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* CrapsackWorld: Most of the setting takes place in a man-made national-scale landfill, known as [[ExactlyWhatitSaysontheTin Landfill]], which also doubles as an inhabited city. A bit of an InvertedTrope, as the residents don't typically resent their current state, having lived there for so long.
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* CrapsackWorld: Most of the setting takes place in a man-made national-scale landfill, known as [[ExactlyWhatitSaysontheTin [[ExactlyWhatitSaysOnTheTin Landfill]], which also doubles as an inhabited city. A bit of an InvertedTrope, as the residents don't typically resent their current state, having lived there for so long.
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* TheSyndicate: EC0rps, the shady-yet-predictable anti-industrial organization Janus is affiliated to.
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* TheSyndicate: EC0rps, [=EC0rps=], the shady-yet-predictable anti-industrial organization Janus is affiliated to.
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At some point in time, industrialization has turned a once-lush-green nation into its own public trash can. Tables, classrooms, schools, and even whole towns are flooded with litter.
But if you were a hyper-stressed, violent, cleanfreak high-school girl, what would you do to make a difference?
But if you were a hyper-stressed, violent, cleanfreak high-school girl, what would you do to make a difference?
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At some point in time, industrialization has turned a once-lush-green nation into its own public trash can. Tables, classrooms, schools, and even whole towns are flooded with litter. \n But if you were a hyper-stressed, violent, cleanfreak high-school girl, what would you do to make a difference?
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* InSeriesNickname: Janus's preferred nickname for [[TomboyishSidetails Milan]] is "Short-hair".
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* InSeriesNickname: Janus's preferred nickname for [[TomboyishSidetails [[BoyishShortHair Milan]] is "Short-hair".
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* TheSyndicate: EC0rps, the shady-yet-predictable anti-industrial organization Janus is affiliated to.
* TomboyishSidetails: Milan has two tails that reach her chin. [[spoiler:Only one now, as Janus managed to shave off the other, with his final strike.]]
* TomboyishSidetails: Milan has two tails that reach her chin. [[spoiler:Only one now, as Janus managed to shave off the other, with his final strike.]]
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* TheSyndicate: EC0rps, the shady-yet-predictable anti-industrial organization Janus is affiliated to.
* TomboyishSidetails: Milan has two tails that reach her chin. [[spoiler:Only one now, as Janus managed to shave off the other, with his final strike.]]to.
* TomboyishSidetails: Milan has two tails that reach her chin. [[spoiler:Only one now, as Janus managed to shave off the other, with his final strike.]]
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* InSeriesNickname: Janus's preferred nickname for [[TomboyishSidetails Milan]] is "Short-hair".
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* TheSyndicate: ECOrps, the anti-industrial organization Janus is affiliated to.
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* TheSyndicate: ECOrps, EC0rps, the shady-yet-predictable anti-industrial organization Janus is affiliated to.to.
* TomboyishSidetails: Milan has two tails that reach her chin. [[spoiler:Only one now, as Janus managed to shave off the other, with his final strike.]]
* TomboyishSidetails: Milan has two tails that reach her chin. [[spoiler:Only one now, as Janus managed to shave off the other, with his final strike.]]
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* TheSyndicate: ECOrps, the anti-industrial organization Janus is affiliated to.
