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* CompleteMonster: [[SmugSnake Hans Gruber]] is an arrogant, [[AxCrazy vicious]] terrorist who kills a security guard to take over the Klaxon Oil Building, intending to destroy its vault. [[HostageSituation Taking over 30 people hostage]] and intending to murder them with his explosives, Hans kills one for so much as showing defiance and later [[CopKiller has the responding SWAT team massacred]]. When Detective John [=McClane=] steals his detonators, Hans delights in murdering a friend of his amongst the hostages. Discovering [[IHaveYourWife John's wife amongst the hostages]], even when John offers to trade the detonators for her safety Hans still attempts to kill both out of anger for their interference.

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* CompleteMonster: [[SmugSnake Hans Gruber]] is an arrogant, [[AxCrazy vicious]] terrorist who kills a security guard to take over the Klaxon Oil Building, intending to destroy its vault. [[HostageSituation Taking over 30 people hostage]] and intending to murder them with his explosives, Hans kills one for so much as showing defiance and later [[CopKiller has the responding SWAT team massacred]]. When Detective John [=McClane=] steals his detonators, Hans delights in murdering a friend of his amongst the hostages. Discovering [[IHaveYourWife John's wife amongst the hostages]], hostages]] and mocking her for being unaware of Klaxon's corruption, even when John offers to trade the detonators for her safety Hans still attempts to kill both out of anger spite for their interference.
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* CrazyIsCool: John may seem to be mentally unhinged for choosing to face off against armed terrorists alone, but it only manages to make him even more charismatic.

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* CrazyIsCool: John may seem to be mentally unhinged for choosing to face off against armed terrorists alone, but it only manages to make him even more charismatic.charismatic.
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* CompleteMonster: [[AxCrazy Hans Gruber]] is an [[SmugSnake arrogant]] terrorist who kills a security guard to take over the Klaxon Oil Building, intending to destroy its vault. [[HostageSituation Taking over 30 people hostage]] and intending to murder them with his explosives, Hans kills one for so much as showing defiance and later [[CopKiller has the responding SWAT team massacred]]. When Detective John [=McClane=] steals his detonators, Hans delights in murdering a friend of his amongst the hostages. Discovering [[IHaveYourWife John's wife amongst the hostages]], even when John offers to trade the detonators for her safety Hans still attempts to kill both out of anger for their interference.

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* CompleteMonster: [[AxCrazy [[SmugSnake Hans Gruber]] is an [[SmugSnake arrogant]] arrogant, [[AxCrazy vicious]] terrorist who kills a security guard to take over the Klaxon Oil Building, intending to destroy its vault. [[HostageSituation Taking over 30 people hostage]] and intending to murder them with his explosives, Hans kills one for so much as showing defiance and later [[CopKiller has the responding SWAT team massacred]]. When Detective John [=McClane=] steals his detonators, Hans delights in murdering a friend of his amongst the hostages. Discovering [[IHaveYourWife John's wife amongst the hostages]], even when John offers to trade the detonators for her safety Hans still attempts to kill both out of anger for their interference.

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* CompleteMonster: [[Script/DieHardFirstDraft First Draft]]: [[AxCrazy Hans Gruber]] is an [[SmugSnake arrogant]] terrorist who kills a security guard to take over the Klaxon Oil Building, intending to destroy its vault. [[HostageSituation Taking over 30 people hostage]] and intending to murder them with his explosives, Hans kills one for so much as showing defiance and later [[CopKiller has the responding SWAT team massacred]]. When Detective John [=McClane=] steals his detonators, Hans delights in murdering a friend of his amongst the hostages. Discovering [[IHaveYourWife John's wife amongst the hostages]], even when John offers to trade the detonators for her safety Hans still attempts to kill both out of anger for their interference.

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* CompleteMonster: [[Script/DieHardFirstDraft First Draft]]: [[AxCrazy Hans Gruber]] is an [[SmugSnake arrogant]] terrorist who kills a security guard to take over the Klaxon Oil Building, intending to destroy its vault. [[HostageSituation Taking over 30 people hostage]] and intending to murder them with his explosives, Hans kills one for so much as showing defiance and later [[CopKiller has the responding SWAT team massacred]]. When Detective John [=McClane=] steals his detonators, Hans delights in murdering a friend of his amongst the hostages. Discovering [[IHaveYourWife John's wife amongst the hostages]], even when John offers to trade the detonators for her safety Hans still attempts to kill both out of anger for their interference.

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* CompleteMonster: [[SmugSnake Hans Gruber]] is the egotistical terrorist leader who leads the takeover of the Klaxon Oil Building intent on the destruction of its Vault. Personally killing a security guard--and locking the entrance with the latter's key card--Hans takes over 30 people hostage, taking a piece of identification from each hostage. Feigning pleasantries while taking Klaxon executive Joseph Rivers into the boardroom, Hans kills Rivers for a lack of cooperation, [[SmallNameBigEgo taking offense to Rivers's lack of fear towards him]]. Discovering the interference of John [=McClane=] when the latter finds his detonators and a heavy payload of explosives, Hans threatens to kill John if John doesn't return the detonators. [[AxCrazy Savoring the inevitable confrontation]] which will happen with the arrival of the SWAT team, Hans has them neutralized with heavy weaponry. Subsequently killing a hostage claiming to be a friend of John, Hans threatens to [[HostageForMcGuffin make his way through the hostages unless John gives him the detonators]]. Discovering that [[IHaveYourWife John's wife, Holly Gennero, is among the hostages]], Hans tries to break Holly's spirit by bringing up her alleged involvement in illegal arms dealing, responding to her lack of knowledge of the matter by [[SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids mocking her for her naÏveté]]. Despite John's decision to trade the detonators to ensure Holly's safety, Hans decides to kill them both for their interference in his machinations.

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* CompleteMonster: [[SmugSnake [[Script/DieHardFirstDraft First Draft]]: [[AxCrazy Hans Gruber]] is the egotistical an [[SmugSnake arrogant]] terrorist leader who leads the takeover of kills a security guard to take over the Klaxon Oil Building intent on the destruction of Building, intending to destroy its Vault. Personally killing a security guard--and locking the entrance with the latter's key card--Hans takes vault. [[HostageSituation Taking over 30 people hostage, taking a piece of identification from each hostage. Feigning pleasantries while taking Klaxon executive Joseph Rivers into the boardroom, hostage]] and intending to murder them with his explosives, Hans kills Rivers one for a lack of cooperation, [[SmallNameBigEgo taking offense to Rivers's lack of fear towards him]]. Discovering so much as showing defiance and later [[CopKiller has the interference of responding SWAT team massacred]]. When Detective John [=McClane=] when the latter finds steals his detonators and a heavy payload of explosives, detonators, Hans threatens to kill John if John doesn't return the detonators. [[AxCrazy Savoring the inevitable confrontation]] which will happen with the arrival of the SWAT team, Hans has them neutralized with heavy weaponry. Subsequently killing a hostage claiming to be delights in murdering a friend of John, Hans threatens to [[HostageForMcGuffin make his way through amongst the hostages unless John gives him the detonators]]. hostages. Discovering that [[IHaveYourWife John's wife, Holly Gennero, is among wife amongst the hostages]], Hans tries to break Holly's spirit by bringing up her alleged involvement in illegal arms dealing, responding to her lack of knowledge of the matter by [[SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids mocking her for her naÏveté]]. Despite John's decision even when John offers to trade the detonators to ensure Holly's safety, for her safety Hans decides still attempts to kill them both out of anger for their interference in his machinations.interference.

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* CompleteMonster: [[AxCrazy Hans Gruber]] is the egotistical terrorist leader who leads the takeover of the Klaxon Oil Building intent on the destruction of its Vault. Personally killing a security guard--and locking the entrance with the latter's key card--Hans takes over 30 people hostage, taking a piece of identification from each hostage. Feigning pleasantries while taking Klaxon executive Joseph Rivers into the boardroom, Hans kills Rivers for a lack of cooperation, [[SmallNameBigEgo taking offense to Rivers's lack of fear towards him]]. Discovering the interference of John [=McClane=] when the latter finds his detonators and a heavy payload of explosives, Hans threatens to kill John if John doesn't return the detonators. Savoring the inevitable confrontation which will happen with the arrival of the SWAT team, Hans has them neutralized with heavy weaponry. Subsequently killing a hostage claiming to be a friend of John, Hans threatens to [[HostageForMcGuffin make his way through the hostages unless John gives him the detonators]]. Discovering that [[IHaveYourWife John's wife, Holly Gennero, is among the hostages]], Hans tries to break Holly's spirit by bringing up her alleged involvement in illegal arms dealing, responding to her lack of knowledge of the matter by [[SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids mocking her for her naÏveté]]. Despite John's decision to trade the detonators to ensure Holly's safety, Hans decides to kill them both for their interference in his machinations.

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* CompleteMonster: [[AxCrazy [[SmugSnake Hans Gruber]] is the egotistical terrorist leader who leads the takeover of the Klaxon Oil Building intent on the destruction of its Vault. Personally killing a security guard--and locking the entrance with the latter's key card--Hans takes over 30 people hostage, taking a piece of identification from each hostage. Feigning pleasantries while taking Klaxon executive Joseph Rivers into the boardroom, Hans kills Rivers for a lack of cooperation, [[SmallNameBigEgo taking offense to Rivers's lack of fear towards him]]. Discovering the interference of John [=McClane=] when the latter finds his detonators and a heavy payload of explosives, Hans threatens to kill John if John doesn't return the detonators. [[AxCrazy Savoring the inevitable confrontation confrontation]] which will happen with the arrival of the SWAT team, Hans has them neutralized with heavy weaponry. Subsequently killing a hostage claiming to be a friend of John, Hans threatens to [[HostageForMcGuffin make his way through the hostages unless John gives him the detonators]]. Discovering that [[IHaveYourWife John's wife, Holly Gennero, is among the hostages]], Hans tries to break Holly's spirit by bringing up her alleged involvement in illegal arms dealing, responding to her lack of knowledge of the matter by [[SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids mocking her for her naÏveté]]. Despite John's decision to trade the detonators to ensure Holly's safety, Hans decides to kill them both for their interference in his machinations.

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* CompleteMonster: [[AxCrazy Hans Gruber]] is the egotistical terrorist leader who leads the takeover of the Klaxon Oil Building intent on the destruction of its Vault. Personally killing a security guard--and locking the entrance with the latter's key card--Hans takes over 30 people hostage, taking a piece of identification from each hostage. Feigning pleasantries while taking Klaxon executive Joseph Rivers into the boardroom, Hans kills Rivers for a lack of cooperation, [[SmallNameBigEgo taking offense to Rivers's lack of fear towards him]]. Discovering the interference of John [=McClane=] when the latter finds his detonators and a heavy payload of explosives, Hans threatens to kill John if John doesn't return the detonators. Savouring the inevitable confrontation which will happen with the arrival of the SWAT team, Hans has them neutralized with heavy weaponry. Subsequently killing a hostage claiming to be a friend of John, Hans threatens to [[HostageForMcGuffin make his way through the hostages unless John gives him the detonators]]. Discovering that [[IHaveYourWife John's wife, Holly Gennero, is among the hostages]], Hans tries to break Holly's spirit by bringing up her alleged involvement in illegal arms dealing, responding to her lack of knowledge of the matter by [[SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids mocking her for her naÏveté]]. Despite John's decision to trade the detonators to ensure Holly's safety, Hans decides to kill them both for their interference in his machinations.

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* CompleteMonster: [[AxCrazy Hans Gruber]] is the egotistical terrorist leader who leads the takeover of the Klaxon Oil Building intent on the destruction of its Vault. Personally killing a security guard--and locking the entrance with the latter's key card--Hans takes over 30 people hostage, taking a piece of identification from each hostage. Feigning pleasantries while taking Klaxon executive Joseph Rivers into the boardroom, Hans kills Rivers for a lack of cooperation, [[SmallNameBigEgo taking offense to Rivers's lack of fear towards him]]. Discovering the interference of John [=McClane=] when the latter finds his detonators and a heavy payload of explosives, Hans threatens to kill John if John doesn't return the detonators. Savouring Savoring the inevitable confrontation which will happen with the arrival of the SWAT team, Hans has them neutralized with heavy weaponry. Subsequently killing a hostage claiming to be a friend of John, Hans threatens to [[HostageForMcGuffin make his way through the hostages unless John gives him the detonators]]. Discovering that [[IHaveYourWife John's wife, Holly Gennero, is among the hostages]], Hans tries to break Holly's spirit by bringing up her alleged involvement in illegal arms dealing, responding to her lack of knowledge of the matter by [[SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids mocking her for her naÏveté]]. Despite John's decision to trade the detonators to ensure Holly's safety, Hans decides to kill them both for their interference in his machinations.

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* CompleteMonster: [[AxCrazy Hans Gruber]] is the egotistical terrorist leader who leads the takeover of the Klaxon Oil Building intent on the destruction of its Vault. Personally killing a security guard--and locking the entrance with the latter's key card--Hans takes over 30 people hostage, taking a piece of identification from each hostage. Feigning pleasantries while taking Klaxon executive Joseph Rivers into the boardroom, Hans kills Rivers for a lack of cooperation, [[SmallNameBigEgo taking offense to Rivers's lack of fear towards him]]. Discovering the interference of John [=McClane=] when the latter finds his detonators and a heavy payload of explosives, Hans threatens to kill John if John doesn't return the detonators. Savouring the inevitable confrontation which will happen with the arrival of the SWAT team, Hans has them neutralized with heavy weaponry. Subsequently killing a hostage claiming to be a friend of John, Hans threatens to [[HostageForMcGuffin make his way through the hostages unless John gives him the detonators]]. Discovering that [[IHaveYourWife John's wife, Holly Gennero, is among the hostages]], Hans tries to break Holly's spirit by bringing up her alleged involvement in illegal arms dealing, responding to her lack of knowledge of the matter by [[SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids mocking her for her naÏveté]]. Despite John's decision to trade the detonators to ensure Holly's safety, Hans decides to kill them both for their interference in his machinations.
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* CrazyIsCool: John may seem to be mentally unhinged for choosing to face off against armed terrorists alone, but it only manages to make him even more charismatic.

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