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* NightmareFuel: The whole album, if [[NightmareFace the cover wasn't any indication]]. It was recorded when the UsefulNotes/ColdWar was at its' boiling point, and as such the songs all have a relentlessly grim outlook towards modern society and potential nuclear armageddon, whilst the music for the most part is frantic and discordant. It all culminates in "Hi Baku Shyo", probably one of the [[DownerEnding darkest closing tracks]] ever put to record.
** Charles Hayward himself defined the album as "a dream within a dream".
** Charles Hayward himself defined the album as "a dream within a dream".
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* NightmareFuel: The whole album, if [[NightmareFace the cover wasn't any indication]]. It was recorded when the UsefulNotes/ColdWar was at its' boiling point, and as such the songs all have a relentlessly grim outlook towards modern society and potential nuclear armageddon, whilst the music for the most part is frantic and discordant. It all culminates in "Hi Baku Shyo", probably one of the [[DownerEnding darkest closing tracks]] ever put to record. \n** Charles Hayward himself defined the album as "a dream within a dream".
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** The rogue male jackal [[AttemptedRape attempting to rape Asia]], and then abduct Sasha, planning to have pups with her when she's older. It has to be told he was about to rape Asia in front of her ''[[HarmfulToMinors sons]]'' and that Sasha's only a ''[[AdultFear pup]]''. Pierce [[HateSink kills him off right away]].
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** The rogue male jackal [[AttemptedRape attempting to rape Asia]], and then abduct Sasha, planning to have pups with her when she's older. It has to be told he was about to rape Asia in front of her ''[[HarmfulToMinors sons]]'' and that Sasha's only a ''[[AdultFear pup]]''.''pup''. Pierce [[HateSink kills him off right away]].
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* HardTruthAesop: No matter how hard you try to raise your kid to be good, they'll still wander over to the bad side. [[spoiler:That's what Asia had to experience with Riker.]]
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** The rogue male jackal attempting to [[AttemptedRape rape Asia]], and then abduct Sasha, planning to have pups with her when she's older. It has to be told he was about to rape Asia in front of her ''[[HarmfulToMinors sons]]'' and that Sasha's only a ''[[AdultFear pup]]''. Pierce [[HateSink kills him off right away]].
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** The rogue male jackal attempting to [[AttemptedRape attempting to rape Asia]], and then abduct Sasha, planning to have pups with her when she's older. It has to be told he was about to rape Asia in front of her ''[[HarmfulToMinors sons]]'' and that Sasha's only a ''[[AdultFear pup]]''. Pierce [[HateSink kills him off right away]].
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** [[spoiler:Even for a monster like Kenzi, it's horrifying to have your mate, deranged from the Illness, {{rape|asdrama}} [[ParentalIncest your daughter]] [[OffingTheOffspring to death]] in front of you. No wonder she was [[FreakOut very traumatized]] by that, staying on her bed for several months.]]
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** [[spoiler:Even for a monster like Kenzi, it's horrifying to have your mate, deranged from the Illness, {{rape|asdrama}} you and then [[ParentalIncest rape your daughter]] daughter]], who was only having her ''first'' heat, [[OffingTheOffspring to death]] in front of you. No wonder she was [[FreakOut very extremely traumatized]] by that, staying on her bed for several months.]]
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* TearJerker: "Cenotaph", a tribute to those who died in battle during the World Wars.
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* TearJerker: "Cenotaph", a tribute to those who died in battle during the World Wars. The latter half of the song is just heartbreakingly wistful.
--> ''"And when the lights go on again\\
All over the world\\
And when the boys come home\\
All over the world\\
Rain and snow will be all that falls\\
From out of the sky"''
--> ''"And when the lights go on again\\
All over the world\\
And when the boys come home\\
All over the world\\
Rain and snow will be all that falls\\
From out of the sky"''
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** [[spoiler:Even for a monster like Kenzi, it's horrifying to have your mate, deranged from the Illness, {{rape|asdrama}} your daughter to death in front of you. No wonder she was [[FreakOut very traumatized]] by that, staying on her bed for several months.]]
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** [[spoiler:Even for a monster like Kenzi, it's horrifying to have your mate, deranged from the Illness, {{rape|asdrama}} [[ParentalIncest your daughter daughter]] [[OffingTheOffspring to death death]] in front of you. No wonder she was [[FreakOut very traumatized]] by that, staying on her bed for several months.]]
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* NightmareFuel: The whole album, if [[NightmareFace the cover wasn't any indication]]. It was recorded when the UsefulNotes/ColdWar was at its' boiling point, and as such the songs all have a relentlessly grim outlook towards modern society and potential nuclear armageddon, whilst the music for the most part is frantic and discordant. It all culminates in "Hi Baku Shyo", probably one of the [[DownerEnding darkest closing tracks]] to an album ever put to record.
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* NightmareFuel: The whole album, if [[NightmareFace the cover wasn't any indication]]. It was recorded when the UsefulNotes/ColdWar was at its' boiling point, and as such the songs all have a relentlessly grim outlook towards modern society and potential nuclear armageddon, whilst the music for the most part is frantic and discordant. It all culminates in "Hi Baku Shyo", probably one of the [[DownerEnding darkest closing tracks]] to an album ever put to record.
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* NightmareFuel: The whole album, if [[NightmareFace the cover wasn't any indication]]. It was recorded when the UsefulNotes/ColdWar was at its' boiling point, and as such the songs all have a relentlessly grim outlook towards politics and potential nuclear armageddon, whilst the music for the most part is frantic and discordant. It all culminates in "Hi Baku Shyo", probably one of the [[DownerEnding darkest closing tracks]] to an album ever put to record.
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* NightmareFuel: The whole album, if [[NightmareFace the cover wasn't any indication]]. It was recorded when the UsefulNotes/ColdWar was at its' boiling point, and as such the songs all have a relentlessly grim outlook towards politics modern society and potential nuclear armageddon, whilst the music for the most part is frantic and discordant. It all culminates in "Hi Baku Shyo", probably one of the [[DownerEnding darkest closing tracks]] to an album ever put to record.
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** [[spoiler:Riker breaks into Brynn's study, forces her to undress by slightly cutting her neck, and [[RapeAsDrama rapes her]]. Cue the scene in which Anahi finds Brynn on the floor naked, injured, and crying.]]
** [[spoiler:Even for a monster like Kenzi, it's horrifying to have your mate, deranged from the Illness, {{rape|asdrama}} your daughter to death in front of you. No wonder she was [[FreakOut very traumatized]] by that.]]
** [[spoiler:Even for a monster like Kenzi, it's horrifying to have your mate, deranged from the Illness, {{rape|asdrama}} your daughter to death in front of you. No wonder she was [[FreakOut very traumatized]] by that.]]
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** [[spoiler:Riker breaks into Brynn's study, forces her to undress by slightly cutting her neck, and [[RapeAsDrama rapes her]]. Cue the scene in which Anahi finds Brynn on the floor [[BreakTheCutie naked, injured, and crying.crying]].]]
** [[spoiler:Even for a monster like Kenzi, it's horrifying to have your mate, deranged from the Illness, {{rape|asdrama}} your daughter to death in front of you. No wonder she was [[FreakOut very traumatized]] bythat.that, staying on her bed for several months.]]
** [[spoiler:Even for a monster like Kenzi, it's horrifying to have your mate, deranged from the Illness, {{rape|asdrama}} your daughter to death in front of you. No wonder she was [[FreakOut very traumatized]] by
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** [[spoiler:Riker breaks into Brynn's study, forces her to undress by slightly cutting her neck, and [[RapeAsDrama rapes her]].]]
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** [[spoiler:Riker breaks into Brynn's study, forces her to undress by slightly cutting her neck, and [[RapeAsDrama rapes her]]. Cue the scene in which Anahi finds Brynn on the floor naked, injured, and crying.]]
** [[spoiler:Even for a monster like Kenzi, it's horrifying to have your mate, deranged from the Illness, {{rape|asdrama}} your daughter to death in front of you. No wonder she was [[FreakOut very traumatized]] by that.]]
** [[spoiler:Even for a monster like Kenzi, it's horrifying to have your mate, deranged from the Illness, {{rape|asdrama}} your daughter to death in front of you. No wonder she was [[FreakOut very traumatized]] by that.]]
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* NauseaFuel: [[spoiler:Haven has so much trouble delivering her child that ''her uterus is ripped into pieces''.]]
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Was Kenzi genuinely heartbroken by how she hurt Cujo by not feeding him? Or was she [[ManipulativeBastard faking in order to elicit sympathy]] and keep Cujo so she can abuse him more?
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Was Kenzi genuinely heartbroken by how she hurt Cujo by not feeding him? Or was she [[ManipulativeBastard faking in order to elicit sympathy]] and keep Cujo so she can abuse him more?
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* TearJerker: [[spoiler:After the birth attempt goes horribly wrong, which results in her pup dying and her uterus being damaged to the point of having to be removed, Haven becomes infertile and will never be able to experience heat nor have pups again, completely destroying her dreams of becoming a mother.]]
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* TearJerker: [[spoiler:After the birth attempt goes horribly wrong, which results in her pup dying and her uterus being damaged to the point of having to be removed, Haven becomes infertile and will never be able to experience heat nor have pups again, completely destroying her dreams of becoming a mother.]]
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* TearJerker: [[spoiler:After the birth attempt goes horribly wrong, which results in her pup dying and her uterus being damaged to the point of having to be removed, Haven goes infertile and will never be able to experience heat nor have pups again, completely destroying her dreams of becoming a mother.]]
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* TearJerker: [[spoiler:After the birth attempt goes horribly wrong, which results in her pup dying and her uterus being damaged to the point of having to be removed, Haven goes becomes infertile and will never be able to experience heat nor have pups again, completely destroying her dreams of becoming a mother.]]
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* NightmareFuel: Arguably the whole album, if [[NightmareFace the cover wasn't any indication]]. It was recorded when the UsefulNotes/ColdWar was at its' boiling point, and as such the songs all have a relentlessly grim outlook towards politics and potential nuclear armageddon, whilst the music for the most part is frantic and discordant. It all culminates in "Hi Baku Shyo", probably one of the [[DownerEnding darkest closing tracks]] to an album ever put to record.
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* NightmareFuel: Arguably the The whole album, if [[NightmareFace the cover wasn't any indication]]. It was recorded when the UsefulNotes/ColdWar was at its' boiling point, and as such the songs all have a relentlessly grim outlook towards politics and potential nuclear armageddon, whilst the music for the most part is frantic and discordant. It all culminates in "Hi Baku Shyo", probably one of the [[DownerEnding darkest closing tracks]] to an album ever put to record.
