide Tommy killed Tubbo and then himself]] OR c) The entire server thinks that both Tommy and Tubbo are missing and/or dead.''
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--->Sam is such a pussy that he is SCARED of pussies. Cats. [[DontExplainTheJoke Because he is a creeper man.]]
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--->Sam is such a pussy that he is SCARED of pussies. Cats. [[DontExplainTheJoke Because he is a creeper man.]]man]].
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** Tommy's acknowledgement that inducing StockholmSyndrome is not how one gets girls, but he gets [[TraumaCongaLine awfully specific about how to induce it in a person]]...
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** Tommy's acknowledgement that inducing StockholmSyndrome Stockholm Syndrome is not how one gets girls, but he gets [[TraumaCongaLine awfully specific about how to induce it in a person]]...
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--->''"[[MadnessMantra Tubbo. Tubbox. Tubbox. Tubbox. Tubbo. Your Tubbo.]] He is not mine he is gone."''
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--->''"Button has the word "butt" in it. I pressed a button once and then [[LuredIntoATrap terrible things happened]]. Men came out of the walls."''
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--->''"Sex, drugs, and rock n roll. It is hard to rock out when somebody steals your fuckin vinyls. Can't have shit in L'Manberg. I just wanted my discs."''
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--->''"Sex is when you build a big tower all the way up to the clouds, and then say Fuck This."''
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--->''"I can't see the sun. Or hot girl her face is like the sun to me. Especially when I put a candle inside."''
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--->''"Why has Dream not murdered any women?\\
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Not me. Just killed a woman, feeling good."''
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Not me. Just killed a woman, feeling good."''
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--->''"You need to play the right music when you have sex. That is called setting the mood. Cat and Mellohi are the best. But if you don't have those, you can use [[BootstrappedLeitmotif Able Sisters]]. That way the sex will not get copyright claimed."''
** The many definitions of the word "pussy".
--->''"Sam is such a pussy that he is SCARED of pussies. Cats. [[DontExplainTheJoke Because he is a creeper man.]]"''
** The many definitions of the word "pussy".
--->''"Sam is such a pussy that he is SCARED of pussies. Cats. [[DontExplainTheJoke Because he is a creeper man.]]"''
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** The many definitions of the word
--->''"Sam
--->Sam is such a pussy that he is SCARED of pussies. Cats. [[DontExplainTheJoke Because he is a creeper man.
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--->''"There are only two women in this country and they are dating each other. I think that is called passing [[UsefulNotes/TheBechdelTest the Bechdel Test]]."''
** Tommy redefining the phrase "marriage fraud".
--->''"Marriage fraud is when you break out of prison."''
** Tommy redefining the phrase "marriage fraud".
--->''"Marriage fraud is when you break out of prison."''
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** Tommy redefining the phrase
--->''"Marriage
--->Marriage fraud is when you break out of prison.
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--->''"Dream has eyes where his nipples should be and that is stupid. Nipple eyes. Women think that is very ugly."''
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: The comment about "count[ing] down slowly from ten" can be interpreted two ways -- the author's intention was a reference to Dream threatening Tubbo for the discs, but since later streams came out, the same method is also used by Tommy and Ghostbur as a grounding mechanism, in reference to the duel for L'Manberg's independence.
* SugarWiki/FunnyMoments: Due to the {{Bathos}}-esque writing style of the fic, the angst is interspersed with the occasional bit of hilarity.
** Dream being "misogynistic", or so Tommy claims.
--->''"Why has Dream not murdered any women?\\
He must be a sexist.\\
Not me. Just killed a woman, feeling good."''
** Tommy doesn't want sex to be copyright-claimed.
--->''"You need to play the right music when you have sex. That is called setting the mood. Cat and Mellohi are the best. But if you don't have those, you can use [[BootstrappedLeitmotif Able Sisters]]. That way the sex will not get copyright claimed."''
** The many definitions of the word "pussy".
--->''"Sam is such a pussy that he is SCARED of pussies. Cats. [[DontExplainTheJoke Because he is a creeper man.]]"''
** The Big Man's thoughts on [=PuffyChu=].
--->''"There are only two women in this country and they are dating each other. I think that is called passing [[UsefulNotes/TheBechdelTest the Bechdel Test]]."''
** Tommy redefining the phrase "marriage fraud".
--->''"Marriage fraud is when you break out of prison."''
** Tommy claiming that Dream should be imprisoned for cheating on his speedrun.
** A jab at Dream's Minecraft skin.
--->''"Dream has eyes where his nipples should be and that is stupid. Nipple eyes. Women think that is very ugly."''
* HarsherInHindsight: The fanfic was released in mid-February 2021. A week later, in Dream SMP canon, Tommy would visit Dream in prison for closure, only to be trapped there with his abuser for over a week as the prison goes under lockdown, and then his last canon life is taken by Dream before being brought back to life from a torturous afterlife. Yeah...
* TearJerker: The fanfic in its entirety has driven readers to tears, with some of the most notable heartbreaking moments being:
** The many mentions of [[TragicBromance Tubbo and him being dead]].
--->''"[[MadnessMantra Tubbo. Tubbox. Tubbox. Tubbox. Tubbo. Your Tubbo.]] He is not mine he is gone."''
** Tommy's acknowledgement that inducing StockholmSyndrome is not how one gets girls, but he gets [[TraumaCongaLine awfully specific about how to induce it in a person]]...
** Tommy recalling himself unintentionally triggering the trap in the Final Control Room.
--->''"Button has the word "butt" in it. I pressed a button once and then [[LuredIntoATrap terrible things happened]]. Men came out of the walls."''
** And right after that, Tommy's comments about [[IJustWantToBeNormal just wanting to live in peace]]. Unfortunately for him, the Dream SMP is a CrapsackWorld.
--->''"Sex, drugs, and rock n roll. It is hard to rock out when somebody steals your fuckin vinyls. Can't have shit in L'Manberg. I just wanted my discs."''
** The highly nonchalant mention to the aborted [[DrivenToSuicide suicide]] attempt at Logstedshire during the Exile arc.
--->''"Sex is when you build a big tower all the way up to the clouds, and then say Fuck This."''
** Tommy noting that he can't see the sun again while in jail.
--->''"I can't see the sun. Or hot girl her face is like the sun to me. Especially when I put a candle inside."''
** The revelation that Tommy didn't even get a trial to be put into prison. Even in canon, despite Dream ''technically'' not getting a trial either, half the server showed up to his treasure vault to see his attempt to blackmail the people of the SMP, which is pretty much as close to a trial as you can get on a server where the last valid political entity that ''could'' hold a trial got recently nuked into a hole to bedrock. In ''this'' AU, ''no one'' knew what actually happened to Tommy or Tubbo, and would have to rely on [[UnreliableExpositor Dream's account of the event]] to know what happened.
--->'''Ochokinode:''' The part where he's like "I did not get a trial. that is [=WeirdChamp=]" implies that either a) the entire server thinks that Tommy killed Tubbo because Dream said so OR b) The entire server (minus Sam and Dream ofc) think that [[MurderSuicide Tommy killed Tubbo and then himself]] OR c) The entire server thinks that both Tommy and Tubbo are missing and/or dead.''
** Tommy's insistence that he's not broken while in Pandora's Vault.
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* SugarWiki/FunnyMoments: Due to the {{Bathos}}-esque writing style of the fic, the angst is interspersed with the occasional bit of hilarity.
** Dream being "misogynistic", or so Tommy claims.
--->''"Why has Dream not murdered any women?\\
He must be a sexist.\\
Not me. Just killed a woman, feeling good."''
** Tommy doesn't want sex to be copyright-claimed.
--->''"You need to play the right music when you have sex. That is called setting the mood. Cat and Mellohi are the best. But if you don't have those, you can use [[BootstrappedLeitmotif Able Sisters]]. That way the sex will not get copyright claimed."''
** The many definitions of the word "pussy".
--->''"Sam is such a pussy that he is SCARED of pussies. Cats. [[DontExplainTheJoke Because he is a creeper man.]]"''
** The Big Man's thoughts on [=PuffyChu=].
--->''"There are only two women in this country and they are dating each other. I think that is called passing [[UsefulNotes/TheBechdelTest the Bechdel Test]]."''
** Tommy redefining the phrase "marriage fraud".
--->''"Marriage fraud is when you break out of prison."''
** Tommy claiming that Dream should be imprisoned for cheating on his speedrun.
** A jab at Dream's Minecraft skin.
--->''"Dream has eyes where his nipples should be and that is stupid. Nipple eyes. Women think that is very ugly."''
* HarsherInHindsight: The fanfic was released in mid-February 2021. A week later, in Dream SMP canon, Tommy would visit Dream in prison for closure, only to be trapped there with his abuser for over a week as the prison goes under lockdown, and then his last canon life is taken by Dream before being brought back to life from a torturous afterlife. Yeah...
* TearJerker: The fanfic in its entirety has driven readers to tears, with some of the most notable heartbreaking moments being:
** The many mentions of [[TragicBromance Tubbo and him being dead]].
--->''"[[MadnessMantra Tubbo. Tubbox. Tubbox. Tubbox. Tubbo. Your Tubbo.]] He is not mine he is gone."''
** Tommy's acknowledgement that inducing StockholmSyndrome is not how one gets girls, but he gets [[TraumaCongaLine awfully specific about how to induce it in a person]]...
** Tommy recalling himself unintentionally triggering the trap in the Final Control Room.
--->''"Button has the word "butt" in it. I pressed a button once and then [[LuredIntoATrap terrible things happened]]. Men came out of the walls."''
** And right after that, Tommy's comments about [[IJustWantToBeNormal just wanting to live in peace]]. Unfortunately for him, the Dream SMP is a CrapsackWorld.
--->''"Sex, drugs, and rock n roll. It is hard to rock out when somebody steals your fuckin vinyls. Can't have shit in L'Manberg. I just wanted my discs."''
** The highly nonchalant mention to the aborted [[DrivenToSuicide suicide]] attempt at Logstedshire during the Exile arc.
--->''"Sex is when you build a big tower all the way up to the clouds, and then say Fuck This."''
** Tommy noting that he can't see the sun again while in jail.
--->''"I can't see the sun. Or hot girl her face is like the sun to me. Especially when I put a candle inside."''
** The revelation that Tommy didn't even get a trial to be put into prison. Even in canon, despite Dream ''technically'' not getting a trial either, half the server showed up to his treasure vault to see his attempt to blackmail the people of the SMP, which is pretty much as close to a trial as you can get on a server where the last valid political entity that ''could'' hold a trial got recently nuked into a hole to bedrock. In ''this'' AU, ''no one'' knew what actually happened to Tommy or Tubbo, and would have to rely on [[UnreliableExpositor Dream's account of the event]] to know what happened.
--->'''Ochokinode:''' The part where he's like "I did not get a trial. that is [=WeirdChamp=]" implies that either a) the entire server thinks that Tommy killed Tubbo because Dream said so OR b) The entire server (minus Sam and Dream ofc) think that [[MurderSuicide Tommy killed Tubbo and then himself]] OR c) The entire server thinks that both Tommy and Tubbo are missing and/or dead.''
** Tommy's insistence that he's not broken while in Pandora's Vault.
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