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* GeniusBonus: "Last one to surface is a paedomorph."
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* GeniusBonus: GeniusBonus:
** "Last one to surface is a paedomorph."
** "Last one to surface is a paedomorph."
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* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: Hitlersaurus Rex vs. Stego-Stalin. 'Nuff Said.
* {{Squick}}: Demon nipple lampreys.
** The costume Xolotl wears is the torn-off skin of a luchador. What's worse is that the luchador is still alive after this, and falls victim to it a ''second time''.
* {{Squick}}: Demon nipple lampreys.
** The costume Xolotl wears is the torn-off skin of a luchador. What's worse is that the luchador is still alive after this, and falls victim to it a ''second time''.
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** Demon nipple lampreys.
** The costume Xolotl wears is the torn-off skin of a luchador. What's worse is that the luchador is still alive after this, and falls victim to it a ''second
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* CrazyAwesome: Hitlersaurus Rex vs. Stego-Stalin. 'Nuff Said.
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* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: Hitlersaurus Rex vs. Stego-Stalin. 'Nuff Said.
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* HilariousInHindsight: In a flashback, Xolotl brings up "being ginger" as a potential flaw of humans created using broken bones. In present day, he befriends Simon, a red-headed human.
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* HilariousInHindsight: In a flashback, Xolotl brings up "being ginger" as a potential flaw of humans created using broken bones. In present day, he befriends Simon, a red-headed human. Becomes HarsherInHindsight when [[spoiler:Simon dies permanently]].
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: The first villain Xolotl defeats was originally "the Invisible Deafmute", but upon recognition that the character could come across as being potentially offensive (being a character the artist came up with as a 12-year-old), the artist went back and retconned him into "the Invisible Death Mime". Some pages of the storyline were even entirely redrawn mimicking the artist's older art style.
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* {{Squick}}: [[http://blackmudpuppy.com/archives/comic/hel-hath-no-fury-page-18 Demon nipple lampreys.]]
** The costume Xolotl wears is the torn-off skin of a luchador. What's worse is that the luchador is still alive after this, and falls victim to it a ''[[http://blackmudpuppy.com/archives/comic/luchador second time]]''.
** The costume Xolotl wears is the torn-off skin of a luchador. What's worse is that the luchador is still alive after this, and falls victim to it a ''[[http://blackmudpuppy.com/archives/comic/luchador second time]]''.
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* {{Squick}}: [[http://blackmudpuppy.com/archives/comic/hel-hath-no-fury-page-18 Demon nipple lampreys.]]
lampreys.
** The costume Xolotl wears is the torn-off skin of a luchador. What's worse is that the luchador is still alive after this, and falls victim to it a''[[http://blackmudpuppy.com/archives/comic/luchador second time]]''.''second time''.
** The costume Xolotl wears is the torn-off skin of a luchador. What's worse is that the luchador is still alive after this, and falls victim to it a
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* HilariousInHindsight: In a flashback, Xolotl brings up "being ginger" as a potential flaw of humans created using broken bones. In present day, he befriends Simon, a red-headed human.
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** The costume Xolotl wears is the torn-off skin of a luchador. What's worse is that he does it ''[[http://blackmudpuppy.com/archives/comic/luchador twice]]''
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** The costume Xolotl wears is the torn-off skin of a luchador. What's worse is that he does the luchador is still alive after this, and falls victim to it a ''[[http://blackmudpuppy.com/archives/comic/luchador twice]]''second time]]''.
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* {{Squick}}: [[http://blackmudpuppy.com/archives/comic/hel-hath-no-fury-page-18 Demon nipple lampreys.]]
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* {{Squick}}: [[http://blackmudpuppy.com/archives/comic/hel-hath-no-fury-page-18 Demon nipple lampreys.]]]]
** The costume Xolotl wears is the torn-off skin of a luchador. What's worse is that he does it ''[[http://blackmudpuppy.com/archives/comic/luchador twice]]''
** The costume Xolotl wears is the torn-off skin of a luchador. What's worse is that he does it ''[[http://blackmudpuppy.com/archives/comic/luchador twice]]''
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* GeniusBonus: "Last one to surface is a paedomorph."
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* GeniusBonus: "Last one to surface is a paedomorph.""
* {{Squick}}: [[http://blackmudpuppy.com/archives/comic/hel-hath-no-fury-page-18 Demon nipple lampreys.]]
* {{Squick}}: [[http://blackmudpuppy.com/archives/comic/hel-hath-no-fury-page-18 Demon nipple lampreys.]]
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* GeniusBonus: "Last one to surface is a paedomorph".
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* GeniusBonus: "Last one to surface is a paedomorph".paedomorph."
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* CrazyAwesome: Hitlersaurus Rex vs. Stego-Stalin. 'Nuff Said.
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* CrazyAwesome: Hitlersaurus Rex vs. Stego-Stalin. 'Nuff Said.Said.
* GeniusBonus: "Last one to surface is a paedomorph".
* GeniusBonus: "Last one to surface is a paedomorph".
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* CrazyAwesome: Hitlersaurus Rex vs. Stego-Stalin. 'Nuff Said.
