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* In Episode 46, Vader Monster Torikagolar is disguised as a survival expert and uses a TV program to spread fearmongering among the children regarding the dangers of the 21st Century. Some of the kids, who happen to be regulars at the athletic club, decide to go on survival training to prove they can handle whatever the 21st Century throws at them.\\
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'''Instead''': She sets up a fake ransom exchange using the father of the beauty queens, expecting Akira to go and defend the one queen who has so far refused protection. While the plan does work, the team already suspected a trap and set up the means to disarm it. They may not have realized Desumasukular was actually after Akira, but it didn't matter. Their plan was generic enough that they would have saved the victim regardless.
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'''Instead''': She sets up a fake ransom exchange using the father of one of the beauty queens, expecting Akira to go and defend the one queen who has so far refused protection. While the plan does work, the team already suspected a trap and set up the means to disarm it. They may not have realized Desumasukular was actually after Akira, but it didn't matter. Their plan was generic enough that they would have saved the victim regardless.
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* In Episode 46, Vader Monster Torikagolar is disguised as a survival expert and uses a TV program to spread fearmongering among the children regarding the dangers of the 21st Century. Some of the kids, who happen to be regulars at the athletic club, decide to go on survival training to prove they can handle whatever the 21st Century throws at them.\\
'''You'd Expect''': That they'd let their parents or Denziman know, the latter especially because they work at the athletic club and the kids actually respect them as teachers. This way they can get some kind of chaperone who can help them better understand and succeed at the survival training.\\
'''Instead''': They decide to run away from home. Granted they sure make to keep well-prepared, but it turns out Vader found out about their idea and decided to punish them for their "defiance" by putting them through a harsher survival test, stealing their gear in the process.
'''You'd Expect''': That they'd let their parents or Denziman know, the latter especially because they work at the athletic club and the kids actually respect them as teachers. This way they can get some kind of chaperone who can help them better understand and succeed at the survival training.\\
'''Instead''': They decide to run away from home. Granted they sure make to keep well-prepared, but it turns out Vader found out about their idea and decided to punish them for their "defiance" by putting them through a harsher survival test, stealing their gear in the process.
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'''You'd Expect:''' The elderly gents, surely aware of the Zyurangers [[FriendToAllChildren affinity for children]], would at least give them a bare-bones explanation as to why waking up Burai is a bad thing. They'd at least count on the Zyurangers to try to persuade Ryota not to wake him up.\\
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'''You'd Expect:''' The elderly gents, surely aware of the Zyurangers Zyurangers' [[FriendToAllChildren affinity for children]], would at least give them a bare-bones explanation as to why waking up Burai is a bad thing. They'd at least count on the Zyurangers to try to persuade Ryota not to wake him up.\\
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'''You'd Expect:''' That the the monster would wrap its tongue around her, reel her in and eat her. It's already proven to be way stronger; she's dropped her weapon and the Rangers have no way of escaping once they are wrapped up. It wouldn't even have ended the series really, since by this time Burai was on the team and was always willing to come help when he was needed.\\
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'''You'd Expect:''' That the the monster would wrap its tongue around her, reel her in and eat her. It's already proven to be way stronger; she's dropped her weapon and the Rangers have no way of escaping once they are wrapped up. It wouldn't even have ended the series really, since by this time Burai was on the team and was always willing to come help when he was needed.\\
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'''Instead''': She goes to retreive Daigoro's stash at the athletic club the Denziman work at, which General Hedrer anticipated and had Arazinlar hide inside the bag.\\
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'''Instead''': She goes to retreive retrieve Daigoro's stash at the athletic club the Denziman work at, which General Hedrer anticipated and had Arazinlar hide inside the bag.\\
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'''Fortunately''': Arazinlar's scheme this time around was to take control of DaiDenzin for Vader, rather than destroy Denzi Land, a plan that proves useless since DaiDenzin has a failsafe that makes it so that only the Denziman can operate it.
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'''Fortunately''': Arazinlar's scheme this time around was to take control of DaiDenzin [=DaiDenzin=] for Vader, rather than destroy Denzi Land, a plan that proves useless since DaiDenzin [=DaiDenzin=] has a failsafe that makes it so that only the Denziman can operate it.
