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** Part way through the story, Grace writes that she's come to enjoy writing so much that she's enrolling in a writing course. Later in Chapter 12, Snape, who had been given several levels of AdaptationalAttractiveness, is suddenly called "Greg". Two chapters later, Grace reveals that her writing teacher is called Greg, and in the next chapter she explains her husband does not want her to continue writing the story. This is a sudden and marked change of opinion, as her husband had been noted in previous author's notes to be actively encouraging Grace to write the story as he considered it the Lord's work. For those who don't think (or don't care about the possibility of) this story being a TrollFic, there's the speculation that something happened between Grace and Greg that was discovered by Grace's husband...
*** And if it is a TrollFic, the idea makes for a hilarious side plot.
*** And if it is a TrollFic, the idea makes for a hilarious side plot.
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** Part way through the story, Grace writes that she's come to enjoy writing so much that she's enrolling in a writing course. Later in Chapter 12, Snape, who had been given several levels of AdaptationalAttractiveness, is suddenly called "Greg". Two chapters later, Grace reveals that her writing teacher is called Greg, and in the next chapter she explains her husband does not want her to continue writing the story. This is a sudden and marked change of opinion, as her husband had been noted in previous author's notes to be actively encouraging Grace to write the story as he considered it the Lord's work. For those who don't think (or don't care about the possibility of) this story being a TrollFic, there's the speculation that something happened between Grace and Greg that was discovered by Grace's husband...
*** Andhusband...[[note]]And if it is a TrollFic, the idea makes for a hilarious side plot.[[/note]]
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** [[https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PL4gt81gOBFeVTI2IeV9X6Agk59gazNfZN This dramatic reading]] plays Hagrid likes he’s a pedophile; in the accompanying art he keeps staring at Harry a bit too hard, and the description of the first chapter jokes on how unsuspicious it is for strange man to kidnap children.
*** The same reading reinterprets the briefly mentioned head of Hufflepuff Hat, "[[GenderFlip Mr. Sprout]]", as normal Professor Sprout with a fake mustache on so she can still teach at the Hogwarts, since it now has all-male educators.
*** The same reading reinterprets the briefly mentioned head of Hufflepuff Hat, "[[GenderFlip Mr. Sprout]]", as normal Professor Sprout with a fake mustache on so she can still teach at the Hogwarts, since it now has all-male educators.
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** [[https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PL4gt81gOBFeVTI2IeV9X6Agk59gazNfZN This dramatic reading]] plays Hagrid likes he’s he's a pedophile; in the accompanying art he keeps staring at Harry a bit too hard, and the description of the first chapter jokes on how unsuspicious it is for strange man to kidnap children.
***children. The same reading reinterprets the briefly mentioned head of Hufflepuff Hat, "[[GenderFlip Mr. Sprout]]", as normal Professor Sprout with a fake mustache on so she can still teach at the Hogwarts, since it now has all-male educators.
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* HoYay: Since Harry is the point of view character, Grace Ann Parsons' lusting for "Mr. Snape" feels like Harry has a big crush.
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* HoYay: Since Harry is the point of view character, Grace Ann Parsons' lusting for "Mr. Snape" feels like Harry has a big crush.PrecociousCrush.
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* ValuesDissonance: If it is serious and not invoking DeliberateValuesDissonance, it can ''definitely'' come across as this to anybody that doesn't live the same fundamentalist Christian homeschool lifestyle the author endorses.
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* ValuesDissonance: If it is serious and not invoking DeliberateValuesDissonance, it can ''definitely'' come across as this to anybody that doesn't live the same fundamentalist Christian homeschool lifestyle the author endorses.
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* RonTheDeathEater: Heavily downplayed, but Ron and his entire family are "Slytherin Hats", which is depicted as the worst hat. Ron himself isn't evil, though; just misguided.
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*** The same reading reinterprets the briefly mentioned head of Hufflepuff Hat, [[GenderFlip "Mr. Sprout"]], "[[GenderFlip Mr. Sprout]]", as normal Professor Sprout with a fake mustache on so she can still teach at the Hogwarts, since it now has all-male educators.
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*** And if it is a TrollFic, the idea makes for a hilarious side plot.
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* AcceptableReligiousTargets: Essentially each Hogwarts house is a different sect, and they chose to have Slyntherin represent the Catholics, probably due to how many hardcore Evangelicals (such as [[ComicBook/ChickTracts Jack Chick]]) tend to view Catholics with scorn.
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** [[https://m.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL4gt81gOBFeVTI2IeV9X6Agk59gazNfZN This dramatic reading]] plays Hagrid likes he’s a pedophile; in the accompanying art he keeps staring at Harry a bit too hard, and the description of the first chapter jokes on how unsuspicious it is for strange man to kidnap children.
*** The same reading reinterprets the briefly mentioned head of Hufflepuff Hat, "Mr. Sprout," as normal Professor Sprout with a fake mustache on so she can still teach at the Hogwarts, since it now has all male educators.
*** The same reading reinterprets the briefly mentioned head of Hufflepuff Hat, "Mr. Sprout," as normal Professor Sprout with a fake mustache on so she can still teach at the Hogwarts, since it now has all male educators.
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** [[https://m.youtube.[[https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PL4gt81gOBFeVTI2IeV9X6Agk59gazNfZN This dramatic reading]] plays Hagrid likes he’s a pedophile; in the accompanying art he keeps staring at Harry a bit too hard, and the description of the first chapter jokes on how unsuspicious it is for strange man to kidnap children.
*** The same reading reinterprets the briefly mentioned head of Hufflepuff Hat, [[GenderFlip "Mr.Sprout," Sprout"]], as normal Professor Sprout with a fake mustache on so she can still teach at the Hogwarts, since it now has all male all-male educators.
*** The same reading reinterprets the briefly mentioned head of Hufflepuff Hat, [[GenderFlip "Mr.
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** Everything, just everything about this fanfic. It's rightfully the most cringeworthy and infamous Harry Potter fanfic after ''Fanfic/MyImmortal''.
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** Everything, just everything about this fanfic. It's rightfully the most cringeworthy cringe-worthy and infamous Harry Potter fanfic after ''Fanfic/MyImmortal''.
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* SelfFanservice: The notoriously greasy Severus Snape is now the "ruggedly handsome" "Mr. Snape." [[AuthorAppeal With chest hair]]. He's even renamed 'Greg', the same name as the author's supposed creative writing teacher...
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* SelfFanservice: The notoriously greasy Severus Snape is now the "ruggedly handsome" "Mr. Snape." Snape". [[AuthorAppeal With chest hair]]. He's even renamed 'Greg', the same name as the author's supposed creative writing teacher...
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* SelfFanservice: The notoriously greasy Severus Snape is now the "ruggedly handsome" "Mr. Snape." [[AuthorAppeal With chest hair]]. He's even renamed 'Greg', the same name as the author's supposed creative writing teacher...
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* ValuesDissonance: If it is serious and not invoking DeliberateValuesDissonance, it can ''definitely'' come across as this to anybody that doesn't live the same fundamentalist Christian homeschool lifestyle the author endorses.
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* ValuesDissonance: If it is serious and not invoking DeliberateValuesDissonance, it can ''definitely'' come across as this to anybody that doesn't live the same fundamentalist Christian homeschool lifestyle the author endorses.endorses.
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** Everything, just everything about this fanfic. It’s rightfully the most cringeworthy and infamous Harry Potter fanfic after “Fanfic/MyImmortal”.
** The fact that Grace Ann Parsons describes Hagrid’s moose head as “tasteful”.
** The fact that Grace Ann Parsons describes Hagrid’s moose head as “tasteful”.
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** Everything, just everything about this fanfic. It’s It's rightfully the most cringeworthy and infamous Harry Potter fanfic after “Fanfic/MyImmortal”.
''Fanfic/MyImmortal''.
** The fact that Grace Ann Parsons describesHagrid’s Hagrid's moose head as “tasteful”."tasteful".
** The fact that Grace Ann Parsons describes
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** And given that Harry is supposed to be eleven and his student, it’s also this.
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** And Following from the HoYay entry, given that Harry is supposed to be eleven and his student, it’s it's also this.
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-->'''Voldemort''': "I just got annoyed by the ridiculous straw man some Christians have made out of atheism, so, whenever I see someone ranting about how depraved and evil we nonbelievers are, I reply with something like [kristians all sux. their religion is stoopid and should be illegal]. You know, taking that stereotype to an extreme to point out how ridiculous it is.
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** At one point in Chapter 12, Snape, who had been given several levels of AdaptationalAttractiveness, is suddenly called "Greg". Two chapters later, Grace reveals that her writing teacher is called Greg, and in the next chapter she explains her husband does not want her to continue writing the story. For those who don't think (or don't care about the possibility of) this story being a TrollFic, there's the speculation that something happened between Grace and Greg that was discovered by Grace's husband...
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** At one point Part way through the story, Grace writes that she's come to enjoy writing so much that she's enrolling in a writing course. Later in Chapter 12, Snape, who had been given several levels of AdaptationalAttractiveness, is suddenly called "Greg". Two chapters later, Grace reveals that her writing teacher is called Greg, and in the next chapter she explains her husband does not want her to continue writing the story. This is a sudden and marked change of opinion, as her husband had been noted in previous author's notes to be actively encouraging Grace to write the story as he considered it the Lord's work. For those who don't think (or don't care about the possibility of) this story being a TrollFic, there's the speculation that something happened between Grace and Greg that was discovered by Grace's husband...
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** Are the magical effects of prayer real, or are the Christian characters delusional? Despite Harry managing to get God to convert Draco into a Gryffindor Hat, [[spoiler:none of their prayers have any effect on OnlySaneMan Voldemort even as the entire school shouts him down with prayers and accusations and tries to convert him as well. The last few lines can easily be interpreted as deliberately highlighting the Christian characters' actual powerlessness and irrationality.]]
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** Are the magical effects of prayer real, supposed to be 100% real in-universe, or are the Christian characters delusional? Despite Harry managing to get God to convert Draco into a Gryffindor Hat, [[spoiler:none of their prayers have any effect on OnlySaneMan Voldemort even as the entire school shouts him down with prayers and accusations and tries to convert him as well. The last few lines can easily be interpreted as deliberately highlighting the Christian characters' actual powerlessness and irrationality.]]
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** Are the magical effects of prayer real, or are the Christian characters delusional? Despite Harry managing to get God to turn convert Draco into a Gryffindor Hat, [[spoiler:none of their prayers have any effect on OnlySaneMan Voldemort even as the entire school shouts him down with prayers and accusations.accusations and tries to convert him as well. The last few lines can easily be interpreted as deliberately highlighting the Christian characters' actual powerlessness and irrationality.]]
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** In Chapter 12, the story tells us to imagine what would happen if Harry didn't know to "love the sin, not the sinner", which is ''[[EpicFail exactly the opposite]]'' that the original phrase says.
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** In Chapter 12, the story tells us to imagine what would happen if Harry didn't know to "love the sin, not the sinner", which is ''[[EpicFail exactly the opposite]]'' that to what the original phrase says.
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** In Chapter 12, the story tells us to imagine what would happen if Harry didn't know to "love the sin, not the sinner", which is ''[[EpicFail exactly the opposite]]'' that the original phrase says.
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** At one point in Chapter 12, Snape, who had been given several levels of AdaptationalAttractiveness, is suddenly called "Greg". Two chapters later, Grace reveals that her writing teacher is called Greg, and in the next chapter she explains her husband does not want her to continue writing the story. For those who don't think (or don't care about the possibility of) this story being a TrollFic, there's the speculation that something happened between Grace and Greg that was discovered by Grace's husband...
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* SugarWiki/FunnyMoments: Everything, just everything about this fanfic. It’s rightfully the most cringeworthy and infamous Harry Potter fanfic after “Fanfic/MyImmortal”.
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** Everything, just everything about this fanfic. It’s rightfully the most cringeworthy and infamous Harry Potter fanfic after “Fanfic/MyImmortal”.
** Everything, just everything about this fanfic. It’s rightfully the most cringeworthy and infamous Harry Potter fanfic after “Fanfic/MyImmortal”.
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* BrokenAesop: One of the messages the author desperately tries to hammer in during the author's notes is that sorcery and witchcraft are bad, and that's why she's rewriting the story. That said, the prayers that make food appear and perform actions around the school are much more akin to magic rather than religious faith, and God is treated as a magic wand who conjures whatever they need by just praying for it. People who dislike the moral will point out how they're just using sorcery with a religious coat of paint over it, and those who like the moral will be able to testify that praying does not magically fill a table with cooked bacon