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* MagnificentBastard: Danzo, who turns Barako's gossip campaign against his grandson around against ''her'', by telling nothing but the truth.
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* {{Jossed}}: When ''First Try: Shippuden'' was started, Lucillia interpreted Tobi as [[spoiler: an ousted Uchiha whose wife and children were killed by his clan for being foreign-born and illegimate.]] Seeing Tobi is actually [[spoiler: Obito Uchiha]], Lucillia intends to rewrite FT:S to fit TheReveal, but she doesn't want to abandon the plot about the Uchiha Clan [[spoiler:murdering illegitimate children]] - Itachi even references the practice when talking to Kisame in ''Team Tetsuo''.
** It has since been revealed that Tobi is [[spoiler:a name which ''multiple'' Uchiha who follow Madara take up, hiding under the same mask with the pretence of being one person rather than multiple. Besides Obito, there is only one Tobi left - a much older man who lost his extended family due to the Uchiha Clan murdering them, for which he paid them back tenfold (literally, as a he took at ''least'' ten Uchiha lives for each of the loved ones they killed).]]
** It should be noted that Lucillia implements OrwellianRetcon when it suits her, especially if she can edit the plot without damaging her overall story. For instance, the original ''First Try'' was written before TheReveal that Tobi ''wasn't'' Madara came out - this necessitated the editing of a scene which explicitly identified the two as being the same individual (though she waited until TheReveal of who he actually is to do so).
** It has since been revealed that Tobi is [[spoiler:a name which ''multiple'' Uchiha who follow Madara take up, hiding under the same mask with the pretence of being one person rather than multiple. Besides Obito, there is only one Tobi left - a much older man who lost his extended family due to the Uchiha Clan murdering them, for which he paid them back tenfold (literally, as a he took at ''least'' ten Uchiha lives for each of the loved ones they killed).]]
** It should be noted that Lucillia implements OrwellianRetcon when it suits her, especially if she can edit the plot without damaging her overall story. For instance, the original ''First Try'' was written before TheReveal that Tobi ''wasn't'' Madara came out - this necessitated the editing of a scene which explicitly identified the two as being the same individual (though she waited until TheReveal of who he actually is to do so).
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* AccidentalAesop: [[FamilyUnfriendlyAesop Nepotism will get you far!]]
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* AccidentalAesop: [[FamilyUnfriendlyAesop Nepotism will get you far!]]far!
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: While the narrative in ''Team Tetsuo'' presents Tetsuo as a better teacher than Kakashi, and that his harsh teaching is necessary to prepare Sakura and Sasuke to be ninjas where the academy failed to do so, some readers believe that his training methods are more likely to push Sakura to the breaking point before she learns anything, particularly when she nearly deserts and Naruto ends up talking her down. There's also the reason why the team was formed- to give Naruto a shot at the next Chunin Exam- which more or less overestimates Sakura and Sasuke's competence and treats them as a means to an end.
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: UnintentionallyUnsympathetic:
** While the narrative in ''Team Tetsuo'' presents Tetsuo as a better teacher than Kakashi, and that his harsh teaching is necessary to prepare Sakura and Sasuke to be ninjas where the academy failed to do so, some readers believe that his training methods are more likely to push Sakura to the breaking point before she learns anything, particularly when she nearly deserts and Naruto ends up talking her down. There's also the reason why the team was formed- to give Naruto a shot at the next Chunin Exam- which more or less overestimates Sakura and Sasuke's competence and treats them as a means to anend.end.
** Naruto in ''Team 7''. While he's understandably less than thrilled with his teammates, he doesn't even seem willing to try to help them. He ends up passing the test ''[[SpringtimeForHitler by accident]]'' when he feeds Sakura the lunch. While the narrative presents him as a superior ninja who's too good for the team, in actuality, his lack of regard for his teammates would make him "worse than trash" by Kakashi's standards.
** While the narrative in ''Team Tetsuo'' presents Tetsuo as a better teacher than Kakashi, and that his harsh teaching is necessary to prepare Sakura and Sasuke to be ninjas where the academy failed to do so, some readers believe that his training methods are more likely to push Sakura to the breaking point before she learns anything, particularly when she nearly deserts and Naruto ends up talking her down. There's also the reason why the team was formed- to give Naruto a shot at the next Chunin Exam- which more or less overestimates Sakura and Sasuke's competence and treats them as a means to an
** Naruto in ''Team 7''. While he's understandably less than thrilled with his teammates, he doesn't even seem willing to try to help them. He ends up passing the test ''[[SpringtimeForHitler by accident]]'' when he feeds Sakura the lunch. While the narrative presents him as a superior ninja who's too good for the team, in actuality, his lack of regard for his teammates would make him "worse than trash" by Kakashi's standards.
