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* {{Anvilicious}}: Mari's rant about how bad things like organized crime qualifies.
* AuthorsSavingThrow: To make a long story short, the version of the story that is on Deviant Art is the ''second'' draft of the story.
** To provide an example: ''Fanfic/DoctorShikigamisMonster'' heavily implied that the only Senzu Bean plants on the Core Timeline (and that is the ''whole planet'') prior to the titular Monster were the ones on Korin's Tower and the one that belonged to the Indianapolis Champions (though Mari admits that this was only as far she knew and that there could be more). This story mentions that there ''are'' other Senzu Bean plants out there, but they have not been grown with Korin's knowledge (up until the story proper) or using his techniques, which is one of the reasons why The Monster is so absurdly huge and produces so many Beans that it deserves its nickname.
* AuthorsSavingThrow: To make a long story short, the version of the story that is on Deviant Art is the ''second'' draft of the story.
** To provide an example: ''Fanfic/DoctorShikigamisMonster'' heavily implied that the only Senzu Bean plants on the Core Timeline (and that is the ''whole planet'') prior to the titular Monster were the ones on Korin's Tower and the one that belonged to the Indianapolis Champions (though Mari admits that this was only as far she knew and that there could be more). This story mentions that there ''are'' other Senzu Bean plants out there, but they have not been grown with Korin's knowledge (up until the story proper) or using his techniques, which is one of the reasons why The Monster is so absurdly huge and produces so many Beans that it deserves its nickname.
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* {{Anvilicious}}: Mari's rant about how bad things like organized crime qualifies.
* AuthorsSavingThrow: To make a long story short, the version of the story that is on Deviant Art is the ''second'' draft of the story.
** To provide an example: ''Fanfic/DoctorShikigamisMonster'' heavily implied that the only Senzu Bean plants on the Core Timeline (and that is the ''whole planet'') prior to the titular Monster were the ones on Korin's Tower and the one that belonged to the Indianapolis Champions (though Mari admits that this was only as far she knew and that there could be more). This story mentions that there ''are'' other Senzu Bean plants out there, but they have not been grown with Korin's knowledge (up until the story proper) or using his techniques, which is one of the reasons why The Monster is so absurdly huge and produces so many Beans that it deserves its nickname.qualifies.
* AuthorsSavingThrow: To make a long story short, the version of the story that is on Deviant Art is the ''second'' draft of the story.
** To provide an example: ''Fanfic/DoctorShikigamisMonster'' heavily implied that the only Senzu Bean plants on the Core Timeline (and that is the ''whole planet'') prior to the titular Monster were the ones on Korin's Tower and the one that belonged to the Indianapolis Champions (though Mari admits that this was only as far she knew and that there could be more). This story mentions that there ''are'' other Senzu Bean plants out there, but they have not been grown with Korin's knowledge (up until the story proper) or using his techniques, which is one of the reasons why The Monster is so absurdly huge and produces so many Beans that it deserves its nickname.
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* Anvilicious: Mari's rant about how bad things like organized crime qualifies.
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* Anvilicious: {{Anvilicious}}: Mari's rant about how bad things like organized crime qualifies.
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** To provide an example: ''Fanfic/DoctorShikigamisMonster'' heavily implied that the only Senzu Bean plants on the Core Timeline (and that is the ''whole planet'') prior to the titular Monster were the ones on Korin's Tower and the one that belonged to the Indianapolis Champions (though Mari admits that this was only as far she knew and that there could be more). This story mentions that there ''are'' other Senzu Bean plants out there, but they have not been grown with Korin's knowledge (up until the story proper) or using his techniques, which is one of the reasons why The Monster is so absurdly huge and produces so many Beans that it deserves its nickname.
** To provide a second example: The original draft of the story had Mari mentioning that Stingray Industries personnel were so enraged at her in the immediate aftermath of ''Operation Endgame'' ''''that they tried to lynch her''''. Other setting authors felt like this bought the Stingray Industries company as a whole over the MoralEventHorizon and it would forever taint anything and anybody related to it, so Orion was asked to remove this.
** To provide a second example: The original draft of the story had Mari mentioning that Stingray Industries personnel were so enraged at her in the immediate aftermath of ''Operation Endgame'' ''''that they tried to lynch her''''. Other setting authors felt like this bought the Stingray Industries company as a whole over the MoralEventHorizon and it would forever taint anything and anybody related to it, so Orion was asked to remove this.
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** To provide an example: ''Fanfic/DoctorShikigamisMonster'' heavily implied that the only Senzu Bean plants on the Core Timeline (and that is the ''whole planet'') prior to the titular Monster were the ones on Korin's Tower and the one that belonged to the Indianapolis Champions (though Mari admits that this was only as far she knew and that there could be more). This story mentions that there ''are'' other Senzu Bean plants out there, but they have not been grown with Korin's knowledge (up until the story proper) or using his techniques, which is one of the reasons why The Monster is so absurdly huge and produces so many Beans that it deserves its nickname.
** To provide a second example: The original draft of the story had Mari mentioning that Stingray Industries personnel were so enraged at her in the immediate aftermath of ''Operation Endgame'' ''''that they tried to lynch her''''. Other setting authors felt like this bought the Stingray Industries company as a whole over the MoralEventHorizon and it would forever taint anything and anybody related to it, so Orion was asked to remove this.nickname.
** To provide a second example: The original draft of the story had Mari mentioning that Stingray Industries personnel were so enraged at her in the immediate aftermath of ''Operation Endgame'' ''''that they tried to lynch her''''. Other setting authors felt like this bought the Stingray Industries company as a whole over the MoralEventHorizon and it would forever taint anything and anybody related to it, so Orion was asked to remove this.
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** To provide an example: ''Fanfic/DoctorShikigamisMonster'' heavily implied that the only Senzu Bean plants on the Core Timeline (and that is the ''whole planet'') prior to the titular Monster were the ones on Korin's Tower and the one that belonged to the Indianapolis Champions (though Mari admits that this was only as far she knew and that there could be more). This story mentions that there ''are'' other Senzu Bean plants out there, but they have not been grown with Korin's knowledge (up until the story proper) or using his techniques, which is one of the reasons why The Monster is so absurdly huge and produces so many Beans that it deserves its nickname.
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** To provide an example: ''Fanfic/DoctorShikigamisMonster'' heavily implied that the only Senzu Bean plants on the Core Timeline (and that is the ''whole planet'') prior to the titular Monster were the ones on Korin's Tower and the one that belonged to the Indianapolis Champions (though Mari admits that this was only as far she knew and that there could be more). This story mentions that there ''are'' other Senzu Bean plants out there, but they have not been grown with Korin's knowledge (up until the story proper) or using his techniques, which is one of the reasons why The Monster is so absurdly huge and produces so many Beans that it deserves its nickname.nickname.
** To provide a second example: The original draft of the story had Mari mentioning that Stingray Industries personnel were so enraged at her in the immediate aftermath of ''Operation Endgame'' ''''that they tried to lynch her''''. Other setting authors felt like this bought the Stingray Industries company as a whole over the MoralEventHorizon and it would forever taint anything and anybody related to it, so Orion was asked to remove this.
** To provide a second example: The original draft of the story had Mari mentioning that Stingray Industries personnel were so enraged at her in the immediate aftermath of ''Operation Endgame'' ''''that they tried to lynch her''''. Other setting authors felt like this bought the Stingray Industries company as a whole over the MoralEventHorizon and it would forever taint anything and anybody related to it, so Orion was asked to remove this.
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** To provide an example: ''Fanfic/DoctorShikigamisMonster'' heavily implied that the only Senzu Bean plants on the Core Timeline (and that is the ''whole planet'') were the ones on Korin's Tower and the titular Monster. This story mentions that there ''are'' other Senzu Bean plants out there, but they have not been grown with Korin's knowledge (up until the story proper) or using his techniques, which is one of the reasons why The Monster is so absurdly huge and produces so many Beans that it deserves its nickname.
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** To provide an example: ''Fanfic/DoctorShikigamisMonster'' heavily implied that the only Senzu Bean plants on the Core Timeline (and that is the ''whole planet'') prior to the titular Monster were the ones on Korin's Tower and the titular Monster.one that belonged to the Indianapolis Champions (though Mari admits that this was only as far she knew and that there could be more). This story mentions that there ''are'' other Senzu Bean plants out there, but they have not been grown with Korin's knowledge (up until the story proper) or using his techniques, which is one of the reasons why The Monster is so absurdly huge and produces so many Beans that it deserves its nickname.
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** To provide an example: ''Fanfic/DoctorShikigamisMonster'' heavily implied that the only Senzu Bean plants on the Core Timeline were the ones on Korin's Tower and the titular Monster. This story mentions that there ''are'' other Senzu Bean plants out there, but they have not been grown with Korin's knowledge (up until the story proper) or using his techniques, which is one of the reasons why The Monster is so absurdly huge that it deserves its nickname.
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** To provide an example: ''Fanfic/DoctorShikigamisMonster'' heavily implied that the only Senzu Bean plants on the Core Timeline (and that is the ''whole planet'') were the ones on Korin's Tower and the titular Monster. This story mentions that there ''are'' other Senzu Bean plants out there, but they have not been grown with Korin's knowledge (up until the story proper) or using his techniques, which is one of the reasons why The Monster is so absurdly huge and produces so many Beans that it deserves its nickname.
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: To make a long story short, the version of the story that is on Deviant Art is the ''second'' draft of the story.
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: To make a long story short, the version of the story that is on Deviant Art is the ''second'' draft of the story.story.
** To provide an example: ''Fanfic/DoctorShikigamisMonster'' heavily implied that the only Senzu Bean plants on the Core Timeline were the ones on Korin's Tower and the titular Monster. This story mentions that there ''are'' other Senzu Bean plants out there, but they have not been grown with Korin's knowledge (up until the story proper) or using his techniques, which is one of the reasons why The Monster is so absurdly huge that it deserves its nickname.
** To provide an example: ''Fanfic/DoctorShikigamisMonster'' heavily implied that the only Senzu Bean plants on the Core Timeline were the ones on Korin's Tower and the titular Monster. This story mentions that there ''are'' other Senzu Bean plants out there, but they have not been grown with Korin's knowledge (up until the story proper) or using his techniques, which is one of the reasons why The Monster is so absurdly huge that it deserves its nickname.
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: To make a long story short, the version of the story that is on Deviant Art is the ''second'' draft of the story. The first draft was a bit ''too'' harsh with its TakeThat.
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: To make a long story short, the version of the story that is on Deviant Art is the ''second'' draft of the story. The first draft was a bit ''too'' harsh with its TakeThat.
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* Anvilicious: Mari's rant about how bad things like organized crime qualifies.
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* Anvilicious: Mari's rant about how bad things like organized crime qualifies.qualifies.
* AuthorsSavingThrow: To make a long story short, the version of the story that is on Deviant Art is the ''second'' draft of the story. The first draft was a bit ''too'' harsh with its TakeThat.
* AuthorsSavingThrow: To make a long story short, the version of the story that is on Deviant Art is the ''second'' draft of the story. The first draft was a bit ''too'' harsh with its TakeThat.
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* ParanoiaFuel: CHIMERA and PROGENY's crippling cyber-attack has left many people paranoid about the possibility of it happening again, and many tech-heroes are not allowed to use their abilities as a result.
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* ParanoiaFuel: CHIMERA and PROGENY's crippling cyber-attack has left many people paranoid Anvilicious: Mari's rant about the possibility of it happening again, and many tech-heroes are not allowed to use their abilities as a result.how bad things like organized crime qualifies.
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* ParanoiaFuel: CHIMERA and PROGENY's crippling cyber-attack has left many people paranoid about the possibility of it happening again, and many tech-heroes are not allowed to use their abilities as a result.
