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* Chapter 5: Wheaton becomes [[UrExample the first volunteer]] because the original mentors in this universe (the story came out pre-Literature/TheBalladOfSongbirdsAndSnakes) are rebel prisoners who get pardoned for their supposed treason when they mentor their first victor and his father is District 9's mentor. He wins, but President Lucius gets a massive EvilIsPetty and KickTheDog moment.

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* Chapter 5: Wheaton becomes [[UrExample the first volunteer]] because the original mentors in this universe (the story came out pre-Literature/TheBalladOfSongbirdsAndSnakes) are rebel prisoners who get pardoned for their supposed treason when they mentor their first victor and his father is District 9's mentor. He wins, but President Lucius gets a massive EvilIsPetty and KickTheDog moment.
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--->Behind her, Beetee [[ForWantOfANail used the distraction to race for a coil of wire sitting in the Cornucopia]].

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-->''The old man was executed six months after during the Victory Tour for Katniss Everdeen and Peeta Mellark. He was killed for whistling a four-note tune and raising three fingers in a salute.''

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-->''The -->The old man was executed six months after during the Victory Tour for Katniss Everdeen and Peeta Mellark. He was killed for whistling a four-note tune and raising three fingers in a salute.''



-->''The next day [Wheaton] received a letter saying his father had been fully pardoned of the crime of sedition, but had been executed for crimes committed during said sedition, including burglary, sabotage, and espionage.''

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-->''The -->The next day [Wheaton] received a letter saying his father had been fully pardoned of the crime of sedition, but had been executed for crimes committed during said sedition, including burglary, sabotage, and espionage.''



--->''A struggling actress, a reporter, and the escort from District 1.''

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--->''A --->A struggling actress, a reporter, and the escort from District 1.''



--->''As the footage ends, Coriolanus Snow closes his eyes, lays back on the stretcher, [[TheChessmaster and smiles]].''

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--->''As --->As the footage ends, Coriolanus Snow closes his eyes, lays back on the stretcher, [[TheChessmaster and smiles]].'' smiles]].



--->''My district's industry is beauty. [[SexSlave Men and women are not exempt from this.]] Snow was pleased, immensely pleased. The beautiful and deadly boys and girls from the halls of the [=DAEYD=] filled the personal security forces of Capitol officials, the training facilities, and, of course, the bacchanals and pleasure houses. The victors were reserved for those who Snow needed to charm, or who could afford to pay enough. It was my idea, but I let Snow think it was his.''

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--->''My --->My district's industry is beauty. [[SexSlave Men and women are not exempt from this.]] Snow was pleased, immensely pleased. The beautiful and deadly boys and girls from the halls of the [=DAEYD=] filled the personal security forces of Capitol officials, the training facilities, and, of course, the bacchanals and pleasure houses. The victors were reserved for those who Snow needed to charm, or who could afford to pay enough. It was my idea, but I let Snow think it was his.''



--->''The settlers in the Anasazi remained separated simply by culture, rather than open hatred. And this this the Capitol could not abide. The Games divide. The Games control. The games do not bring together. The healing of District 10 would meet the end of Danny and Elena's family. [Their children] were reaped the Second Quarter Quell.''

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--->''The --->The settlers in the Anasazi remained separated simply by culture, rather than open hatred. And this this the Capitol could not abide. The Games divide. The Games control. The games do not bring together. The healing of District 10 would meet the end of Danny and Elena's family. [Their children] were reaped the Second Quarter Quell.''



--->''Behind her, Beetee [[ForWantOfANail used the distraction to race for a coil of wire sitting in the Cornucopia]].''

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--->''Behind --->Behind her, Beetee [[ForWantOfANail used the distraction to race for a coil of wire sitting in the Cornucopia]].''



-->''Brutus lifted another spear and threw it. He didn't even follow its flight, his eyes drawn every so briefly to the edible insects station.''[[note]]Which is where Katniss spends time with Cecelia in ''Literature/CatchingFire''.[[/note]]\\
''"Aaron," he said. "My boy's name is Aaron."''

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-->''Brutus -->Brutus lifted another spear and threw it. He didn't even follow its flight, his eyes drawn every so briefly to the edible insects station.''[[note]]Which [[note]]Which is where Katniss spends time with Cecelia in ''Literature/CatchingFire''.[[/note]]\\
''"Aaron," "Aaron," he said. "My boy's name is Aaron."''"



-->''I stay there beneath the water until Cecelia Rheys is drowned.''

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-->''I -->I stay there beneath the water until Cecelia Rheys is drowned.''



-->''I jump out of reflex and then courtesy as Spindella Rheys sweeps into the room.

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-->''I -->I jump out of reflex and then courtesy as Spindella Rheys sweeps into the room.



-->''Ben Cooper had a drunken one-night stand with the chocolatier he'd always had a fancy for and even though Abram Mills looked nothing like him [[MamasBabyPapasMaybe he was never able to shake off the suspicion that his last victor might have also been his son]].''

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-->''Ben -->Ben Cooper had a drunken one-night stand with the chocolatier he'd always had a fancy for and even though Abram Mills looked nothing like him [[MamasBabyPapasMaybe he was never able to shake off the suspicion that his last victor might have also been his son]].''
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-->''As one, Thimble and his men turn towards Thread and the elite forces and fire.''

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-->''As -->As one, Thimble and his men turn towards Thread and the elite forces and fire.''



-->''And then the pieces begin to click in Mack's mind, because no ghost should look so sheepish.

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-->''And -->And then the pieces begin to click in Mack's mind, because no ghost should look so sheepish.



-->''As one, the Settlers rise from the dirt. From their packs and bags they pull out the weapons they smuggled on the march. Meat cleavers, butcher knives, [and] firearms that the Anasazi smuggled to them from the moment the Quell was announced. Every man, every woman, every child has something to fight with.''

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-->''As -->As one, the Settlers rise from the dirt. From their packs and bags they pull out the weapons they smuggled on the march. Meat cleavers, butcher knives, [and] firearms that the Anasazi smuggled to them from the moment the Quell was announced. Every man, every woman, every child has something to fight with.''with.

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* Chapter 5: Wheaton becomes [[UrExample the first volunteer]] because the original mentors in this universe (the story came out pre-Literature/TheBalladOfSongbirdsAndSnakes) are rebel prisoners who get pardoned for their supposed treason when they mentor their first victor. He wins, but President Lucius gets a massive EvilIsPetty and KickTheDog moment.

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* Chapter 5: Wheaton becomes [[UrExample the first volunteer]] because the original mentors in this universe (the story came out pre-Literature/TheBalladOfSongbirdsAndSnakes) are rebel prisoners who get pardoned for their supposed treason when they mentor their first victor.victor and his father is District 9's mentor. He wins, but President Lucius gets a massive EvilIsPetty and KickTheDog moment.
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* Chapter 5: Wheaton becomes [[UrExample the first volunteer]] because the original mentors in this universe (the story came out pre-Literature/TheBalladOfSongbirdsAndSnakes) are rebel prisoners who get pardons when they mentor their first tributes. He wins, but President Lucius gets a massive EvilIsPetty and KickTheDog moment.

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* Chapter 5: Wheaton becomes [[UrExample the first volunteer]] because the original mentors in this universe (the story came out pre-Literature/TheBalladOfSongbirdsAndSnakes) are rebel prisoners who get pardons pardoned for their supposed treason when they mentor their first tributes.victor. He wins, but President Lucius gets a massive EvilIsPetty and KickTheDog moment.

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--> '''Mags:''' [[TwoAliasesOneCharacter Commander Barabbas]].
--> '''The new president:''' Not an appropriate name anymore, I'm afraid. A shame, he was a good character. Please, Mags, sit.
--> '''Mags:''' I'll stand please, President Snow.

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--> '''Mags:''' -->'''Mags:''' [[TwoAliasesOneCharacter Commander Barabbas]].
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'''The new president:''' Not an appropriate name anymore, I'm afraid. A shame, he was a good character. Please, Mags, sit.
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'''Mags:''' I'll stand please, President Snow.


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* The first emergence of [[SplitPersonality Victoria]] after Cecelia falls into the river [[LiteralMetaphor in the most literal sense]].
-->''I stay there beneath the water until Cecelia Rheys is drowned.''
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* Chapter 37: Mags spends the chapter in a tenuous alliance with a peacekeeper named Barabbas as they investigate the murders of a victor and a politician. The chapter ends with a failed coup that nonetheless leads to a new presidency. Then she meets the young new president in a room full of roses, but doesn't recognize him without a disguise he wore earlier, until he makes a familiar smile and it dawns on her how thoroughly and disastrously she's been manipulated.
--> '''Mags:''' [[TwoAliasesOneCharacter Commander Barabbas]].
--> '''The new president:''' Not an appropriate name anymore, I'm afraid. A shame, he was a good character. Please, Mags, sit.
--> '''Mags:''' I'll stand please, President Snow.
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--> ''The next day [[Wheaton]] received a letter saying his father had been fully pardoned of the crime of sedition, but had been executed for crimes committed during said sedition, including burglary, sabotage, and espionage.''

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--> ''The -->''The next day [[Wheaton]] [Wheaton] received a letter saying his father had been fully pardoned of the crime of sedition, but had been executed for crimes committed during said sedition, including burglary, sabotage, and espionage.''



-->''My district's industry is beauty. [[SexSlave Men and women are not exempt from this.]] Snow was pleased, immensely pleased. The beautiful and deadly boys and girls from the halls of the [=DAEYD=] filled the personal security forces of Capitol officials, the training facilities, and, of course, the bacchanals and pleasure houses. The victors were reserved for those who Snow needed to charm, or who could afford to pay enough. It was my idea, but I let Snow think it was his.''

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-->''My --->''My district's industry is beauty. [[SexSlave Men and women are not exempt from this.]] Snow was pleased, immensely pleased. The beautiful and deadly boys and girls from the halls of the [=DAEYD=] filled the personal security forces of Capitol officials, the training facilities, and, of course, the bacchanals and pleasure houses. The victors were reserved for those who Snow needed to charm, or who could afford to pay enough. It was my idea, but I let Snow think it was his.''



--> ''The settlers in the Anasazi remained separated simply by culture, rather than open hatred. And this this the Capitol could not abide. The Games divide. The Games control. The games do not bring together. The healing of District 10 would meet the end of Danny and Elena's family. [Their children]] were reaped the Second Quarter Quell.''

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--> ''The --->''The settlers in the Anasazi remained separated simply by culture, rather than open hatred. And this this the Capitol could not abide. The Games divide. The Games control. The games do not bring together. The healing of District 10 would meet the end of Danny and Elena's family. [Their children]] children] were reaped the Second Quarter Quell.''



--> ''Behind her, Beetee [[ForWantOfANail used the distraction to race for a coil of wire sitting in the Cornucopia]].''

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--> ''Behind --->''Behind her, Beetee [[ForWantOfANail used the distraction to race for a coil of wire sitting in the Cornucopia]].''
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* Chapter 5: Wheaton becomes [[UrExample the first volunteer]] because the original mentors in this universe (the story came out pre-Literature/TheBalladOfSongbirdsAndSnakes) are rebel prisoners who get pardons when they mentor their first tributes. He wins, but President Lucius gets a massive EvilIsPetty and KickTheDog moment.
--> ''The next day [[Wheaton]] received a letter saying his father had been fully pardoned of the crime of sedition, but had been executed for crimes committed during said sedition, including burglary, sabotage, and espionage.''


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* Chapter 35:
** The ripples of Elena and Danny's StarCrossedLovers story seems to have a happy ending for both their family and their district, only for them to suffer a devastating blow in the last quarter of the chapter.
--> ''The settlers in the Anasazi remained separated simply by culture, rather than open hatred. And this this the Capitol could not abide. The Games divide. The Games control. The games do not bring together. The healing of District 10 would meet the end of Danny and Elena's family. [Their children]] were reaped the Second Quarter Quell.''
** Elena dies in the Third Quarter Quell thinking that she made a SenselessSacrifice, but the last words of the chapter show she's wrong.
--> ''Behind her, Beetee [[ForWantOfANail used the distraction to race for a coil of wire sitting in the Cornucopia]].''
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** Fans of ''The Victors Project'' who ''didn't'' read ''Fall into the River'' first might miss the significance of Brutus's line, but are more likely to experience a wham feeling in Cecelia's chapter of ''TVP''. She has sex with Brutus while suffering from a schizophrenic episode, right after they have a conversation about how the Capitol will stop selling her as a SexSlave [[GlorifiedSpermDonor if she gets pregnant again]]. One year later, Cecilia walks up to Brutus and hands him a picture of a dark-haired baby.

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** Fans of ''The Victors Project'' who ''didn't'' read ''Fall into the River'' first might miss the significance of Brutus's line, but are more likely to experience a wham feeling in Cecelia's chapter of ''TVP''. She has sex with Brutus while suffering from a schizophrenic episode, right after they have a conversation about how the Capitol will stop selling her as a SexSlave [[GlorifiedSpermDonor if she gets pregnant again]]. One year later, Cecilia Cecelia walks up to Brutus and hands him a picture of a dark-haired baby.
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-->'''Beetee:''' ''(inner monologue)'' The sky falls. The roof collapses. The sun goes out.

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-->'''Beetee:''' --->'''Beetee:''' ''(inner monologue)'' The sky falls. The roof collapses. The sun goes out.

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--> ''My district's industry is beauty. Men and women are not exempt from this. Snow was pleased, immensely pleased. The beautiful and deadly boys and girls from the halls of the [=DAEYD=] filled the personal security forces of Capitol officials, the training facilities, and, of course, the bacchanals and pleasure houses. The victors were reserved for those who Snow needed to charm, or who could afford to pay enough. It was my idea, but I let Snow think it was his.''

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--> ''My -->''My district's industry is beauty. [[SexSlave Men and women are not exempt from this. this.]] Snow was pleased, immensely pleased. The beautiful and deadly boys and girls from the halls of the [=DAEYD=] filled the personal security forces of Capitol officials, the training facilities, and, of course, the bacchanals and pleasure houses. The victors were reserved for those who Snow needed to charm, or who could afford to pay enough. It was my idea, but I let Snow think it was his.''




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* While Chapter 18 ends with Jason being captured by two Peacekeepers, the motive behind this is left unknown until two chapters later for the finale...
-->'''Jason:''' ''(narrating)'' It's the Giants' City. Oh gods, I'm in the arena.
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* Chapter 31:
** Luster starts out as TheFightingNarcissist and a self-centered but not completely unsympathetic victor. Then, after his victory, his exploitation of his district and loyalty to Snow become more clear and disturbing, building up to this line that cements him as one of the story's major villains.
--> ''My district's industry is beauty. Men and women are not exempt from this. Snow was pleased, immensely pleased. The beautiful and deadly boys and girls from the halls of the [=DAEYD=] filled the personal security forces of Capitol officials, the training facilities, and, of course, the bacchanals and pleasure houses. The victors were reserved for those who Snow needed to charm, or who could afford to pay enough. It was my idea, but I let Snow think it was his.''
** Luster's formidability as a partner to Snow (as opposed to being a mere SmugSnake) is shown with his observation that "Katniss Everdeen must be destroyed."
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* Chapter 4: TheReveal about the possible fate of Orchus, the victor who disappeared. Many old people in District 11 claimed to be Orchus decades later, and the one of them who may be telling the truth is a CanonCharacterAllAlong.
--> ''The old man was executed six months after during the Victory Tour for Katniss Everdeen and Peeta Mellark. He was killed for whistling a four-note tune and raising three fingers in a salute.''

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* Chapter 4: TheReveal about the possible fate of Orchus, the victor Victor who disappeared. Many old people in District 11 claimed to be Orchus decades later, and the one of them who may be telling the truth is a CanonCharacterAllAlong.
--> ''The -->''The old man was executed six months after during the Victory Tour for Katniss Everdeen and Peeta Mellark. He was killed for whistling a four-note tune and raising three fingers in a salute.''



* Chapter 64: As Gloss watches Halibut freak out over a dead tribute and shows a LackOfEmpathy, another victor tells him, "That was Hal's son."

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* Chapter 64: As Gloss watches Halibut freak out over a dead tribute and shows a LackOfEmpathy, another victor Victor tells him, "That was Hal's son."



* ''The Lumberjack and the Tree-Elf'' starts out with OCStandIn and future victor Blight living a hard life in a hostile community and wondering if he'll be reaped. Then, the actual reaping comes along, and the story takes a shocking turn when it ''isn't'' Blight whose name comes out of the reaping bowl.

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* ''The Lumberjack and the Tree-Elf'' starts out with OCStandIn and future victor Victor Blight living a hard life in a hostile community and wondering if he'll be reaped. Then, the actual reaping comes along, and the story takes a shocking turn when it ''isn't'' Blight whose name comes out of the reaping bowl.



--> '''Enobaria''': "When Tigellinus retires" is a joke among the cadets. It means something is likely to never happen. And I never told you about that. I had no reason to. You're a Two! No, you're more than that, you're one of us. You were at the Institute, you snake, you traitor!
* After Enobaria's games, The Speaker reveals his identity after being mortally wounded; that of a major character from ''Fall Into the River.''
--> '''The Speaker:''' My name is Brittanicus Romano. They...They called me Tanni.

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--> '''Enobaria''': -->'''Enobaria:''' "When Tigellinus retires" is a joke among the cadets. It means something is likely to never happen. And I never told you about that. I had no reason to. You're a Two! No, you're more than that, you're one of us. You were at the Institute, you snake, you traitor!
* After Enobaria's games, The Speaker reveals his identity after being mortally wounded; [[TwoAliasesOneCharacter that of a major character from from]] ''Fall Into the River.''
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River''.
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Speaker:''' My name is Brittanicus Romano. They...They called me Tanni.



--> ''Ben Cooper had a drunken one-night stand with the chocolatier he'd always had a fancy for and even though Abram Mills looked nothing like him he was never able to shake off the suspicion that his last victor might have also been his son.''


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--> ''Ben -->''Ben Cooper had a drunken one-night stand with the chocolatier he'd always had a fancy for and even though Abram Mills looked nothing like him [[MamasBabyPapasMaybe he was never able to shake off the suspicion that his last victor might have also been his son.''

son]].''



--> ''As one, Thimble and his men turn towards Thread and the elite forces and fire.''

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--> ''As -->''As one, Thimble and his men turn towards Thread and the elite forces and fire.''



* Chapter 10: The victims of the District 10 DeathMarch seemingly need TheCavalry to save them, but then reveal they've spent days faking frightened docility.
--> ''As one, the Settlers rise from the dirt. From their packs and bags they pull out the weapons they smuggled on the march. Meat cleavers, butcher knives, [and] firearms that the Anasazi smuggled to them from the moment the Quell was announced. Every man, every woman, every child has something to fight with.''

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* Chapter 10: The victims of the District 10 DeathMarch seemingly need TheCavalry to save them, but then [[ISurrenderSuckers reveal they've spent days faking frightened docility.
--> ''As
docility]].
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one, the Settlers rise from the dirt. From their packs and bags they pull out the weapons they smuggled on the march. Meat cleavers, butcher knives, [and] firearms that the Anasazi smuggled to them from the moment the Quell was announced. Every man, every woman, every child has something to fight with.''
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--> '''Enobaria''': "When Tigellinus retires" is a joke among the cadets. It means something is likely to never happen. And I never told you about that. I had no reason to. You're a Two! No, you're more than that, you're one of us. You are at the Institute, you snake, you traitor!

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--> '''Enobaria''': "When Tigellinus retires" is a joke among the cadets. It means something is likely to never happen. And I never told you about that. I had no reason to. You're a Two! No, you're more than that, you're one of us. You are were at the Institute, you snake, you traitor!
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* Chapter 5: Romulus Thread prepares a firing squad to massacre 1/10th of District 5's children, but the firing squad members display a sudden change of heart.
--> ''As one, Thimble and his men turn towards Thread and the elite forces and fire.''



-->''And then the pieces begin to click in Mack's mind, because no ghost should look so sheepish.

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-->''And then the pieces begin to click in Mack's mind, because no ghost should look so sheepish.sheepish.
* Chapter 10: The victims of the District 10 DeathMarch seemingly need TheCavalry to save them, but then reveal they've spent days faking frightened docility.
--> ''As one, the Settlers rise from the dirt. From their packs and bags they pull out the weapons they smuggled on the march. Meat cleavers, butcher knives, [and] firearms that the Anasazi smuggled to them from the moment the Quell was announced. Every man, every woman, every child has something to fight with.''

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* Chapter 4: TheReveal about the possible fate of Orchus, the victor who disappeared. Many old people in District 11 claimed to be Orchus decades later, and the one of them who may be telling the truth is a CanonCharacterAllAlong.
--> ''The old man was executed six months after during the Victory Tour for Katniss Everdeen and Peeta Mellark. He was killed for whistling a four-note tune and raising three fingers in a salute.''



* Chapter 25: A RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil reveal when Caesar's predecessor and his aides watch the Games as Virtus's treacherous ally Lucious is "defeated in every way woman can be defeated."



* Chapter 65: Cashmere reveals to Beetee that she knows they are planning to break Katniss and Peeta out of the Third Quarter Quell arena, which gets lampshaded by Beetee's reaction.

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* Chapter 65: 61: Two in quick succession. The girl from District 1 moves in to make a seemingly easy kill when suddenly, without warning, "the smile across her throat is far redder [than her lipstick] as a curtain of scarlet courses down." The girl from 1's killer is named a few paragraphs later. "Johanna Mason. District 7.'"
* Chapter 62: The motive behind Crystal's suicide when she's found with a reaping slip that says "It's you", ''before'' the third Quarter Quell is even announced, indicating a lot of awareness about the twist beforehand.
* Chapter 64: As Gloss watches Halibut freak out over a dead tribute and shows a LackOfEmpathy, another victor tells him, "That was Hal's son."
* Chapter 65:
** Cashmere telling Beetee "I know you were the one who warned Crystal she was going into the Quell."
** A character from the last chapter has a DroppedABridgeOnHim fate revealed when Beetee tells Cashmere, "I know Enobaria killed your father."
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!!The Bonds of Blood
* The Speaker, Enobaria's Marauder captor in the weeks before she becomes a tribute, has a SayingTooMuch moment.
--> '''Enobaria''': "When Tigellinus retires" is a joke among the cadets. It means something is likely to never happen. And I never told you about that. I had no reason to. You're a Two! No, you're more than that, you're one of us. You are at the Institute, you snake, you traitor!
* After Enobaria's games, The Speaker reveals his identity after being mortally wounded; that of a major character from ''Fall Into the River.''
--> '''The Speaker:''' My name is Brittanicus Romano. They...They called me Tanni.

!!Secrets
* Ben abruptly and determinedly coming out of retirement to mentor Abram in the main story is cast in a new light by his secret, which concerns Abram's mother.
--> ''Ben Cooper had a drunken one-night stand with the chocolatier he'd always had a fancy for and even though Abram Mills looked nothing like him he was never able to shake off the suspicion that his last victor might have also been his son.''

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** Ahenobarbus telling the Victors, "President Lucius is dead."
** Cashmere reveals to Beetee that she knows they are planning to break Katniss and Peeta out of the Third Quarter Quell arena, which gets lampshaded by Beetee's reaction.
--->'''Beetee (inner monologue):''' The sky falls. The roof collapses. The sun goes out.
** When [[spoiler:Jade]] is put on trial during Coin's ReignOfTerror, the prosecutor drops this bombshell about the fates of several other characters ([[spoiler:although one is FakingTheDead]]).
-->'''Letts Bolger:''' [[LastOfTheirKind As the last living victor]] of District [[spoiler:One]], [[spoiler:Ms. Boleyn]] is-\\
'''[[spoiler:Jade]]:''' [[ThisCannotBe The last? That's...impossible. I can't be...]]
** For people who read ''Fall into the River'' before ''The Victors Project'', the epilogue of the former story briefly alludes to the "famous father" of Cecelia's son Aaron and how she refuses to let her friends and family talk about him. Chapter 49 of ''The Victors Project'' ends with Brutus and Peeta having a conversation in training gym. Brutus confides in Peeta that he has a son whose mother won't let him see the boy.
--->''Brutus lifted another spear and threw it. He didn't even follow its flight, his eyes drawn every so briefly to the edible insects station.''[[note]]Which is where Katniss spends time with Cecelia in ''Literature/CatchingFire''.[[/note]]\\

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As a long fanfic spanning four novels and three short stories, having {{Wham Line}}s throughout it is most likely expected.

!!The Victors Project
* Chapter 22:
** Thisbe Everett seems to go insane after winning the 21st Hunger Games, telling her mentor that a reporter turned into a wraith, the District 1 escort claims that dead tributes want to kill her, and a tongue-less Avox talked to her. However, one simple line reveals that she's really the victim of {{gaslighting}} when the third-person narrator talks about a bank account showing suspicious payments to three people.
--->''A struggling actress, a reporter, and the escort from District 1.''
** Thisbe's chapter ends with her seemingly losing her mind and massacring a banquet full of prominent Capitol citizens before being killed in a struggle with a random intern who finds himself on the fast track to promotion. The last lines of the chapter cast the intern's scene into an entirely new light, and reveal the culprit behind the {{gaslighting}}.
--->''As the footage ends, Coriolanus Snow closes his eyes, lays back on the stretcher, [[TheChessmaster and smiles]].''
* Chapter 33:
Ahenobarbus telling the Victors, "President Lucius is dead."
** Cashmere reveals to Beetee that she knows they are planning to break Katniss and Peeta out of the Third Quarter Quell arena, which gets lampshaded by * Chapter 36: Beetee's reaction.
--->'''Beetee (inner monologue):'''
investigation into the assassin who tried to kill Katniss takes an alarming turn when they find the bank account that the assassin's payment came from.
-->'''Beetee:''' It's [=PanemTT665=].\\
'''Enobaria:''' And that is...?\\
'''Beetee:''' [=PanemTT665=] is the Victor's fund.
The sky falls. money came from a Victor's salary ... The roof collapses. The sun goes out.
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blood money on Katniss's head was paid by a Victor. It's one of us.
* Chapter 50:
When [[spoiler:Jade]] Jade is put on trial during Coin's ReignOfTerror, the prosecutor drops this bombshell about the fates of several other characters ([[spoiler:although (although one is FakingTheDead]]).
FakingTheDead).
-->'''Letts Bolger:''' [[LastOfTheirKind As the last living victor]] of District [[spoiler:One]], [[spoiler:Ms. Boleyn]] One, Ms. Boleyn is-\\
'''[[spoiler:Jade]]:''' '''Jade:''' [[ThisCannotBe The last? That's...impossible. I can't be...]]
** * Chapter 52: Lyme, who grew up in a rebel village, kills Maxx, her ParentalSubstitute, so Boudicca will let her become a tribute. Then, after she wins the 51st Hunger Games, she's shown at a wake for Maxx, whose son utters this line.
-->'''Mesa:''' [[MyDeathIsOnlyTheBeginning This is what he wanted]]. Making [[TheMole one of ours a Victor]].
*
For people who read ''Fall into the River'' before ''The Victors Project'', the epilogue of the former story briefly alludes to the "famous father" of Cecelia's son Aaron and how she refuses to let her friends and family talk about him. Chapter 49 of ''The Victors Project'' ends with Brutus and Peeta having a conversation in training gym. Brutus confides in Peeta that he has a son whose mother won't let him see the boy.
--->''Brutus -->''Brutus lifted another spear and threw it. He didn't even follow its flight, his eyes drawn every so briefly to the edible insects station.''[[note]]Which is where Katniss spends time with Cecelia in ''Literature/CatchingFire''.[[/note]]\\



*** Fans of ''The Victors Project'' who ''didn't'' read ''Fall into the River'' first might miss the significance of Brutus's line, but are more likely to experience a wham feeling in Cecelia's chapter of ''TVP''. She has sex with Brutus while suffering from a schizophrenic episode, right after they have a conversation about how the Capitol will stop selling her as a SexSlave [[GlorifiedSpermDonor if she gets pregnant again]]. One year later, Cecilia walks up to Brutus and hands him a picture of a dark-haired baby.
---->'''Cecelia:''' I named him Aaron. You can keep the picture. I'll bring a new one every year. But if you ever try to contact my son, or threaten to disrupt his life in any way, I'll kill you myself.
** Lyme, who grew up in a rebel village, kills Maxx, her ParentalSubstitute, so Boudicca will let her become a tribute. Then, after she wins the 51st Hunger Games, she's shown at a wake for Maxx, whose son utters this line.
--->'''Mesa:''' [[MyDeathIsOnlyTheBeginning This is what he wanted]]. Making [[TheMole one of ours a victor.]]
** ''The Lumberjack and the Tree-Elf'' starts out with OCStandIn and future victor Blight living a hard life in a hostile community and wondering if he'll be reaped. Then, the actual reaping comes along, and the story takes a shocking turn when it ''isn't'' Blight whose name comes out of the reaping bowl.
--->'''Tutti Marble:''' Merrill Mason!\\

to:

*** ** Fans of ''The Victors Project'' who ''didn't'' read ''Fall into the River'' first might miss the significance of Brutus's line, but are more likely to experience a wham feeling in Cecelia's chapter of ''TVP''. She has sex with Brutus while suffering from a schizophrenic episode, right after they have a conversation about how the Capitol will stop selling her as a SexSlave [[GlorifiedSpermDonor if she gets pregnant again]]. One year later, Cecilia walks up to Brutus and hands him a picture of a dark-haired baby.
---->'''Cecelia:''' --->'''Cecelia:''' I named him Aaron. You can keep the picture. I'll bring a new one every year. But if you ever try to contact my son, or threaten to disrupt his life in any way, I'll kill you myself.
** Lyme, who grew up in a rebel village, kills Maxx, her ParentalSubstitute, so Boudicca will let her become a tribute. Then, after * Chapter 65: Cashmere reveals to Beetee that she wins knows they are planning to break Katniss and Peeta out of the 51st Hunger Games, she's shown at a wake for Maxx, whose son utters this line.
--->'''Mesa:''' [[MyDeathIsOnlyTheBeginning This is what he wanted]]. Making [[TheMole one of ours a victor.]]
**
Third Quarter Quell arena, which gets lampshaded by Beetee's reaction.
-->'''Beetee:''' ''(inner monologue)'' The sky falls. The roof collapses. The sun goes out.

!!The Lumberjack and the Tree-Elf
*
''The Lumberjack and the Tree-Elf'' starts out with OCStandIn and future victor Blight living a hard life in a hostile community and wondering if he'll be reaped. Then, the actual reaping comes along, and the story takes a shocking turn when it ''isn't'' Blight whose name comes out of the reaping bowl.
--->'''Tutti -->'''Tutti Marble:''' Merrill Mason!\\



** TheReveal that [[spoiler:Cecelia's stepmother]] is the leader of the District 8 rebels.
--->''I jump out of reflex and then courtesy as [[spoiler:Spindella Rheys]] sweeps into the room.
** A ConnectedAllAlong reveal after Cecelia's victory.
--->'''Cora:''' Do you remember the story I told you before the interview? About why I was voted into the Quarter Quell?\\

to:

**
!!Fall Into the River
*
TheReveal that [[spoiler:Cecelia's stepmother]] Cecelia's stepmother is the leader of the District 8 rebels.
--->''I -->''I jump out of reflex and then courtesy as [[spoiler:Spindella Rheys]] Spindella Rheys sweeps into the room.
** * A ConnectedAllAlong reveal after Cecelia's victory.
--->'''Cora:''' -->'''Cora:''' Do you remember the story I told you before the interview? About why I was voted into the Quarter Quell?\\



'''[[spoiler:Spindella]]:''' His daughter, and my sister.
** The epilogue of ''Fall Into the River'' has [[spoiler:Cora]] being tortured for rebel names and naming a minor character who previously seemed like the exact opposite of a rebel sympathizer.
--->'''[[spoiler:Cora]]:''' [[spoiler:Larissa! Larissa Farrar!]]
** In Chapter 7 of ''Arrow'', the dead tributes of District 7 seemingly return to life to vengefully help slaughter the last peacekeepers in the district. The [[spoiler:ScoobyDooHoax nature of this event is revealed when Connor suddenly frowns and starts yelling at one of the young "ghosts", to Mack's confusion.]]
--->''And then the pieces begin to click in Mack's mind, because [[spoiler:no ghost should look so sheepish.]]
** Thisbe Everett seems to go insane after winning the 21st Hunger Games, telling her mentor that a reporter turned into a wraith, the District 1 escort claims that dead tributes want to kill her, and a tongue-less avox talked to her. However, one simple line reveals that she's really the victim of {{gaslighting}} when the third-person narrator talks about a bank account showing suspicious payments to three people.
--->''A struggling actress, a reporter, and the escort from District 1.''
*** Thisbe's chapter ends with her seemingly losing her mind and massacring a banquet full of prominent Capitol citizens before being killed in a struggle with a random intern who finds himself on the fast track to promotion. The last lines of the chapter cast the intern's scene into an entirely new light, and reveal the culprit behind the {{gaslighting}}.
--->''As the footage ends, Coriolanus Snow closes his eyes, lays back on the stretcher, [[TheChessmaster and smiles]].''
** Beetee's investigation into the assassin who tried to kill Katniss takes an alarming turn when they find the bank account that the assassin's payment came from.
--->'''Beetee:''' It's [=PanemTT665=].\\
'''Enobaria:''' And that is...?\\
'''Beetee:''' [=PanemTT665=] is the Victor's fund. The money came from a Victor's salary ... The blood money on Katniss's head was paid by a Victor. It's one of us.

to:

'''[[spoiler:Spindella]]:''' '''Spindella:''' His daughter, and my sister.
** * The epilogue of ''Fall Into the River'' has [[spoiler:Cora]] Cora being tortured for rebel names and naming a minor character who previously seemed like the exact opposite of a rebel sympathizer.
--->'''[[spoiler:Cora]]:''' [[spoiler:Larissa! -->'''Cora:''' Larissa! Larissa Farrar!]]
**
Farrar!

!!Arrow
*
In Chapter 7 of ''Arrow'', the dead tributes of District 7 seemingly return to life to vengefully help slaughter the last peacekeepers in the district. The [[spoiler:ScoobyDooHoax ScoobyDooHoax nature of this event is revealed when Connor suddenly frowns and starts yelling at one of the young "ghosts", to Mack's confusion.]]
--->''And
confusion.
-->''And
then the pieces begin to click in Mack's mind, because [[spoiler:no no ghost should look so sheepish.]]
** Thisbe Everett seems to go insane after winning the 21st Hunger Games, telling her mentor that a reporter turned into a wraith, the District 1 escort claims that dead tributes want to kill her, and a tongue-less avox talked to her. However, one simple line reveals that she's really the victim of {{gaslighting}} when the third-person narrator talks about a bank account showing suspicious payments to three people.
--->''A struggling actress, a reporter, and the escort from District 1.''
*** Thisbe's chapter ends with her seemingly losing her mind and massacring a banquet full of prominent Capitol citizens before being killed in a struggle with a random intern who finds himself on the fast track to promotion. The last lines of the chapter cast the intern's scene into an entirely new light, and reveal the culprit behind the {{gaslighting}}.
--->''As the footage ends, Coriolanus Snow closes his eyes, lays back on the stretcher, [[TheChessmaster and smiles]].''
** Beetee's investigation into the assassin who tried to kill Katniss takes an alarming turn when they find the bank account that the assassin's payment came from.
--->'''Beetee:''' It's [=PanemTT665=].\\
'''Enobaria:''' And that is...?\\
'''Beetee:''' [=PanemTT665=] is the Victor's fund. The money came from a Victor's salary ... The blood money on Katniss's head was paid by a Victor. It's one of us.
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** Ahenobarbus telling the Victors, "President Lucius is dead."
** Cashmere reveals to Beetee that she knows they are planning to break Katniss and Peeta out of the Third Quarter Quell arena, which gets lampshaded by Beetee's reaction.
--->'''Beetee (inner monologue):''' The sky falls. The roof collapses. The sun goes out.
** When [[spoiler:Jade]] is put on trial during Coin's ReignOfTerror, the prosecutor drops this bombshell about the fates of several other characters ([[spoiler:although one is FakingTheDead]]).
-->'''Letts Bolger:''' [[LastOfTheirKind As the last living victor]] of District [[spoiler:One]], [[spoiler:Ms. Boleyn]] is-\\
'''[[spoiler:Jade]]:''' [[ThisCannotBe The last? That's...impossible. I can't be...]]
** For people who read ''Fall into the River'' before ''The Victors Project'', the epilogue of the former story briefly alludes to the "famous father" of Cecelia's son Aaron and how she refuses to let her friends and family talk about him. Chapter 49 of ''The Victors Project'' ends with Brutus and Peeta having a conversation in training gym. Brutus confides in Peeta that he has a son whose mother won't let him see the boy.
--->''Brutus lifted another spear and threw it. He didn't even follow its flight, his eyes drawn every so briefly to the edible insects station.''[[note]]Which is where Katniss spends time with Cecelia in ''Literature/CatchingFire''.[[/note]]\\
''"Aaron," he said. "My boy's name is Aaron."''
*** Fans of ''The Victors Project'' who ''didn't'' read ''Fall into the River'' first might miss the significance of Brutus's line, but are more likely to experience a wham feeling in Cecelia's chapter of ''TVP''. She has sex with Brutus while suffering from a schizophrenic episode, right after they have a conversation about how the Capitol will stop selling her as a SexSlave [[GlorifiedSpermDonor if she gets pregnant again]]. One year later, Cecilia walks up to Brutus and hands him a picture of a dark-haired baby.
---->'''Cecelia:''' I named him Aaron. You can keep the picture. I'll bring a new one every year. But if you ever try to contact my son, or threaten to disrupt his life in any way, I'll kill you myself.
** Lyme, who grew up in a rebel village, kills Maxx, her ParentalSubstitute, so Boudicca will let her become a tribute. Then, after she wins the 51st Hunger Games, she's shown at a wake for Maxx, whose son utters this line.
--->'''Mesa:''' [[MyDeathIsOnlyTheBeginning This is what he wanted]]. Making [[TheMole one of ours a victor.]]
** ''The Lumberjack and the Tree-Elf'' starts out with OCStandIn and future victor Blight living a hard life in a hostile community and wondering if he'll be reaped. Then, the actual reaping comes along, and the story takes a shocking turn when it ''isn't'' Blight whose name comes out of the reaping bowl.
--->'''Tutti Marble:''' Merrill Mason!\\
'''Burgen Gavin:''' [[GotVolunteered We volunteer! We volunteer to compete in the Hunger Games. My son, Blight Gavin, volunteers for the Hunger Games.]]
** TheReveal that [[spoiler:Cecelia's stepmother]] is the leader of the District 8 rebels.
--->''I jump out of reflex and then courtesy as [[spoiler:Spindella Rheys]] sweeps into the room.
** A ConnectedAllAlong reveal after Cecelia's victory.
--->'''Cora:''' Do you remember the story I told you before the interview? About why I was voted into the Quarter Quell?\\
'''Cecelia:''' Your father was a tax collector. He came to collect from the tailor. The tailor resisted and your father accidentally killed his daughter. \\
'''[[spoiler:Spindella]]:''' His daughter, and my sister.
** The epilogue of ''Fall Into the River'' has [[spoiler:Cora]] being tortured for rebel names and naming a minor character who previously seemed like the exact opposite of a rebel sympathizer.
--->'''[[spoiler:Cora]]:''' [[spoiler:Larissa! Larissa Farrar!]]
** In Chapter 7 of ''Arrow'', the dead tributes of District 7 seemingly return to life to vengefully help slaughter the last peacekeepers in the district. The [[spoiler:ScoobyDooHoax nature of this event is revealed when Connor suddenly frowns and starts yelling at one of the young "ghosts", to Mack's confusion.]]
--->''And then the pieces begin to click in Mack's mind, because [[spoiler:no ghost should look so sheepish.]]
** Thisbe Everett seems to go insane after winning the 21st Hunger Games, telling her mentor that a reporter turned into a wraith, the District 1 escort claims that dead tributes want to kill her, and a tongue-less avox talked to her. However, one simple line reveals that she's really the victim of {{gaslighting}} when the third-person narrator talks about a bank account showing suspicious payments to three people.
--->''A struggling actress, a reporter, and the escort from District 1.''
*** Thisbe's chapter ends with her seemingly losing her mind and massacring a banquet full of prominent Capitol citizens before being killed in a struggle with a random intern who finds himself on the fast track to promotion. The last lines of the chapter cast the intern's scene into an entirely new light, and reveal the culprit behind the {{gaslighting}}.
--->''As the footage ends, Coriolanus Snow closes his eyes, lays back on the stretcher, [[TheChessmaster and smiles]].''
** Beetee's investigation into the assassin who tried to kill Katniss takes an alarming turn when they find the bank account that the assassin's payment came from.
--->'''Beetee:''' It's [=PanemTT665=].\\
'''Enobaria:''' And that is...?\\
'''Beetee:''' [=PanemTT665=] is the Victor's fund. The money came from a Victor's salary ... The blood money on Katniss's head was paid by a Victor. It's one of us.

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