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* WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs: The story is extremely surreal, with fleshy growths on landscapes and crystals in said flesh masses, along with sparks flying out of other crystals. Overall, it has the tone of an acid trip gone horribly wrong.
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* WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs: The story is extremely surreal, with fleshy growths on landscapes and crystals in said flesh masses, along with sparks flying out of other crystals. Overall, it has the tone of an acid trip gone horribly wrong.
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* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Once the readers get to TheReveal that being Chosen only delays the inevitable fate of being devoured by All the Rest and that countless worlds have already fallen victim to said EldritchAbomination, they basically just become indifferent to the whole plot.
* WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs: The story is extremely surreal, with fleshy growths on landscapes and crystals in said flesh masses, along with sparks flying out of other crystals. Overall, it has the tone of an acid trip gone horriblywrong.wrong.
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* WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs: The story is extremely surreal, with fleshy growths on landscapes and crystals in said flesh masses, along with sparks flying out of other crystals. Overall, it has the tone of an acid trip gone horribly
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* CompleteMonster: "[[EldritchAbomination All the Rest]]" is a [[VillainousGlutton glutton]] with a taste for [[ToServeMan mortal flesh]] and misery. Having already devoured countless billions of people from various worlds over the course of countless millennia, All the Rest keeps a portion of the setting's population alive as breeding stock, [[EatenAlive consuming the remainder alive]] with pleasure. When the unnamed protagonist attempts to escape in order to warn his young daughter, All the Rest taunts the protagonist, calling him an "insignificant amoeba". All the Rest subsequently keeps its victims, the protagonist among them, [[AndIMustScream in indefinite agony as it absorbs them]], savoring every moment of suffering it inflicts.
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* TrueArtIsAngsty: The work has an extremely morose premise, considering it is about a mortal being who faces helplessness and despair in the face of a cosmic sadist, but manages to be both haunting and compelling at the same time.
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* TrueArtIsAngsty: The work has an extremely morose premise, considering it is about a mortal being who faces helplessness and despair in the face of a cosmic sadist, but manages to be both haunting and compelling at the same time.time.
* WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs: The story is extremely surreal, with fleshy growths on landscapes and crystals in said flesh masses, along with sparks flying out of other crystals. Overall, it has the tone of an acid trip gone horribly wrong.
* WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs: The story is extremely surreal, with fleshy growths on landscapes and crystals in said flesh masses, along with sparks flying out of other crystals. Overall, it has the tone of an acid trip gone horribly wrong.
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* CompleteMonster: "[[EldritchAbomination All the Rest]]" is a [[VillainousGlutton glutton]] with a taste for [[ToServeMan mortal flesh]] and misery. Having already devoured countless billions of people from various worlds over the course of countless millennia, All the Rest keeps a portion of the setting's population alive as breeding stock, [[EatenAlive consuming the remainder alive]] with pleasure. When the unnamed protagonist attempts to escape in order to warn his young daughter, All the Rest taunts the protagonist, calling him an "insignificant amoeba". All the Rest subsequently keeps its victims, the protagonist among them, [[AndIMustScream in indefinite agony as it absorbs them]], savoring every moment of suffering it inflicts.
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* CompleteMonster: "[[EldritchAbomination All the Rest]]" is a [[VillainousGlutton glutton]] with a taste for [[ToServeMan mortal flesh]] and misery. Having already devoured countless billions of people from various worlds over the course of countless millennia, All the Rest keeps a portion of the setting's population alive as breeding stock, [[EatenAlive consuming the remainder alive]] with pleasure. When the unnamed protagonist attempts to escape in order to warn his young daughter, All the Rest taunts the protagonist, calling him an "insignificant amoeba". All the Rest subsequently keeps its victims, the protagonist among them, [[AndIMustScream in indefinite agony as it absorbs them]], savoring every moment of suffering it inflicts.inflicts.
* TrueArtIsAngsty: The work has an extremely morose premise, considering it is about a mortal being who faces helplessness and despair in the face of a cosmic sadist, but manages to be both haunting and compelling at the same time.
* TrueArtIsAngsty: The work has an extremely morose premise, considering it is about a mortal being who faces helplessness and despair in the face of a cosmic sadist, but manages to be both haunting and compelling at the same time.
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* CompleteMonster: "[[EldritchAbomination All the Rest]]" is a [[VillainousGlutton glutton]] with a taste for [[ToServeMan mortal flesh]] and misery. Having already devoured billions of people from various worlds over the course of thousands of years, All the Rest keeps a portion of the setting's population alive as breeding stock, [[EatenAlive consuming the remainder alive]] with pleasure. When the unnamed protagonist attempts to escape in order to warn his young daughter, All the Rest taunts the protagonist, calling him an "insignificant amoeba". All the Rest subsequently keeps its victims, the protagonist among them, [[AndIMustScream in perpetual agony as it absorbs them]], savoring every moment of suffering it inflicts.
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* CompleteMonster: "[[EldritchAbomination All the Rest]]" is a [[VillainousGlutton glutton]] with a taste for [[ToServeMan mortal flesh]] and misery. Having already devoured countless billions of people from various worlds over the course of thousands of years, countless millennia, All the Rest keeps a portion of the setting's population alive as breeding stock, [[EatenAlive consuming the remainder alive]] with pleasure. When the unnamed protagonist attempts to escape in order to warn his young daughter, All the Rest taunts the protagonist, calling him an "insignificant amoeba". All the Rest subsequently keeps its victims, the protagonist among them, [[AndIMustScream in perpetual indefinite agony as it absorbs them]], savoring every moment of suffering it inflicts.
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* CompleteMonster: "[[EldritchAbomination All the Rest]]" is a [[VillainousGlutton glutton]] with a taste for [[ToServeMan mortal flesh]] and misery. Having already devoured billions of people from various worlds over the course of thousands of years, All the Rest keeps a portion of the setting's population alive as breeding stock, [[EatenAlive consuming the remainder alive]] with pleasure. When the unnamed protagonist attempts to escape in order to warn his young daughter, All the Rest taunts the protagonist, calling him an "insignificant amoeba". All the Rest subsequently keeps its victims, the protagonist among them, [[AndIMustScream in perpetual agony as it absorbs them]], savoring every moment of suffering it inflicts.
