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* TheBadGuyWins: Bugs, annoyed by Red's interruptions (and her overall obnoxious behavior), climbs down the pile of stuff he's making the Wolf hold over a shovelful of coals and shuffle it around so it's now with Red split over the coals holding everything. The two then watch Red about to get 'redder', Bugs happily sharing bites of a carrot with the Wolf.
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* TheBadGuyWins: Bugs, annoyed by Red's interruptions (and her overall obnoxious behavior), climbs down the pile of stuff he's making the Wolf hold over a shovelful of coals and shuffle shuffles it around so it's now with Red split over the coals holding everything. The two then watch Red about to get 'redder', Bugs happily sharing bites of a carrot with the Wolf.
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* TheBadGuyWins: Bugs, annoyed by Red's interruptions (and her overall obnoxious behavior), offers a truce with the Wolf if he agrees to switch places with Red so that she can fall onto red hot coals as punishment for her behavior. The Wolf happily accepts this, and as they watch Red about to get 'redder', Bugs happily shares a carrot with the Wolf.
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* TheBadGuyWins: Bugs, annoyed by Red's interruptions (and her overall obnoxious behavior), offers a truce with climbs down the pile of stuff he's making the Wolf if he agrees to switch places hold over a shovelful of coals and shuffle it around so it's now with Red so that she can fall onto red hot split over the coals as punishment for her behavior. holding everything. The Wolf happily accepts this, and as they two then watch Red about to get 'redder', Bugs happily shares sharing bites of a carrot with the Wolf.
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* TheLastStraw: There's a literal one and metaphorical one--Bugs is about to add the ''literal'' last straw on the pile the wolf is holding while perched over a fire when obnoxious Red interrupts to ask about the Wolf's big Nose...which to Bugs is the ''metaphorical'' last straw.
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* TheLastStraw: There's a literal one and metaphorical one--Bugs is about to add the ''literal'' last straw on the pile the wolf is holding while perched over a fire when obnoxious Red interrupts to ask about the Wolf's big Nose...Grandma just one more thing...which to Bugs is the ''metaphorical'' last straw.
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* NeverMessWithGranny: Though unseen, Red's grandmother is implied to be a Rosie the Riveter type who was out working a "swing" shift at Lockheed [an aircraft manufacturing company, now merged with rival Martin Marietta to create Lockheed Martin].
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* NeverMessWithGranny: Though unseen, Red's grandmother is implied to be a Rosie the Riveter type who was out working a "swing" shift at Lockheed [an (an aircraft manufacturing company, now merged with rival Martin Marietta to create Lockheed Martin].Martin).
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** Red's voice is inspired by Cass Daley, a comic actress from screen and radio.
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** Red's voice is inspired by Cass Daley, a comic comedic actress from screen and radio.
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* RoadSignReversal: The wolf sends Red on the long way to Grandma's house.
* RumpRoast: Bugs pokes the Wolf in the butt with a hot coal from the fireplace, and as he [[PainPoweredLeap jumps up in pain]], Bugs lays down a whole shovelful of them underneath him. The Wolf manages to do a split between two chairs to avoid the coals, so Bugs starts piling up stuff on top of him to weigh him down. When Red interrupts the gag, Bugs--knowing he'll hate himself in the morning for it but doing it anyways--decides to have her switch places with the Wolf, putting her over the coals holding everything.
* RumpRoast: Bugs pokes the Wolf in the butt with a hot coal from the fireplace, and as he [[PainPoweredLeap jumps up in pain]], Bugs lays down a whole shovelful of them underneath him. The Wolf manages to do a split between two chairs to avoid the coals, so Bugs starts piling up stuff on top of him to weigh him down. When Red interrupts the gag, Bugs--knowing he'll hate himself in the morning for it but doing it anyways--decides to have her switch places with the Wolf, putting her over the coals holding everything.
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* RoadSignReversal: The wolf sends Red on the long way to Grandma's house.
house, which weaves around an entire mountain. Funny enough this only gives him enough time to read the note Grandma left on the door, change clothes, and kick some other wolves out of the bed.
* RumpRoast: Bugs pokes the Wolf in the butt with a hot coal from the fireplace, and as he [[PainPoweredLeap jumps up in pain]], Bugs lays down a whole shovelful of them underneath him. The Wolf manages to do a split between two chairs to avoid the coals, so Bugs starts piling up stuff on top of him to weigh him down. When Red interrupts the gag,Bugs--knowing Bugs--saying he'll hate himself in the morning for it but doing it anyways--decides to have make her switch places with the Wolf, putting her over the coals holding everything.
* RumpRoast: Bugs pokes the Wolf in the butt with a hot coal from the fireplace, and as he [[PainPoweredLeap jumps up in pain]], Bugs lays down a whole shovelful of them underneath him. The Wolf manages to do a split between two chairs to avoid the coals, so Bugs starts piling up stuff on top of him to weigh him down. When Red interrupts the gag,
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* StopCopyingMe: Bugs mimics the Wolf to annoy him, only to trick the Wolf into mimicking himself, and eventually lead into a rousing rip-roaring rendition of "Put On Your Old Grey Bonnet"--letting Bugs hold up a sign saying "Silly, isn't he?" (A gag reused from "Heckling Hare", and later repeated in "Stage Door Cartoon" and "WesternAnimation/HareWayToTheStars").
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* StopCopyingMe: Bugs mimics the Wolf to annoy him, only to trick the Wolf into mimicking himself, and eventually lead into a rousing rip-roaring rendition of "Put On Your Old Grey Bonnet"--letting Bonnet" complete with dancing--letting Bugs hold up a sign saying "Silly, isn't he?" (A gag reused from "Heckling Hare", and later repeated in "Stage Door Cartoon" and "WesternAnimation/HareWayToTheStars").
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* TheUnreveal: Red has already questioned the wolf on his big eyes, big nose, big ears and sharp teeth, and one wonders what she was planning to ask next when she interrupted for the last time.
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* TheUnreveal: Red has already questioned the wolf on his big eyes, big nose, big ears and sharp teeth, and one wonders what she was planning to ask Grandma next when she interrupted for the last time.
