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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Landholders Emilio Toth and Victoria Koman, for being likable characters who've been preparing to move against Dokken right under his nose.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Landholders Emilio Toth and Victoria Koman, Koman appear in relatively few chapters but are extremely popular for being likable characters who've been preparing to move against Dokken right under his nose.
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* AssPull: Arguably, [[spoiler:The clones of Dokken]] reveal. It doesn't do anything for the plot besides [[spoiler:Let Dokken kill Tharien without any OffingTheOffspring guilt]], it's never explained how Dokken got the technology to do so given how the Truthsayers seem to have a monopoly on it, and in one of his inner monologue early on [[spoiler:Dokken did explicitly refer to Michael Van Petersden as the son of a man he'd killed, rather than a clone he'd replaced that son with.]]
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* AssPull: Arguably, [[spoiler:The clones of Dokken]] reveal. It doesn't do anything for the plot besides [[spoiler:Let [[spoiler:let Dokken kill Tharien without any OffingTheOffspring guilt]], it's never explained how Dokken got the technology to do so given how the Truthsayers seem to have a monopoly on it, and in one of his inner monologue monologues early on [[spoiler:Dokken did explicitly refer to Michael Van Petersden as the son of a man he'd killed, rather than a clone he'd replaced that son with.]]
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* AssPull: Arguably, [[spoiler:The clones of Dokken]] reveal. It doesn't do anything for the plot besides [[spoiler:Let Dokken kill Tharien without any OffingTHeOffspring guilt]], it's never explained how Dokken got the technology to do so given how the Truthsayers seem to have a monopoly on it, and in one of his inner monologue early on [[spoiler:Dokken did explicitly refer to Michael Van Petersden as the son of a man he'd killed, rather than a clone he'd replaced that son with.]]
* CaptainObviousReveal: Dokken's new manservant being an undercover Eli Strone.
* EnsembleDarkhorse: Landholders Emilio Toth and Victoria Koman for being likable characters who've been preparing to move against Dokken right under his nose.
* CaptainObviousReveal: Dokken's new manservant being an undercover Eli Strone.
* EnsembleDarkhorse: Landholders Emilio Toth and Victoria Koman for being likable characters who've been preparing to move against Dokken right under his nose.
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* AssPull: Arguably, [[spoiler:The clones of Dokken]] reveal. It doesn't do anything for the plot besides [[spoiler:Let Dokken kill Tharien without any OffingTHeOffspring OffingTheOffspring guilt]], it's never explained how Dokken got the technology to do so given how the Truthsayers seem to have a monopoly on it, and in one of his inner monologue early on [[spoiler:Dokken did explicitly refer to Michael Van Petersden as the son of a man he'd killed, rather than a clone he'd replaced that son with.]]
* CaptainObviousReveal: Dokken's new manservant being an undercover EliStrone.
Strone is ''very'' easy to guess.
* EnsembleDarkhorse: Landholders Emilio Toth and VictoriaKoman Koman, for being likable characters who've been preparing to move against Dokken right under his nose.
* CaptainObviousReveal: Dokken's new manservant being an undercover Eli
* EnsembleDarkhorse: Landholders Emilio Toth and Victoria
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* THeyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: The final battle between [[spoiler:Dokken and Strone]] is never shown.
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* THeyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: The final battle between [[spoiler:Dokken and Strone]] is never shown.
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* CaptainObviousReveal: Dokken's new manservant being an undercover Eli Strone.
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* AssPull: Arguably, [[spoiler:The clones of Dokken]] reveal. It doesn't do anything for the plot besides [[spoiler:Let Dokken kill Tharien without any OffingTHeOffspring guilt]], it's never explained how Dokken got the technology to do so given how the Truthsayers seem to have a monopoly on it, and in one of his inner monologue early on [[spoiler:Dokken did explicitly refer to Michael Van Petersden as the son of a man he'd killed, rather than a clone he'd replaced that son with.]]
* EnsembleDarkhorse: Landholders Emilio Toth and Victoria Koman for being likable characters who've been preparing to move against Dokken right under his nose.
* MoralEventHorizon: Probably Dokken strangling his mistress.
* THeyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: The final battle between [[spoiler:Dokken and Strone]] is never shown.
* TheWoobie: Kalliana, with her increasing nerves and unease about the difficulty she has with controlling her visions, and Troy following how he's WrongfullyAccused.
* EnsembleDarkhorse: Landholders Emilio Toth and Victoria Koman for being likable characters who've been preparing to move against Dokken right under his nose.
* MoralEventHorizon: Probably Dokken strangling his mistress.
* THeyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: The final battle between [[spoiler:Dokken and Strone]] is never shown.
* TheWoobie: Kalliana, with her increasing nerves and unease about the difficulty she has with controlling her visions, and Troy following how he's WrongfullyAccused.
