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* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Seriously. Nothing goes well for anyone. Every human protagonist ends up dead. And that's before the world ends.
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* {{Squick}}: One issue has [[spoiler: Satan]] pissing on Jesus Christ.
* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Seriously. Nothing goes well for anyone. Every human protagonist ends up dead. And that's before the world ends.Christ.
* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Seriously. Nothing goes well for anyone. Every human protagonist ends up dead. And that's before the world ends.
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: Seriously. Nothing goes well for anyone. Every human protagonist ends up dead. And that's before the world ends.
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* {{Squick}}: One issue has [[spoiler: Satan]] pissing on Jesus Christ.Christ.
* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Seriously. Nothing goes well for anyone. Every human protagonist ends up dead. And that's before the world ends.
* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Seriously. Nothing goes well for anyone. Every human protagonist ends up dead. And that's before the world ends.
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* CompleteMonster: {{Satan}} himself kicks off the plot by murdering {{God}}, and settles back to enjoy the resulting chaos as the pagan gods swoop in to turn Earth into [[DivineConflict a battlefield]] that kill billions of humans.
Enslaving Hades as a lackey, while regularly sleeping with his wife Persephone, Satan engineers far more death & destruction while also awakening the immortal dragon that finally resets reality, killing everything that lives as retribution for Satan's misdeeds, but not before eating Satan so he shares its belly with Jesus for thousands of years.
Satan tricks Jesus into recreating the Gods, then later shoves him into a volcano to burn forever upon their escape. Satan then engineers a new conflict so he can attack God and kill him again, [[GoOutWithASmile content to die]] having achieved everything he ever wanted.
Enslaving Hades as a lackey, while regularly sleeping with his wife Persephone, Satan engineers far more death & destruction while also awakening the immortal dragon that finally resets reality, killing everything that lives as retribution for Satan's misdeeds, but not before eating Satan so he shares its belly with Jesus for thousands of years.
Satan tricks Jesus into recreating the Gods, then later shoves him into a volcano to burn forever upon their escape. Satan then engineers a new conflict so he can attack God and kill him again, [[GoOutWithASmile content to die]] having achieved everything he ever wanted.
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* CompleteMonster: {{Satan}} himself kicks off the plot by murdering {{God}}, and settles back to enjoy the resulting chaos as the pagan gods swoop in to and turn Earth into [[DivineConflict a battlefield]] that kill billions of humans.
humans. Enslaving Hades as a lackey, lackey while regularly sleeping with his wife Persephone, Satan Hades engineers far more death & and destruction while also awakening the immortal dragon that finally resets reality, killing everything that lives as in retribution for Satan's misdeeds, misdeeds but not before eating Satan so he shares to share its belly with Jesus for thousands of years.
years. Satan tricks Jesus into recreating the Gods, then and later shoves him into a volcano to burn forever upon their escape. Satan then engineers a new conflict so he can attack God and kill him again, [[GoOutWithASmile content to die]] having achieved everything he ever wanted.
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* CompleteMonster: {{Satan}} himself kicks off the plot by murdering {{God}}, and settles back to enjoy the resulting chaos as the pagan gods swoop in and to turn Earth into [[DivineConflict a battlefield]] that kill billions of humans. humans.
Enslaving Hades as alackey lackey, while regularly sleeping with his wife Persephone, Satan engineers far more death and & destruction while also awakening the immortal dragon that finally resets reality, killing everything that lives in as retribution for Satan's misdeeds misdeeds, but not before eating Satan to share so he shares its belly with Jesus for thousands of years. years.
Satan tricks Jesus into recreating the Gods,and then later shoves him into a volcano to burn forever upon their escape. Satan then engineers a new conflict so he can attack God and kill him again, [[GoOutWithASmile content to die]] having achieved everything he ever wanted.
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* CompleteMonster: {{Satan}} himself kicks off the plot by murdering {{God}}, and settles back to enjoy the resulting chaos as pagan gods swoop in and turn Earth into [[DivineConflict a battlefield]] that kill billions of humans. Enslaving Hades as a lackey while regularly sleeping with his wife Persephone, Hades engineers far more death and destruction while also awakening the immortal dragon that finally resets reality, killing everything that lives in retribution for Satan's misdeeds but not before eating Satan to share its belly with Jesus for thousands of years. Satan tricks Jesus into recreating the Gods, and later shoves him into a volcano to burn forever upon their escape. Satan then engineers a new conflict so he can attack God and kill him again, [[GoOutWithASmile content to die]] having achieved everything he ever wanted.
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* CompleteMonster: {{Satan}} himself kicks off the plot by murdering {{God}}, and settles back to enjoy the resulting chaos as pagan gods swoop in and turn Earth into [[DivineConflict a battlefield]] that kill billions of humans. Enslaving Hades as a lackey while regularly sleeping with his wife Persephone, Hades Satan engineers far more death and destruction while also awakening the immortal dragon that finally resets reality, killing everything that lives in retribution for Satan's misdeeds but not before eating Satan to share its belly with Jesus for thousands of years. Satan tricks Jesus into recreating the Gods, and later shoves him into a volcano to burn forever upon their escape. Satan then engineers a new conflict so he can attack God and kill him again, [[GoOutWithASmile content to die]] having achieved everything he ever wanted.
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: Seriously. Nothing goes well for anyone. Every human protagonist ends up dead. And that's before the world ends.
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* CompleteMonster: {{Satan}} himself kicks off the plot by murdering {{God}}, and settles back to enjoy the resulting chaos as pagan gods swoop in and turn Earth into [[DivineConflict a battlefield]] that kill billions of humans. Enslaving Hades as a lackey while regularly sleeping with his wife Persephone, Hades engineers far more death and destruction while also awakening the immortal dragon that finally resets reality, killing everything that lives in retribution for Satan's misdeeds but not before eating Satan to share its belly with Jesus for thousands of years. Satan tricks Jesus into recreating the Gods, and later shoves him into a volcano to burn forever upon their escape. Satan then engineers a new conflict so he can attack God and kill him again, [[OutWithASmile [[GoOutWithASmile content to die]] having achieved everything he ever wanted.
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*CompleteMonster: {{Satan}} himself kicks off the plot by murdering {{God}}, and settles back to enjoy the resulting chaos as pagan gods swoop in and turn Earth into [[DivineConflict a battlefield]] that kill billions of humans. Enslaving Hades as a lackey while regularly sleeping with his wife Persephone, Hades engineers far more death and destruction while also awakening the immortal dragon that finally resets reality, killing everything that lives in retribution for Satan's misdeeds but not before eating Satan to share its belly with Jesus for thousands of years. Satan tricks Jesus into recreating the Gods, and later shoves him into a volcano to burn forever upon their escape. Satan then engineers a new conflict so he can attack God and kill him again, [[OutWithASmile content to die]] having achieved everything he ever wanted.
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* EightDeadlyWords: With the frequent character deaths and most of the gods being unlikable bastards, it can be very hard to actually care about anyone.
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* SoOkayItsAverage: The reviews of the first trade generally tend toward this at best, and quite critical at worst. The second trade got more positive feedback, but the following ones have returned to the reviewers have split to low opinions of it.
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